New Chapter for Order of Merlin
Order of Merlin
Electra Avalon5 Reviews | 5 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
“Tell me it wasn’t you, Peter. Tell me that they didn’t use you, that they used somebody, anybody else.”
One man alone changed the fate of the entire wizarding world. One man condemned himself to thirteen years as a rat for the ultimate betrayal. But just how did Peter Pettigrew come to be, Scabbers?
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Electra Avalon
Member Since 2009 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 4 Reviews Written | 5 Review Responses
I write mainly whatever seems to come in to my head and by far my best work consists of one-shots. Angst is rather a specialty of mine ;)
Reviews for Order of Merlin
Really wonderful detail, description and inner-thoughts revealed of character much ignored but so very vital. Look forward to more of your writing!
Response from Electra Avalon (Author of Order of Merlin)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it and hopefully I'll get something else up soon
You provided a very interesting snapshot into the mind of a character most people shy away from contemplating.This was nicely done. I liked the ongoing theme of 'run' and how you showed Wormtail's utter one track mind through it: it's very clear that at this point, he only cares for his own survival. I think you've made him both fascinating and horrifying at the same time. His thought process and selfishness is condemnable but also in some ways, to some extent, understandable. Well done!
Response from Electra Avalon (Author of Order of Merlin)
Thanks so much. I've always been fascinated about what really happened at, and after the confrontation with Sirius. It just seems to me that the only thing he would be thinking of is his own survival. Im so glad that you liked it :)
i know i told you this already, but i absolutely *loved* this story! i rec'd it on my LJ, and I hope more people discover it!
Response from Electra Avalon (Author of Order of Merlin)
WOW Thanks so much! I'm glad that people like it :)
Few people have much empathy with Pettigrew. Well done for giving him a go.
Response from Electra Avalon (Author of Order of Merlin)
Thanks! I hope you liked it.
It's rare to see the issue of what made Peter into such a lost and craven soul dealt with in fan fiction. A fine job !!
Response from Electra Avalon (Author of Order of Merlin)
Thanks so much! I hope you liked it as much as I enjoyed writing it.