Chocolate-Frog Girl or Sugar-Quill Girl?
Chapter 4 of 13
nagandsevWhat is the greatest sacrifice one can give? The final pairings of Remus and Nagini, and Severus against Sirius, in the Dark Arts competition for the Young Wizards Merit Award during their sixth year, gets out of hand. Unexpectedly, from this one event, their lives become intertwined, changed forever. Nagini, the main female character, is actually a precursor to Voldemort's serpent, Nagini.
Nagini breathed in deeply. The crisp cold air tasted so good after her convalescent period indoors. It was one of those clear wintry days with almost blinding sunlight. From where she was standing, atop the Astronomy Tower, Nagini felt that she was in a completely different universe, on top of the world and one with the elements: herself and Remus.
She smiled shyly at the honeyed-haired Gryffindor Prefect, who was leaning against the tower's inner wall, gazing at Nagini with a soft curious expression.
Looking away from him, again focusing on the tree-lined hilltops, Nagini leaned on the opposite wall's railing and sighed contentedly. It was just as she had foreseen: she and Remus together here; now that her déjà vu had fulfilled itself, she knew that this particular precognitive vision would cease to occur. It was an encouraging sign. She had never felt so naturally exhilarated, so free, so... happy.
Lightly caressing her ring, Nagini reflected on how her recurring nightmares had lessened since receiving the heirloom gift, and the future visions that had flashed across her mind this past year of herself and Remus now made sense to her. She longed to share this part, her secret, with Remus, but knew how any reference to Divination would be misjudged. True Seeing and other powers associated with Seers were ridiculed and looked upon dubiously amongst the majority of the Wizarding world, this branch of magic being considered to be imprecise at best. Only those who possessed the power and a clandestine chosen few of them, controlled by the Ministry, understood it. What would Remus think? If I were to tell him that I had seen us two here, before now, exactly as we are, what would he do? Laugh in disgust? Walk away in silence? I can just hear that odious berk, Sirius, and his hyena laughter.
Nagini hesitated, unsure to speak about it or not. For she wasn't a pure Seer as her mother, Portentia, had been.
Nagini's dreams and visionary flashes had always been a source of self-doubt and stress. She was unable, every time, to re-direct her focus and concentration as her father had attempted to train her to do; only through Transfiguration and immersion in practical Dark Arts exercises could she overpower and distract the precognitive forces that would randomly flare up inside her, activating her Inner Eye sporadically.
When she was a child, as soon as she had displayed the first signs of future sight, her father, Rolph Lestrange, had attempted to put a stop to it, rigorously training the young six-year-old to redirect her energies to the other selected, more obscure skills and gifts she had been born with, relying on and exploring murky areas in the Dark Arts to dilute Nagini's powers. The severe redirection of her natural inclinations had been, at times, a painful experience, resulting in the stunting of her precognitive powers, as well as adding further fuel to the fire of the volatile relations between her parents. One tempestuous night, her mother had taken Nagini, and they had disappeared together, until her father, Rolph, had hunted them down...
Remus watched Nagini. He noted how she seemed to be struggling with herself, contemplating a matter of serious note; he started to say something, but then he was distracted by how the light fell upon her, how she smiled whenever she looked over at him. He still couldn't believe how she was responding to him, how he had been enjoying the company of a Nagini that no one else knew. She had dropped her guarded defensive airs, and Remus took that as an invitation to explore how far he could go, how many other unknown layers could be revealed.
Remus knew time was running out. For the first time, there was no Sirius or James around to discourage him the exhilaration of daring to come on to Nagini Lestrange, one of the Marauder's targeted 'enemies', coursed through his veins like fire. Nagini had haunted his thoughts even before the disastrous duelling day, but Remus could never have acted upon any precarious attraction he had for her; his condition, inferiority complex, and peer pressure had always kept him in check; let alone Sirius' and James' utter dominating influence on him. Had he dared to share even the slightest serious interest in Nagini to them, he would've been subjected to unrelenting goading and ridicule. Remus had already had enough of that to last a lifetime.
But since the day he collapsed beside Nagini's hospital bed, even though he was in heavy spasm, Remus could recall her grabbing and holding him, screaming for Madam Pomfrey, how her body pulsated in the exertion of holding him fast, clinging to him, her distinct feminine scent. Even now, watching her, Remus remembered her touch and longed for it again; but on different terms, on his terms.
Nagini looked over at Remus, reflecting on how, with unexpected delight, two days ago at the evening meal she had entered the Great Hall to find an emaciated-looking, but definitely healthier Lupin, leaning on a walking-stick.
