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Potions Under Duress The Colour of Time
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The Colour of Time

1: 1. The Colour of Time

2: 2. The Good Life

3: 3. After the Party

The Colour of Time

duniazade

15 Reviews   |   15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 611 Words 3 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Her daughter asked for the same tale, night after night.

A/N: Three loosely related series written for GrangerSnape100 (respective challenges: grey nightshirt, when I'm old and grey, when ghosts intervene). Margot is Bluestocking's creation; she graciously allowed me to use the name.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: 1. The Colour of Time

Chapter 2: 2. The Good Life

Chapter 3: 3. After the Party


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10/10

sregner

So very well done...so very well

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you so much! I"m glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

missblue

The sweetest dead love story. Thank you.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

10/10

snitchette

Poor Hermione! It may be nice to have him around still but also painful to know she can't hug or kiss him.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

But in a little time they'll have all eternity together and so much fun annoying Hogwarts' living denizens!

10/10

snitchette

Shoult I understand he left this earth for good? That's a good way of dying but how sad.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Sorry for the belated answer - RL got in the way.And um... sorry for the sadness. I have to admit that if we have to go, going with champagne seems the least unpleasant way.Thank you for the review!

0/10

moiramountain

He did die (weeping quietly) - and I would pout about it - except I permit myself the luxury of assuming he's about 150 or so and Hermione is a lovely 130 - and that they'll soon enough have all of eternity together on the same plane of existence.  I do like the fact she still speaks to him as though he were right there beside her - which of course he is.....

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Oh yes, they were/are old and fulfilled, and anyway wouldn't let such a little inconvenient as death stand in the way. He <i>is</i> right there beside her and they most definitely look forward to all of eternity together (and to annoying Hogwarts' residents).Thank you for the lovely reviews!

10/10

Marty21

Awww lovely!  I like Severus Deathday Party lol

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Clairvoyant

Your beautiful words brought vivid, colorful images to mind.  So lovely... but *gasp* what's up with that ending?  I didn't expect that. *sniff, sniff*

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Well, if it has to happen, let's make it as pleasant as possible... *sniffles too*And there are compensations - still one chapter to go. ;-)Thank you for the lovely review!

10/10

Marty21

Good start :)  Love the image of Severus laying in a hammock on a lazy summer day.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

moiramountain

He's only napping.... napping, sleeping.... right?  Right????

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Right, dear... don't cry... *hugs lovely Moira*There's still a chapter in the series. *snickers maliciously*Thank you for the review!

10/10

MollysSister

And baby girl makes three. Awwwww lovely fluffy fluff.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

I love your lovely smileys! Thank you so much.

10/10

luminosa

You are the mistress of delicate, beautiful tales.  How perfect.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the lovely review.

10/10

Clairvoyant

Beautiful in words and meaning.  As I see it, death would bring peace, but not on the prince's terms.  Time gives him a second chance, and while not always pleasant, it is life. 

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Yes, exactly - he didn't choose the easy way out. I'm glad you enjoyed this - thank you so much!

10/10

mimmom

very sweet

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Anonymous

Aw! So lovely and sweet.

What a neat little idea, too. And I'm sure you know which (lyrical, delicate, beautiful) descriptive passage I loved most. You always seem to have at least a line or a passage that I wish I'd written myself.

Author's Response: *g* Thank you, lovely Lula.

10/10

snitchette

Awww! That's lovely.

Response from duniazade (Author of The Colour of Time)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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