Making Plans
Chapter 7 of 10
Agnus CastusThe Order of the Phoenix announces a meeting, and Snape and Tonks make plans of their own.
ReviewedThe sound of persistent miaowing stirred Severus from his slumber, and he felt a feathery tickle against his cheek. When he opened his eyes he found a transparent, silvery cat licking his face, whilst a second feline figure sat at the end of Tonks' bed, whining like a small child. He batted the Patronus away from his face and nudged the sleeping woman beside him until she awoke with a sleepy utterance.
"What's going on?" she muttered as she opened her eyes.
The two cats waited impatiently for the recipients of their messages to rouse themselves to full consciousness, prowling over the heavy blanket at the bottom of the bed.
"It appears to be a message from Minerva," Snape said, stifling a yawn. He glanced at his timepiece; it was ten o'clock in the morning.
When Snape and Tonks were sufficiently alert and focused, the Patronus pair opened their jaws to deliver their message in echoing, Scottish-accented unison.
"Your presence is requested for an Order meeting in the Headmaster's office on Saturday, at six o'clock in the evening, when Professor Dumbledore is due to return to the school. Please be prompt."
The cats mewed once and evaporated into the air.
Tonks rubbed sleep from her eyes. "The start-of-term chat, no doubt," she said as she turned onto her side and placed her hand across Snape's chest.
He was wearing a pair of fine silk pyjamas which Tonks had found in the wardrobe. Apparently, she was not particularly taken with his wish to wear his cotton shirt in bed, and she had decided that, if he insisted on wearing something, then the clothing should be tactile. Snape had agreed to her request with some reluctance but found the garments extremely comfortable to wear; he quite liked the sensation of silk against his skin.
Snape had enjoyed spending two nights with a woman, and he lamented that their arrangement would have to alter when the students returned to Hogwarts.
It seemed Tonks was pondering the same problem.
"I'll be back on full-time guard duty, come Sunday," she said sadly. "There'll be no more lying in and spending whole evenings shagging when the kids come back."
Snape pressed his lips into her mousey-brown hair. "No, there won't," he replied.
Tonks sighed. "It's a shame. I've enjoyed this."
Snape did not return the sentiment verbally. He had not allowed himself the luxury of getting attached to their circumstance; he knew nothing stayed the same, and so many other things lay outside of his control. He felt certain that Draco Malfoy would have hatched another plan to eliminate Dumbledore, and when his young charge returned to the school, Snape would once again have to walk a fine line between helping the boy and protecting the Headmaster. Snape had been living moment-to-moment for the last two days, and the thought of the coming term made him feel queasy.
"You know what I'd like to do before the kids return?" Tonks said. The cheeky grin on her face begged him to guess the answer.
"It is too early in the morning for Legilimency," Snape replied sardonically.
Tonks nudged him with her knuckles then hoisted herself up to a sitting position, replacing a long black strap of her negligee which had slipped down over her shoulder. Soon she was straddling him and unbuttoning his pyjama shirt.
"I always fancied having sex in a classroom," she said, running her hands up and down his bare chest.
"Oh, really?" Snape enquired. "And which teacher were you lusting after?"
Tonks laughed. "I never really had a crush on a teacher when I was at school," she said. "Although the current Defence Against the Dark Arts professor is quite interesting."
Snape couldn't stop a little snort from escaping. Tonks' fingers toyed absent-mindedly with his nipples and played with the light dusting of hair on his chest.
"Anyway, what about you, Severus?" Tonks asked mischievously. "Ever had the hots for a student?"
He watched her for a long moment, taking in her hazel eyes and the curves of her black-clad figure.
"No," he replied in a measured tone.
Tonks appeared disappointed and studied him closely. "Ever had sex with a student?"
It amused Snape that she asked the two questions in reverse order. He took a moment to consider his reply and decided that the truth would be much more intriguing than an outright denial.
"Not that I was aware of," he said.
Tonks cocked her head and laughed again. "Ever had sex in a classroom?"
"What is this, a Ministry of Magic inquisition?"
She gasped with fake indignation. "Think yourself lucky I don't have use of Alastor Moody's eye-piece."
"And there was I, fantasising about being interrogated by an Auror..." Snape let the sentence hang in the air, waiting for her to assess it as truth or deceit.
Tonks did neither. "You have had sex in a classroom, haven't you, Severus?"
Snape sighed. His ploy hadn't worked. He did not wish to reveal a piece of information which would demystify him; he wanted to retain his air of ambiguity, so much the better to ensnare and enthral. But being straddled by a pretty young witch was tantamount to inhaling Veritaserum fumes.