She had bounded towards him enthusiastically. "Lupin! You're out!"
"Oh, yes," agreed Remus, grinning at her. "Out and about, as good as new. Well, almost."
Having been released to go back to her dormitory three days before, Nagini had found herself feeling overwhelmingly lonely. It would be several days before the other students would be returning, but more profoundly, Nagini had realized that she actually missed the hospital ward. Not being incapacitated, of course, but she achingly missed Remus. She often caught herself restlessly staring out of her window, unable to study or relax, consumed with thoughts of a certain shaggy-haired Gryffindor.
They had both awkwardly held each other's gaze. Remus broke the silence. "Perhaps we could share our meal together? I've missed it." Remus' voice lowered softly as he pointed out, "I've missed you."
Nagini gulped, speechless. She looked around; only Professor Flitwick, Professor McGonagall, Madam Pomfrey and the groundskeeper, Hagrid, were there, and they had seemingly not noticed the two youths other than the initial greeting they had given them.
"Well, of course," responded Nagini, nervous and excited, ignoring his last comment. "I'd like that." Her mouth went dry and she couldn't form the words: I've missed you too...
But now the predicament where to sit? Nagini and Remus both gave fleeting glances to their own respective tables before suggesting simultaneously another possibility.
"Ravenclaw?"
"Hufflepuff?"
Spontaneously, they both started laughing at the ridiculousness of it all.
Grinning uncontrollably, Nagini gave in. "Well, seeing as you're still a cripple, even though it goes against my principles, let's sit at Hufflepuff it's a few inches closer, less distance to travel..."
Remus smiled broadly and, slightly hobbling, crossed over to the table with Nagini beside him.
Full meals and drink appeared instantaneously as they both sat down.
Neither spoke much. Partially because Remus seemed utterly famished and was making a visible effort to control and pace himself while eating; but also because they were enjoying simply being together: an odd, comfortable companionship had formed from their convalescent time together. They chatted lightly about general school-related topics, avoiding their obvious differences, opting instead to explore their similarities as well as general likes and dislikes. Sometimes they just fell silent and found themselves gazing into each other's eyes. Remus would always break the silence; he had an uncanny ability to cause Nagini to smile spontaneously just by a mere look, a silly comment, or gentle gesture. It was an indescribable feeling for Remus, knowing he had caused her to light up in such a way.
Gazing out from the tower's scenic viewpoint, thinking upon their other recently shared meals and walks together these past few days, Nagini beamed and then sighed as the whispering wind whipped around them.
"Knut for your thoughts," initiated Remus.
"The landscape is so breathtaking," explained Nagini, attempting to keep her focus anywhere other than on Remus. For whenever she held his gaze longer than a second, she felt an uncontrollable excitement, followed by a wishful yearning for something unknown, something which she had only whimsically mused upon in the faint shadows of her dreams.
"Especially when the wind blows, caressing through your lovely hair," remarked Remus in a soft low voice, taking in her unusual beauty.
Nagini turned to Remus, unable to ignore his comment.
"'Blow, blow, thou winter wind... thou art not so unkind as man's ingratitude'," quoted Remus wistfully.
"You're quite a poet, Remus," teased Nagini uncomfortably, for Remus' tone and expression were suddenly so sad. Something about it made her turn away and stare back over the wild, frozen landscape again.
"Not I... A great Muggle poet wrote that... 'Ingratitude' is a universal theme... not an exclusive Muggle weakness for Muggles alone..." As he gazed at the unattainable Pureblood witch, Remus felt as if he was about to have a spasm of sorts. "I'm grateful... so very grateful for your helping me in the hospital ward, so grateful for the time you've shared with me since." There was an intimacy in the timbre of his low, smooth voice that gave her tingles and caused her breathing to speed up.
Abashed by what he said, Nagini couldn't look at Remus. "Grateful?" Why does he talk like that? It is I who feel... Overwhelming need washed over her. He's the first to ever seem to be happy just being with me...
"I've never thanked you properly..." continued Lupin, walking slowly over to stand beside her. "And now, time is running out. The others will be returning soon, and all this... all this will vanish. Like a dream. Like the snow glistening on the treetops will soon vanish with springtime's awakening. Natural magic..."
Torn between the formerly unwanted, but now uncontrollable impetus, she turned to him. Nagini shuddered, partly from the cold and partly from an excitement beyond her control. Remus wasn't looking at the landscape but at her; there was an intensity and longing in his gaze, a yearning which took her breath away. Though his body stance seemed relaxed, she could feel he was poised and tense, ready to spring into action.
