i don't suppose we could have an epi?

Vulgar and OOC?  I don't think anyone was OOC, but it **was** vulgar.  Delightfully so!

Oh, fantastic twist! And I'm off to read more.

Lovely closing chapter.  I love that Snape chased the wizards off.  Thanks for finishing it.

Very good story. But I sincerely hope that you would not waste a man like Snape on...Hooch! It's just not right! Update soon, can't wait to see what happens.

Go girls! Very nice!

Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks!

Nice twists. It is nice to see the women get what they want. ;) And, of course, you leave a little bit of a cliffhanger with Snape. Maybe there will be a sequel where Hermione does get to learn just what 'cunnilingus' means as part of her apprenticeship.

great job wish you put a second part to it

just started reading and already have a grin on my face. Whenever you write there are so may twist and turns during the story, I visualise looking at the wall with a large chart, Saying oh we'll go left this time, afterall every will be expecting right.   Your twists and turns are legendry

Wonderful story.  I saw it yesterday while at the office but Stinky was hanging out near my desk too much, and I didn't have a chance to read it.I love that the two girls planned this together, and that they both got something out of it.I'm guessing this is a one shot, and it works great as one.  You can also build on it too, in the future so that would be nice.

Oh wow, what a clever ending.  The story was really hot and interesting, but to discover that H. had basically set Sanpe up was hysterical!

LOL I LOVED IT!!!! Gonna write more? hehe

at first i say to myself how can hermione not know what it is she reads everything and knows all of it, but then i started seeing how it was funny and i liked it very much and laughed out loud

Absolutely lovin it, you are such a twisty-turney witch.  It's great the way this story's building.

LOL - very entertaining! Thanks for the smile.

Wonderful Ms Southern. Just tell us we do get more of this.

Fab!  I love stories that twist like that, and a sneaky Granger is always a plus!  Great work, as always.

Phew!  What a relief!  For a long while, I was wondering if this was a misplaced Draco-Hermione fic, then you turned it all around.  Mmmmm.... epilogue of her first day of apprenticeship? Or her first night??  Thanks for posting!!

Way too funny. I loved the twist within a twist. So very Hermione.

Woo-hoo!  You go, Pansy, girl!  *snapsnapsnap*Can't wait for more, please!  ~Lotm

just started reading and already have a grin on my face. Whenever you write there are so may twist and turns during the story, I visualise looking at the wall with a large chart, Saying oh we'll go left this time, afterall every will be expecting right.   Your twists and turns are legendry

This was really very funny.  The end of it had me laughing out loud.  Wonderful

Believe it or not, I actually like that you left the ending open to potential, not taking it into a full relationship, and not closing it all up nice and tidy. Well done.

Love the 'vulguar and ooc' tale. :-) Very good. Steamy.

Hmm...Snape and Hooch?  Interesting.Good chapter.  I'm looking forward to seeing if Hermione changes his mind about going off to do other things without her.