"No, I haven't," he replied touchily.
A moment later, he ran his hands up her arms and slipped the straps from her shoulders. The silk of her nightdress fell to her waist, revealing her beautiful breasts and tightening nipples. He took them into his hands and ran his fingers over them with a delicate touch. Her skin was so smooth and round, he felt his crotch respond in kind.
"But there's always a first time," he continued, his voice becoming slightly husky.
Tonks' eyes widened and she lowered herself onto her hands, offering her breasts to him as a reward. He claimed one nipple with his mouth, tracing the outline with his tongue, before taking it in his mouth and suckling gently. He heard her moaning above him, and it spurred him on. Snape moved to take her other nipple and repeated his attention, but this time he snaked one of his hands up her thigh and underneath her negligee, searching for her moistening mound between her legs. He could feel his own blood pumping furiously into his groin as he stroked her slowly, deliberately, making her quiver.
This was how mornings should be, he decided. He had a young woman succumbing to his touch and a promise of ecstasies to come.
She moved her chest away from his mouth and dipped her head to whisper into his ear. "When can we do it?"
"After the Order meeting on Saturday," he answered, slipping one long finger into her entrance. "Meet me in the Dark Arts classroom at nine o'clock."
"Yes, professor," she moaned.
Vaguely aware that it was wrong for the sound of her reply to be so arousing, Snape grabbed her hips and pushed her towards his erection. She slipped his silky pyjama bottoms away from his hips and took hold of his swollen member. She gave it two firm strokes with her clasped hand and then placed it inside her, pushing down on him in one long, glorious movement.
Snape found himself enfolded in her wet, enticing heat, and she moved slowly at first, seeming to luxuriate in the feel of his hardness inside her. He watched her intently. Her eyes were tightly closed and she was riding him instinctively, using him to find her own pleasure. All he had to do was lie back and relax. It was a magnificent feeling and a satisfying sight.
Soon her movements became more ragged, and she leaned forward onto her hands and rested her weight upon them. Her breasts swayed, hypnotising him momentarily. Tonks looked down at his face, studying his features as if he were a fascinating work of art.
Her stare caused him reach up and pull her towards him, and he captured her in a firm, ardent kiss. Her hips stopped moving whilst her tongue pressed into his mouth, exploring the texture of his own eager tongue. Every so often she moaned gently and slid slowly up and down, sending wavelets of pleasure along his length.
When their lips parted, he released his hold on her head. She opened her eyes, and he saw that her pupils had dilated so wide that her irises appeared black in colour. The sight was completely unnerving.
"Are you alright?" he asked sharply.
"Oh, yes," she replied, smiling and moving her hips around raunchily.
"Your eyes...."
Tonks frowned a little. "What about them?"
Snape reached for his wand on the bedside table and Summoned a small hand-held mirror, which he offered up to her. She took it and examined herself, all the while circling his erection with her hips. Suddenly she laughed, and the contraction of her muscles sent another wondrous ripple through his groin.
Tonks placed the mirror on the bedside, and her black-as-night irises locked onto his, akin to two endless tunnels, fathomless and unsettling.
"I have mimicked your eyes, Severus," she said, laughing again. "I have Metamorphosed into you!"
His hands slowed her hips to a standstill. "But I thought you'd lost your ability?"
"No," she replied, a small smile curling her lips. "I've just not been able to command it."
Snape didn't know what to say. Looking into his own eyes was a most uncomfortable experience, and he now realised the extent of the power held in his ebony stare.
"Just don't go changing your nose and hair as well," he said with a glimmer of irony. "I don't want to shag myself."
Tonks giggled, and her eyes returned to hazel. "I always liked your nose; it was one of the first noses I learned to imitate."
Snape noticed he felt flattered, and he didn't know how to reply. Life, it seemed, was full of surprises. He marvelled as Tonks returned her attention to her hips, which began to move again with agonisingly slow movements. The sensation stole the breath from his lungs and removed any further need for conversation.
Tonks threw her head back, sitting up straight again and resuming her focus with renewed vigour, deliberately clenching her muscles around his erection to stimulate him. Snape responded by bucking his hips to meet her, and fingering her nub, taking her closer and closer to climax.
The young Auror let out a small squeal as her orgasm erupted, and Snape drove harder and harder into her warmth, pushing himself to come with her in a moment of union. He achieved his aim with a satisfied grunt, and his dampened fingers clutched at her thighs, digging into her firm flesh as his groin pulsated with pleasure and his back arched involuntarily.
