The List
laurielove22 Reviews | 8.0/10 (22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )
The final-year Gryffindor girls compile a list ... although Hermione seems oddly detached.
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Member Since 2010 | 22 Stories | Favorited by 394 | 8 Reviews Written | 642 Review Responses
Welcome to my world of (largely) erotic exploration of the human condition. (Well, that's one way of putting it anyway ...)
My writing is largely rated NC-17 and, as you will see, contains a lot of explicit detail. But I cannot write without developing believable characters, largely in canon (at least as a starting point), whose behaviour is established through dialogue and tangible situations. I adore these characters and tend to write from the inside out, getting inside their heads and simply letting them talk (and act ...). Yes, there is a lot of sex, but I hope my characters' sexuality enables them, and us, to discover deeper aspects of their personalities.
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My favourite pairings are Hermione/Lucius and Hermione/Severus, but I have written for various other couples and situations.
I have recently started writing original works which have, fortunately, been picked up by publishers. If you are interested in my original work, my penname is Demelza Hart.
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Reviews for The List
very well written out but damn those gryffindor girls are so gossipy
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Gossipy girls - Hermione could at least rise above it! x
*squee* I understand why she wasn't interesting in fantasying about them as she has already experienced them. Several times it seems... *wink*
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Yup - not much point chatting about it when the real thing is waiting for you downstairs!! Lucky, lucky girl! x
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Yup - not much point chatting about it when the real thing is waiting for you downstairs!! Lucky, lucky girl! x
LOL. She didn't need to make a list. She had them already. :)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Lucky, lucky her!! There will probably be more! (How can I not?!) x
Whoo, hot!
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Thank you! Looks like there will be more! x
Please continue! I want to read more, I love it when you pair Hermione with those two. Pretty please *Does not really want to resort to begging*
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
You don't have to beg! I wouldn't have suggested it if I didn't already want to continue myself! How could I not? Thanks for your kind words! x 
More Please... :)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
He he! Of course I will, have no fear! x
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE - Continue with this! Don't leave all your "very supportive" readers hanging. It feels like this could be become very interesting!
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Oh, it's terrible how easily I can have my arm twisted!!! But ... OK! 
Thanks for your kind words. x
This is Laurel, asking nicely. Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease. Now write a sequel before I ask NOT-nicely! Chop-chop! Posthaste!Thant said, I LOVED the sneaky indifference of HErmione listening to the girls' talk while knowing what awaited her downstairs. LOVED it.
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Thank you!! As you asked so very nicely ... I will definitely come up with something (as, I expect, will Lucius and Severus 
!!!!)Watch this space ... x
Okay, I'll ask really, really nicely...Please??? Pretty please? With Severus (or Lucius, I'm really not picky) on top? 
The other girls may have to be satisfied with lists, but Hermione's got the real deal! It's fun having a secret...well, that secret, anyway... Thanks for sharing this!
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Well, since you asked so nicely ... and made me giggle at the thought of the ... possible permutations ... I suppose I could think of some sort of ... extension ... 
x
the timing between the first half of this and the second half is just perfect. hermione is so unhurried, it makes that "I-know-something-you-don't" feeling so much more satisfying. :)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Thank you! I'm glad you appreciated the transition between the two segments. This was just a little something I wrote quite quickly, but I've grown quite fond of it. There is probably going to be more! x
What no lemons only limes. NOOOOO I so love SS/HG/LM smut. Please continue.Wonder what the girls would say if they knew what Hermione was really doing with her time (or who she was doing.)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Do you know how hard it is for me NOT to write too many lemons!?! And therefore .... I shall have to continue!! 
LL x
Please another chapter about this three?!?!?!? I like this so far. 
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Oh, why not! Thank you! xxx
Please, pretty please, think about it? With whip cream and a cherry on top?
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Oh, don't worry - I've already been convinced to do more than think about it! Whipped cream, hey? With Lucius ... that's an offer no one can refuse!!!! x
DILFs and TILFs? Don't tell me you actually made that kind of lists with your friends! The boldest I ever was was phantasising about the guys from sixth form or university. At least at that age! How very naughty you are!I can see them getting all crazy and exuberant after the war. It seems logical that they'd feel the need to reaffirm their youth and that all was not lost.And Hermione between those hot, incredible Slythrins... Who wouldn't like to imagine that?
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Are you telling me you had such an innocent adolescence?! They are eighteen after all! My colleagues and I still make lists like this!!! Helps keep us young! I wrote this story conveniently pretending the war never took place!! They just happen to still be at school, Snape's not dead, and Lucius seems to be ... Lucius ... without the difficulty of having the mask on all the time! Thanks for the review, as ever. xxx
Response from HermioneMalfoyFan (Reviewer)
I think I never made a list like that... Of course we talked about boys, but I don't remember making lists!And yes, I was that innocent! When I was 17 there was this guy, six or seven years older than I was. And although I tried really hard to make him interested - when he was, it scared the s*** out of me.And I got him hooked good - it was very difficult to get rid of him!
please?pretty please?with a cherry on top?we'll be your best friends?
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Weeelllllllll .... as you ask so nicely ... I suppose I could cobble something together ... (don't worry - I don't cobble!) ... LL x
None of us would ask for smut, surely. All innocent little lambs who are shocked at your insinuation, that's us. Yep. *begins getting necessary headstart on lynchmob*
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Innocent little lambs!!?? Well, enough of you have bleated loudly enough for me to oblige ... may have to wait a little though. x Thanks for the kind words.
you have got to write the sequel....they have got to find out...please
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Nice to see you here! Oh, I suppose I'd better write a sequel! Not sure when though - I have got myself in the ridiculous position of having two WIPs on the go and I keep distracting myself by writing things like this! x Thanks for the review.
I know what you're all going to say. If you ask really, really nicely, I may think about it! ;)You really already know that we were going to say that the top of our TILF list would be Hagrid instead of Snape? *shudders and giggles simultaneously*Seriously though, are we that predictable? Well, I won't disappoint; may we please have a sequel so I don't have to fill in the naughty bits myself?This was a fun story and very nostalgic of slumber parties gone by. This was a perfect mix of funny and sexy, and I believe only Hermione would be able to keep such a secret and not burst with the need to tell the others. Especially when it would mean certain popularity and envy. Well done, and it truly is begging for a sequel. Or was that me begging for a sequel? Hard to tell. Anyway, hop to it!
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Thank you for your lovely words! I think a sequel is most definitely in order. x
Oh, if those Gryffindor girls only knew! Hot and hotter, and leaves a girl wishing for just a leeetle more....please? Either way, well done :)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Glad you liked it! Looks like a sequel will have to be written! x
Loved it! A delicious little story. ;)
Response from laurielove (Author of The List)
Thank you! x