She looked away from him, her thoughts turning cloudy and confused.
In the silence, the sound of the wind continued to gently whip around them. Remus spoke, "Yes, there's nothing I'd rather do at this very moment than take you in my arms and kiss you. Unless I'm very much mistaken which, of course, is a possibility," he carefully pointed out, "it's what you want too."
Nagini remained silent. Gazing across the forest's treetops, she was unable to speak. Of course she wanted to be kissed by Remus. And more: to kiss him back, touch him, feel him... taste him. Observing him from afar had always been safe. He was an acceptable impossibility and therefore a safe fantasy; guaranteed to be out of reach.
But now, here he was beside her. She could feel his body heat and smell his scent of musk and cinnamon chocolate lingering around his nearing body.
What harm could come from one little kiss?
She bit her bottom lip, conflicted, mulling things over.
A Gryffindor. A Half-blood. A blood-traitor's son... All of the distasteful diatribe and derogatory remarks about Remus flooded her thoughts. Muddled, she remembered something even more cruel and tragic... Rumour had it that Remus had had to pay the price for his father's offences to Fenrir Greyback, the notorious, paedophilic werewolf. There were only two ways in which Greyback took revenge: he would either take the chosen victim's life, or else he would calculatedly allow the victim to live, only then to force them into being another member of his pack and serve him accordingly...
Nagini refused to believe any of this. Ignorant of what the horror of the curse truly was, never having encountered Greyback or any other werewolf face-to-face, she resolvedly believed the best of Lupin. Remus is perfectly normal; more than anyone I've been around in my life. They're just vicious prats... jealous of his abilities... Slytherins were well known for their vindictive, cruel edges physically as well as verbally.
Bitterly, remembering similar name-calling and hex attacks from Gryffindors, she thought of Remus, surrounded constantly by his peers: that strutting swine Sirius Black and that arrogant toe rag Potter in particular. They had always helped make sure that Remus would remain at a safe distance. The secure fantasy: there had been nothing to lose. But now?
Remembering her own murky background and past, nothing seemed to matter at this moment to Nagini except for Remus' nearness to her, his very real accessibility. Now, not only was he in reach, but she could feel Remus' virile, patient presence encompassing her as he stood so close, but not touching, waiting. Waiting for her to respond to him.
She flashed around; her eyes darted back and forth across Remus' face, searching his, trying to read what he wanted her to do.
"You can read my mind," she whispered.
"One doesn't need to be a Legilimens to know what you're feeling about me right now and what you want." She's waiting for me to make the first move, he thought. Remus very slowly reached a hand up and with his fingertips, ever so lightly, he caressed her cheek gently.
Nagini was breathing softly, shallowly.
Remus cupped her chin, tilting her head back, lowering his lips to hers, and firmly making first contact.
Nagini received his kiss, reciprocating the pressure and waiting for him to go further; wanting him to, willing him to... Remus had raised his head back up to gaze over her flushed face, gauging her tense body, her lips full and ready for more.
Placing his hands attentively in the small of her back, Remus firmly pulled her into him, and slowly manoeuvred them into the inner wall's alcove. Her lips were parted invitingly. Cushioning her back with his left arm, he ever so slowly lowered his mouth on hers, parting her lips, seeking to taste as much of her as he could. She tensed at first, but then relaxed into it, giving over to the moment, giving over to him. Aroused further by her initial timid touching, he felt his muscles tightening throughout his body; her hands had delicately stroked his chest upwards, reaching his shoulders, but then she clasped him to her tightly.
As their lips and tongues continued to delve in each other's hungry mouths, their hands explored the contours of each other's body. Until Nagini's fingertips, discovering and lightly grazing over his straining erection, caused Remus to pull away, gasping deeply.
He looked steadily into her eyes; her pupils were dilated, the dark centres eclipsing the golden outer-linings, anticipating an unknown culmination of their actions. Remus responded by kissing and tasting the soft flesh of her neck. Sporadically gasping, they both continued their frantic mutual explorations of each other's bodies until the welling tension caused Remus to halt, whispering, "Nagini."
They looked into each other's eyes, both of them panting heavily.
With effort, Remus struggled to form words coherently. "Nagini, I think... I think it's time to find out... if you're a ... Chocolate-Frog girl or a Sugar-Quill one?"
"A what?" Nagini was completely lost, only aware of their laboured breathing and body heat.
"A Chocolate-Frog girl or a Sugar-Quill girl," he repeated matter-of-factly. "A trip to Hogsmeade is in order... Honeydukes more precisely..."