After the tingle had faded, Tonks flopped into a heap beside him and covered their bodies with bed-sheets, wrapping one docile arm around his torso.
"I'm going to miss this when it's gone," she said quietly.
Snape agreed, but did not say so out loud.
He was already beginning to plan for Saturday night in the Defence against the Dark Arts classroom.
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Latest 25 Reviews for What the Lonely Know
27 Reviews | 5.0/10 Average
Wow. That was so unique and felt very honest and real. I appreciate your style and loved the last chapter. Well done!
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thank you so much - uniqueness is hard to achieve in the competitive world of Harry Potter fan fiction! This story took me back to a very lonely chapter from my own life, which may account for its realism and honesty. Your reviews have been much appreciated
Intense start. Not a couple I ever pictured but in a moment I'd desperation I can see it happening. I am curious where this will lead.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks for reviewing! The idea popped into my head years ago when I was feverish with a flu-like illness... Before this, I too had never pictured these two as a couple. The story was originally a one-shot, but the characters wouldn't leave me alone. I had no clue where they would take me, so I placed my trust in them and they led me in unexpected directions!
Nooooooooo! How dare you break my heart like that? Surely our Severus deserves some solace now!
*wipes tears violently*
OK, enough dramatics, back to the point.
You. Are. Outstanding. I am just amazed, to say the least. Wow. Just wow.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
How lovely to receive a new review after all these years! Thank you so much for sharing your emotional response to my writing and for your kind praise. I'd love to know what stood out from the story for you? *passes tissues*
Response from MayavanavihariniHarini (Reviewer)
You wrote about the leading duo with zero compromise.. They were TOTALLY true to character. Frankly I feel at times that writing good fanfiction is TOUGHER than writing original fiction. You just reinforced that idea. Perhaps moving Tonks back to Lupin is what gives the story its powerful quality that makes me love you and hate you at the same time!
I hope I could convey my feelings properly..English isn't my mothertongue, you see!
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Certainly, writing canon-compliant fan fiction is quite challenging, and forces authors to think carefully about plot and characterisation. I'm glad you think Snape and Tonks were true to character - I tried hard to make it so! Thank you for replying. You made my day
acutely insightful and realistic. thanks for the happy ending though it could so easily have resulted in unforgiveness
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thank you for leaving a review; it's nice to know this story is still being enjoyed all these years after publication. You found the ending happy? I suppose it was the lesser of two evils! Couldn't have them skipping off into the sunset together now, could we? ;)
Wrenching. It's a shame she never knew the truth.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Yes, it is a shame. Tonks was a bit too ham-fisted to get close enough to really know him, Snape was too scared to let somebody truly see him, and so despite their physical intimacy, they never shared real emotional intimacy. I like to think Tonks had an inkling, but sadly they both perished before the truth was revealed. Thanks for reading, and for leaving some nice shiny stars!
This is a truly engaging tale. I'm totally sucked in and can't wait to see how this resolves (even though I know it can't end well.)
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks for reviewing; it's nice to know this story is still being discovered and enjoyed by readers
Ooh! I got shivers when Tonks' eyes metamorphosed into Sevs. This felt a little like the calm before the storm for some reason. Everything is going well for them, but how can it end well? I wonder how the DADA classroom rendezvous will play out? Looking forward to finding out.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
The calm before the storm, you say? Very perceptive. I wanted them to have a bit of fun at some point in the story, because the end is coming as surely as the Chudley Cannons shall finish bottom of the Quidditch league. Thank you so much for the stars and your review!
They are both so in tune with each other; the metamorphosed reaction Tonks has from Sev - she's renewing herself, her strength again from him...hmmn, they're both getting into deep waters from which neither will be the same - though neither would maybe admit it, due to circumstances and consequences... as painful as it is, can't wait to read further :)
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I love your interpretation of the metamorphosis; there's definitely a bond between them now, although it's not exactly conventional, and you're quite right - they won't admit it to each other, or to themselves. Next chapter's up; I hope it's not too painful for you!
Wonderful chemistry and insight into these kindred souls!
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thank you! Who says a Hufflepuff and a Slytherin can't have chemistry? Hehe
Perfect! Thank you - I was always struck by the intimacy of Severus' remark to Tonks - implying that he knew all too well her state of mind and emotions for changing her Patronus and fading looks - thanking you for fleshing it out! Speaking of 'fleshing' things out - thanks for this ship :) Poignant, wonderful & juicy; really capturing their immediate needs.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I, too, noticed the intimacy of Snape's remark to Tonks at the school gates, and his nasty comment was the inspiration for this story. Thanks for reviewing!
