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Beyond the Door Chapter 4: Beyond the Burrow Door
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Beyond the Door

1: Beyond the Library Door

2: Beyond the Study Door

3: Beyond the Second-Best-Guestroom-with-Green-Silk-Wallpaper Door

4: Beyond the Burrow Door

5: Beyond Miss Granger's Door

6: Beyond the Kitchen Door

7: Beyond Several Bedroom Doors

Beyond the Burrow Door

Beyond the Door

Chapter 4 of 7

Ladymage Samiko

Lucius and Severus make a public statement… in a manner of speaking.

Humor Romance Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 1,091 Words 7 Chapters Complete
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The party was meant to be small; how those two had gotten in was beyond Ron’s comprehension.

“Happy Birthday!”

“Open mine first!” Ron urged.

“Severus and I have both brought a small honorarium, Miss Granger,” Lucius interjected smoothly, Weasley’s antics inspiring a disdainful eyebrow.

“Why not?” Hermione grinned, adding flippantly, “I enjoy getting presents from strange men!” She neatly slid silver ribbon from Severus’s box. With an amused expression at the contents, she set it aside and opened Lucius’s.

“Well?” Ginny demanded. “Show!”

Dead silence followed as Hermione displayed the miniscule lace brassière from Severus and matching knickers from Lucius.


ANs: Written for the GS100 'movie' challenge, and inspired by the line from 'Clue': “Why not? I enjoy getting presents from strange men.” (After all, who could be stranger than those two? (^_^)) So, a little something to be tacked on to the 'Door' series.

Hope you enjoyed and, as always, a little token in the review box is much appreciated.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Beyond the Door

42 Reviews  |  6.33/10 Average

10/10

Annabun

Cute! I love how Lucius is so blind as to not see the obvious in front of him - and how these flashbacks give Hermione and Severus an edge they so often aren't allowed to have.

And Draco? Seems to be handling things rather well. Sensibly. And with reasonable (silk) expectations :-)

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snapify52

love it!
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Okay, specifically, I appreciate the interesting way you've unveiled the relationships between HG SS and dear Mr. LM. Also, the interesting luxurious gifts of the wizarding world.

10/10

indigo_rose

Loved this look at how it all began!  How typical of Lucius to send a letter as though he were conducting inquiries for a business merger--wonder if he asked for references? 

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Mazzy

I don't get why Lucius would "think Hermione is a frustrated virgin"?? If he's already having threesomes with ss&hg then why would Severus interpret it that way??

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Mazzy

Whoa! I can't imagine Hermione advertising her relationship to her friends. Can't wait to see this reaction.

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Mazzy

I think one of those photos might end up framed on Hermione's wall. :)

10/10

Mazzy

:) Very cute.

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Mazzy

Hee hee - forever a Slytherin, that Draco. :)

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sunny33

MUCH more expensive! :)

10/10

snitchette

I love their way of thinking. *grin*

10/10

mick42

Not too much at all.

10/10

mick42

Enthusiastic response, can't wait.

10/10

mick42

Lucius has rather missed the boat this time.

10/10

mick42

Now that's what Draco should have taken a picture of.

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Prof M McGonagall

This series is very cleverly written.  You've fit a lot into your 100-word chapters.  :)

10/10

mick42

Oh I'm sure that Draco will be made to sweat before he gets what he deserves.

10/10

RedsAttic

lol---woot!

Excellent!!!

I do hope more is to follow.....

10/10

Sampdoria

Brilliant update, I would have paid good money to "see" the look on Ron's face when not only seeing the gifts, but even more so Hermione's smickering face when showing them:-))

10/10

mick42

They need to focus on the problem at hand.

10/10

mick42

Ah Draco, you have learned well, you are a true Slytherin.

10/10

RedsAttic

EXCELLENT!!!!!

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Dangerous_Liasons

i like the lack of blatant sexuality, it seems to highten the emotions - turn this into something other than a drabble please?

10/10

snitchette

I think I'd love to see that picture for myself.

10/10

snitchette

I can only imagine their night... Lucky girl.

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sapphire_phoenix

Very nice little ensemble!

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