Nagini couldn't comprehend what Remus was saying; her heart was beating fast and hard in her chest, and she felt slightly dizzy. All she could hear were bits of nonsensical babbling, and all she wanted was for him to continue and make love to her.
"You see, I have a secret; a terrible, dark secret."
Oh gods, she thought, giving him her full attention.
"I'm a ... chocolate addict." Remus seized her mouth with his, kissing her deeply. Then, breaking away from her, he emphasised, "Dark chocolate, preferably; but I'll take it any way I can get it..." He touched her moist full lips, tracing their shapes with his fingertips. "Honeydukes is part of my speedy recovery plan, and I can't wait until next week; I need a fix now."
Gently kissing his fingertips, Nagini whispered, "I can't go with you; I'm not allowed outside of Hogwarts grounds... Rodolphus never gave his permission..." She squirmed, aching for his touch.
"You're of age, aren't you?"
"Yes, but..."
"Then bugger Rodolphus Lestrange!"
She couldn't help giggling. "No, it's not so simple; it's all too complicated; you wouldn't understand."
"Then explain, help me to understand." Looking very somberly at her, Remus insisted, "I want to understand, Nagini."
"Kiss me," she whispered instead, delirious with desire.
He obliged her.
After a lengthy endeavour, Remus pulled back again, intent on pushing his point, he said, "We'll have the entire evening and all of Hogsmeade to ourselves..." Nuzzling her just below the ear, he whispered, "Anywhere, everywhere... to enjoy ourselves more comfortably."
Remus, don't you want to enjoy ourselves, now? thought Nagini. Meekly, flushing red, she said, "I want you this as I've never wanted anything before." Nagini wrapped her arms around his lean, muscular torso, pulling him back to her.
He fiercely whispered, "Yes, I want you too." His lips crushed hers again. Breaking away for air, Remus huskily whispered, "But not here; not like this." But even as he hushed her protests, his hands had found and wrapped themselves around her again, seeking to record every inch of her in his memory.
Aroused beyond measure, letting herself enjoy the feel of his every stroke and kneaded touch, she gently teased, "You are very dangerous, Mr Lupin."
"How so?" Stroking her back with one hand and allowing his remaining fingers to slowly trace around, and ever-so-gently, brush the sides of her breasts, his touch wandered until he decisively began to explore her pointed, hardening nipples. Then slowly his fingertips traced downward along her sloping side to the curved firmness of her rounded hip.
"So controlled. Don't you ever lose control?" asked Nagini in a heated whisper, trying not to writhe from his caresses, but to maintain as much composure as she could. "You must." She challenged him. "It's such a paradox against your true nature, isn't it?"
"What is my true nature, Miss Lestrange?" He started nibbling on an earlobe, flicking his tongue in the soft, sensitive lining of her ear, slowly sliding his hands gently downward, one hand slowly gathering, then lifting her skirt. Silently, Nagini dug her fingers into his back, grasping and clinging, encouraging him, speechless.
Finding the top of her woollen stockings, Remus slowly peeled the elastic band downward, meeting and then gently rolling her knickers lower until he felt the soft, fuzzy doe skin of her nethermost mound. He paused as she tilted and pressed her pelvis forward, pressing against his hand, burning with longing for him to continue. As Remus saw her desire, their lips met again, while his apt fingers pushed slowly one, then a second one, into her burning core, seeking the source of her innermost heat.
"Impulsive, instinctive seizing what you want, devouring it," she was gasping out, demanding he relieve the tension within her.
Stopping her mouth with a deep passionate kiss, a groan exploded inside her; Remus slowly pulled his fingers out of her, only to repeat entering her immediately, but now with a decisive rhythm, gently rocking and swaying her body's response to his guidance.
"Instinctive? Oh yes," he rasped out. Gods, she's so wet, burning with... "Yes, I can be impulsive, as well. Seize what I desire; I do so much want to devour you, right at this moment in more ways than one..." With a low, soft growl, his searing mouth trailed its way down her throat, sucking and licking, lower and lower until it rested upon a hardened nipple through which the layered material he nibbled and suckled at expertly.
Feeling she was going to explode, immune to the elements, Nagini pulled clumsily at her layers until the clothing was pulled up high enough to reveal bare flesh, letting her breasts be more easily accessible. Remus' eyes flashed appreciatively before setting his mouth upon them, he sucked and swirled his tongue around the delicate skin until the nipple had hardened to a piercing point.