This is so poignant. I feel sad for both of them knowing what is ahead for them. I really think that Snape is deluding himself here; he claims to want something undemanding, but I have a feeling he wants more - maybe not necessarily from Tonks, but I think Snape is a one woman man who craves intimacy and all that it brings, despite what he says. What Tonks wants is less clear - perhaps to herself as well. She is obviously in love with Lupin, but I suspect she feels something for Snape. Yes, she wants him as a 'fuck-buddy' but he is an emotional support too, whether either of them acknowledge it or not. I know this can't end romantically well for either of them, but I am intrigued to know how you will end it. Thank you for a lovely take on two lonely people's lives.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Reviews like yours make posting on TPP worthwhile; thank you for your insightful words. I think there's a lot of denial and distortion going on between them, but I think they also draw comfort from each other. Both of them suffer the pain and loneliness of unrequited love, and both have an inability to move on. I'm intrigued by the lies the characters tell themselves. I hope the ending completes the story for you.
I like the way you compared Severus to a dragon when he got angry. Tonks extinguished him quick enough;) Also loved the tenderness at the end. Good job.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks for your review,
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
. I'm pleased you enjoyed his transition from anger to tenderness.
So very poignant and well-done; thank you - my three favourite characters... thanks for filling in the gaps in such stirring ways!
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I hope I handled your three favourite characters well! Many thanks for all your reviews.
Enjoyed the telling, biting dialogue and reflections going on between/in both of them. Thank you for capturing the angst and turmoil of each. So sad. And realistic. Reading on...
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue, which is getting edgier as time passes by. Sadness and realism, wow - thank you!
I knew the ending did not bode well for our man, but at least there was some sort of hope and the promise of a happy ever after for Tonks. Of course we know how short that happy ever after is going to be for the two of them, but its nice to think that they had some happiness, if only for a brief time. Thank you for sharing this little glimpse into the lives of two, or perhaps I should say three lonely people.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
And thank you for reading and reviewing,
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
. I'm glad you saw some happiness and hope in these characters, during a very bleak time of their lives.
I'm sad to see this end (especially as I still had hopes about Teddy being a Snape) but I really enjoyed this story from start to finish
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Snape and Tonks weren't sustainable enough to last until the time she fell pregnant with Teddy; Snape couldn't handle intimacy and Tonks couldn't manage without it. Thanks for reviewing!
What achingly empty lives. This was an extremely well written story.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
"Achingly empty" really sums it up well; their lives are so lonely and bereft. Thank you very much for your kind review.
Perfect... really felt like I was at Grimmauld Place; everything really captured spot-on, all the details and description (the last line really hit the spot!); really love your perfect characterisation and the banter and chemistry between Tonks and Severus. Yummy! Thanks!
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks,
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
, it was nice for me to go back to Grimmauld Place, I quite like it there. I'm pleased you're enjoying the chemistry between the two characters; Tonks always struck me as a witch who could hold her own in a conversation, and I've had fun playing her off against Snape. Many thanks for reading and reviewing!
I like your Tonks and Severus. It is nice he has some moments of interacting with another person in relatively peace in this awful year of his
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Yes, this has to count of one of his least enjoyable years at Hogwarts. Thanks for your review!
Wow Snape did something kind for someone else (although of course there was a nice thank you in it for him:)). Good chapter looking forward to more.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
He did something kind but ultimately self-serving. Snape is a Slytherin, after all. Thanks for the review and the shinies
Nicely done :)
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks. Are you referring to any part in particular?
Response from Lexandrac (Reviewer)
I just love the emotional bits in this chapter, Severus' sadnesss, as well as Tonks' is almost palpable.
I'm glad they aren't ending it, I'm enjoying this story too much for it to be over :). I've always thought Tonks and Severus could have made an interesting couple. Looking forward to more.
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Thanks for your encouraging review. I was also glad they decided not to end it... yet. Tonks and Severus popped into my head one day and refused to leave, and up until then the pairing had never occured to me. There will be ten chapters in total. Hope you enjoy!
Wow that answered the one question I had after the incident which was "Who is Teddy's real father?"
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
Teddy's father is Remus Lupin, after all.
very sad
Response from Agnus Castus (Author of What the Lonely Know)
I know. They seem doomed...