Remus couldn't take Nagini now; he wouldn't... however, a feral sensation had been unleashed; he was fully aroused... I have to taste her, I have to... he started lowering his head, swiftly kneeling, nibbling strategically on her soft abdomen, licking her navel, sliding his tongue, pressed into her doe-soft skin, firmly downward until, in one swift movement, Remus placed his head under her skirt and burrowed, nuzzling into her mound's succulent, wet lips, drinking her in. Nagini was gasping and making soft mewling sounds in exquisite, abandoned pleasure.
Remus burrowed further into her, raising his head only to brace her lower back and guide her to raise a leg and rest it on his shoulder. Then, with full determination, he spread her lips, while his tongue searched and teased and found her aroused clit. Finding the delectable centre, he flicked and flickered until Nagini writhed and screamed out his name, "Remus! Remus!" She came in hard, wavering undulations, her fingernails digging deep in his shoulders. He maintained his stalwart position, feeling both awed and empowered on such a deep primeval level at causing her climax, only relaxing his suckling minutely to enjoy more fully Nagini's writhing in ecstasy. As she started to come down from her climax, he pressed his mouth and tongue once more to give a parting lick and kiss.
Suddenly, Nagini clutched at him. "Remus! It's too intense," she whispered fiercely.
Remus slowly uncovered his head, coming out from under her skirt, and slowly rose, not letting their bodies lose contact. Looking deep into his eyes, Nagini pulled his head down to her, kissing him deeply, tasting her essence on his lips. Remus' fingers had now found her clit, and Remus drank in her luscious groans and gasps of pleasure as he began to rub it. Gods, she's exquisite. Remus was transfixed watching her breathtaking ecstasy. He slowly, rhythmically caressed her, feeling another swelling climax approaching. She ground into his fingers, keeping his gaze, clutching on to him for life. Crying out in unrestrained rapture, she climaxed for yet a second time.
Holding her in his tight embrace, Remus rocked her gently, savouring every second of her complete and utter abandonment and vulnerability. They stayed that way, lost in time, just clutching each other, Remus slowly massaging and enjoying her heat and wetness. Nagini, catching her breath, ever so slowly and awkwardly sought and found his throbbing, hardened member through his robes. She gasped and proceeded to slowly rub his shaft up and down.
But Remus gently caught her hand and whispered, "Not now. I won't be able to control myself, if you continue... and I must control myself... must be safe...you must be safe ..." Seeing Nagini's puzzled expression, he kissed her reassuringly.
"Remus, I want to do something for you..." she whispered, breaking the kiss, embarrassed, but determined. "Don't you want me to?"
"I want... to savour every second every look and exquisite inch of you... but there's a time and place for everything, and here on top of the Astronomy Tower is not the place. I want this to be a special day for you for both of us. I want to treat you to new experiences, and not just what my John Thomas is guiding me to indulge in at this very moment. Indulgence leads to decay. Control leads to power."
"Power? You sound like a Slytherin."
"The power to please... to please you further physically, empowers me... the power of control."
"I knew it. I knew there was a control-freak hidden somewhere underneath all of your gracious and selfless airs."
"You have no idea, Miss Lestrange."
"Don't I, Mr Lupin? Try me," she teased him.
He kissed her passionately again. Her hand found his cock again still painfully straining underneath his robes.
"I can't let you go around in this condition."
"Won't be the first time," he half-joked, moving to stand up straight. "Yes, I don't know if I can walk." He winced slightly. "I'm so hard."
Swiftly, his hands reached under her skirt, but he then very slowly pulled Nagini's knickers and stockings upward, fitting them back in place. He stepped back, and leaned against the wall, with a conflicted, pained look upon his face.
"Madam Pomfrey ..." he huffed, pausing.
"What about her?"
"I have to go to her... I still must take some potions... for my condition." He grimaced.
"Your condition?" She stepped in to him, and he instinctively gathered her in his arms, his cloak encompassing, draping over hers, forming a cocoon. Bracing himself sturdily against the wall, he held Nagini as she leaned into him. Kissing her hair and breathing in her fragrance, he distractedly mumbled, "Tonight, at nine o'clock ... the third-floor corridor, meet me at the statue of the one-eyed old crone... meet me there... Hogsmeade..."
Snuggling against him, Nagini traced an invisible joy trail down his chest, lower and lower her fingers went. "I'm not allowed outside Hogwarts. I told you; I can't come with you."
"Oh, you'll come with me, if it's the last thing you do." He gave her a naughty look.
"Remus, Remus, don't tease me now." She whispered, "I'm completely yours... we don't need to go anywhere else." Her hand stroked firmly over his bulge. "Maybe I can help 'your condition'?"
He puffed, frustrated, helplessly aroused. "You don't give up, do you?" he whispered. His face was flushed and needy. She watched him as he struggled with himself, whether to stop her stroking him, but, any words of protests were stuck, and she felt his arms hold her to him encouragingly. Keeping Remus' gaze, and in between wet kisses, Nagini's hands clumsily fumbled and found the opening of his trousers, slowly unbuttoning them, allowing her full access to his pulsating member. As her hand inexpertly touched his burning flesh, their bodies locked into each other's, his leg placed between her thighs, propping and supporting her, aiding to give her the perfect angle to explore rubbing his lengthy erect shaft. They both remained in a locked, tight rhythm, her initially awkward pumping slowly smoothed out, then steadily increased in speed and friction until Remus grabbed hold of her, squeezing her so tight that she winced in pain; both of them gasped as he convulsed in orgasm.
They remained in an intertwined embrace, panting heavily; gently massaging and stroking one another.
Nagini had rested her head on his shoulder; she slowly started to ineptly rebutton his trousers, mumbling, "I'm sorry... you're all messy now...but..."
"Nagini, Nagini..." whispered Remus, stopping her hands. She looked up at him to see him gazing intently at her. He gently kissed her forehead and folded her into his arms again, holding her, interchangeably kissing her face and hair lovingly. Pausing, he asked, "Do you trust me?"
"More than anyone..." she whispered, feeling like a knot was in her throat, tightening her arms around him.
"Trust me and come with me. The one-eyed witch statue. Meet me there. Nine o'clock sharp." He gave her a soft peck on the lips, pulled his wand out, cleaning and redressing himself. "Shall I?" He offered to Scourgify her.
"No. No, I'll clean myself later," she declined, suddenly self-conscious. First, Nagini wanted to lie down and savour as long as she could what had happened between them; then, a long hot bath...
As Remus slowly guided her to the stairwell, she asked shyly, "Can I walk with you to the hospital ward?" Suddenly she wished to be with him as long as possible, wanting to continue the languid feeling of his touch and presence.
"Absolutely." He offered his hand to her, and they proceeded slowly down the stairwell heading towards the infirmary. They walked hand-in-hand in silence, both reflecting on each other.
I have to be careful, so very careful, pondered Remus. She is so proud. Fierce and wild, impulsive... Then, he frowned; a dark thought crossed his mind. But, she's somehow so unsure, inexperienced... How wrong Sirius was about her... everything... why did he lie about Nagini? She's nothing like he said she was...
As they reached the entrance of the hospital wing, they both stopped, lingering, neither wanting to be the first to depart from the other.
Remus stepped in and kissed Nagini. Looking into her eyes, he caressed her cheek and moved a loose lock of her hair from her face, slowly stroking his hand through her hair.
"Nine o'clock, then?"
She nodded her head, unable to speak. For an overwhelming feeling of uncertainty had washed over her, clashing with her desire. But Nagini wouldn't back down now, regardless of an ominous feeling ebbing through her. Pushing this presentiment aside, accrediting it to the whirlwind of sensual excitement, she forced herself to confirm, "Nine o'clock sharp!"
They embraced only to be interrupted by a familiar, disapproving voice.
"Mr Lupin! You're late very late! Now, that won't do," chastised Madam Pomfrey. Giving the young couple a portentous look, the Matron warned, "You two had best keep yourselves to yourselves apart from one another. Mr Lupin, I'll have a word with you privately!"
As Remus started to enter the ward, he grinned back at Nagini and reminded, "Tomorrow after lunch, Madam Pince returns; meet you in the library maybe she'll let us into the Restricted Section."
"Right," agreed Nagini, turning and walking away as nonchalantly as she could, hoping the Matron hadn't seen her face flush red in pleasure and amusement at Remus' obvious lame decoy.
Madam Pomfrey had not only seen Nagini's reaction, but well knew the cause of it the same cause of the young woman's dilated pupils and overall changed essence: Remus Lupin. Frowning, the Matron entered the ward to retrieve Remus' potion, prepared to give the randy young wizard an 'uncomfortable truth' lecture, before things got out of hand.
Pomfrey sighed. Perhaps, it already is too late...
The Matron's instincts were spot on; Nagini and Remus had already crossed a threshold of no return they were both about to risk more than either could imagine.
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AN: Greatest appreciation to betas: blue artemis, star_girl and agnus castus for each one's special expertise, help and support!
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Twists of Fate
47 Reviews | 7.62/10 Average
Good description of a confrontation with the personalities displayed.
Great intrigue that even captures Sirius’s imagination.
Nagini’s pain has turned into inner rage against herself and she wishes her life to end.
The force-the-Dark-Lord-knows-not comes into play.
Remus decides to go for information, presumably to help both Nagini and his side.
Response from Fairfield (Reviewer)
On the darker side, Tom is telling Nagini that he wants her to be special to him and he has the power to make that happen whereas Remus does not have the power to make that happen. Countering that is Remus's love for Nagini that makes her special both to him and herself, but Nagini has a premonition that that will not be. Is this to be a story of a long-held, flickering hope finally extinguished by pain and despair?
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Thank you for your detailed and thought-provoking feedback, truly appreciate it! As odd as it has been and is, the story will segue into being 'canon compliant'; so yes, hope will be explored a bit more and some of the continued effects of it on both Nagini and Remus, affecting their choices and decisions--a bit more exploration of what and when the twists of fate will leave them to their canon destinies, one's lot in life, as it were, but perhaps some uplifting hope can linger on as a legacy to one affected--we'll see how mushy or how stark the Muse will be... The thing is, yes, what is special to Tom is not necessarily to Nagini and Remus; moreover, Riddle and his powerfully petty streak can be very persistent and persuasive; he doesn't take kindly to not getting what he wants, how he wants it, nor having anyone interfere with his plans, etc.Thank you again for reading this!
Insight that reuniting with a loved one renders the past irrelevant.
Prophesying another witch indicates the end is near for this couple.
As before, hope for togetherness is dashed by the appearance of one of the warring parties. Nagini was born in the wrong time and at the wrong place. Her life is ruined by being caught in the conflict.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Thank you for reading and the feedback--truly appreciate your thoughtfulness, and so glad that the undercurrents coming to the surface are being conveyed, coming across. Yes, some are born in the wrong time and place, and where there is such potential, many a life ruined by factors beyond their control, caught in the midst of other forces at work--thank you so much for all of your thoughtful observations!
Through the chapter runs the pangs of a love that has not died.Good confrontation scene.Remus, perhaps with the support of Moody, is resisting the Ministry stripping him of all humanity. He wonders why Nagini has treated him the way she has although the readers may wonder why she has done what she has done since she appears to be under restraint and compulsion.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Thank you so much for reading and the review, such thoughtful, insightful feedback--truly appreciate it!So happy that the chapter comes across as intended, Remus' situation as well as Nagini's--thank you again!
A stark chapter of torture and false accusations. Prophecy appears to occur involuntarily.Is Dumbledore this dense, or is he playing a game to coerce Remus into something? I have forgotten what Moody wanted from Remus.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Yes, the gift of prophecy is erratic here, perhaps due to the state of the Seer. There is a duplicity in Dumbledore's character which allows him to be quite double-dealing; he thrives on games, quite the master of them. Moody, as Head of the Auror department, has an ongoing need for infiltrators to counter Voldemort's growing number of followers, beasties includedThank you so much for reading and the feedback, truly appreciate it!
"I'm a beast.""Yes.""A hairy beast.""Yes. Yes.""I'm serious. I'm an animal.""Yes! Yes!! Yes!!!"
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
LOL! Yes!!! Thank you so much for the lovely drabble-of-a-review--so honoured!Truly, deeply appreciate it!
The ring brings pleasant visions which Nagini clings to while ignoring possible danger since her previous life has been unpleasant. Remus proposes pleasant activities while ignoring possible danger because his previous life has been unpleasant.
Wishing to savor the pleasant moments, the two have not confronted the major problems facing them.
Peter was not the expert they had hoped he was. And he made a poor choice. He should have used a hair from a lady of the night.
Severus is more commanding in this story than in canon since in this story he confronts his peers while in canon he bullies students.
Reflecting on his being a magical lover, did the professionals prepare him for that? Not certain since his objective with them may have been different from his objective with Nagini.
A well-written chapter filled with dramatic scenes.
While reading this story, I keep thinking ‘Romeo and Juliette.’
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Yes, both seem to be wishing for something pleasant to experience which neither has quite experienced before; alluding to Peter's early experimentations with potion spells, yes, a lady of the night would've been a better choice!;-)Ah, poor Severus, and all that pent up aggression... Remus may have found a bit of nirvana derived from his acquired magical lover plateau-- professionals most probably have had a lot to do with helping with achieving that state, but yes, something else more seems to be consuming him regarding Nagini. Thank you so much for continuing to read this bizarre love story, nothing too much new under the sun--lol! Yes, the Houses of Slytherins and Gryffindors, the wizarding version of the Houses of Capulets and Montagues! Truly appreciate your feedback!
Every witches dream - a wizard addicted to chocolate.Subtle wordplay of kissing the frog - could have mentioned her prince.Hints of depths in Peter and the ring.Surprised at Remus finding fulfillment with professionals since he seems the type to find schoolgirls' immature flirtations charming, but perhaps, that's all he allows himself.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
'Every witches dream - a wizard addicted to chocolate.'--lol! Indeed. Ha! Ah, yes, where would the world be without maidens in need of their princes... Yes, more with Pettigrew and the ring. Remus probably, definitely, finds satisfaction in both professionals and in schoolgirls and their potential promises charming, however... he's never quite mustered up the will to act upon and reciprocate with a classmate he'd have to see every day (as opposed to being a random client, less obligation), not as cavalier as Sirius, let's say imho--until now when too much opportunity is making him an offer he doesn't any longer wish to refuse.;-)Thank you again for reading and the feedback, truly appreciate it!
Time compression as Remus goes from lonely boy to magical lover within a few days. They have not told each other about their major problems - the physicality of being wanted and touched has overwhelmed them. Both are denying what they've heard about the other. Remus is overdoing it as he wants to have Nagini in a perfect place, but this perfect place involves transgression and danger. Neither can accept the other's friends. The story is well constructed enough that, at this stage, clumsy snogging and groping would be as heart wrenching.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Ah, yes, regarding Remus, only in fanfiction--lol! Struggling to zero in on them and, if left alone, to just be alone with each other, who they would be without the millstones, without their peers, for once, Remus desiring to experience something uniquely for him, for them, feeling both an impulsiveness and freedom unlike before. Thank you so much for the read and feedback, truly appreciate it!
A key element of this chapter is Pomfrey who reacts to any threat from students but who is oblivious to Lucius who does deeper and more lasting harm. Perhaps Pomfrey can do something about the damage students do toeach other but is powerless against Lucius, and hence, she chooses to ignore what he does. Along these lines, Nagini does not complain to anyone about what Lucius has done, possibly because she believes no one can protect her.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Yes, from the indifferent to the insidious--things that are done in a semi-public setting and got away with partially due to position and the allowances given to those that hold power, such as a govenor of the school, affluent member of the society, for whatever reasons, etc. Lucius and Rodolphus are too close-knit for her to think objectively at this point; they've pressed the other's buttons too much.Thank you so much for continuing to read, truly appreciate it!
Merrythought may not be aware of its depth, but she is aware of house rivalry. It is not Sirius versu Remus in the duels.Thoughts and emotions conveyed by action and dialogue. It is 'us versus them' with with the conflict hard to stop and each side ignoring its own atrocities. Peter, the sneak, is goading others.If this has been going on a while, then the duellers would be treated as a separate class. Society would accept their injuries much as society accepts the injuries of professional athletes. Each dueller should have followers (groupies) - even Severus. There would also be bonding between the members of this separate class, but house rivalry runs deep except possibly for Nagini and Remus.Good portrait of Dumbledore and his occasionally cavalier attitude toward others.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
A blasé chord about house rivalry by the staff has always struck me as outrageous on one hand and utterly plausible on another--wanted to touch on that a bit. Yes, the Marauder era goings-on seemed very clearly divided and extreme as the predecessors of Harry Potter's generation at Hogwarts. Pettigrew's insidious inclinations also must have been notable, here an there, until he blossomed into fruition. Yes, the duellers would be looked upon in a special way, expected to hold their chins up at all times, the injuries as occupational hazards; yes, Dumbledore and his nonchalant ways--lol!Thank you so much for reading and the review, truly appreciate it!
It follows the literary tradition of beginning in media res.Professor Galatea Merrythoughtless.Rowling-style humor. anything from a sofa chair to a rodent. Which in hindsight had led to more than a few students being sent to Madam Pomfrey. That is, after they managed to catch the little rodent.Why are those four proficient in the Dark Arts? The first conjecture is alienation: Sirius from his family, Remus from society, and Severus from his fellow man. Nagini is still an unknown.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Thank you so much for reading this and the feedback, truly appreciate it! This is also one of my first stories, the offshoot from my other Nagini tale--I had originally wanted one story featuring the escapades of the trio Nagini, Severus, and Remus but... the Muse wouldn't cooperate and demanded two separate tales. So finding myself in a pickle with these characters, who refused to go away, I've slowly plotted it out. Merrythoughtless--HA! Mayhem running wildly in the classroom--catch the little rodents--lol! One can just imagine.;-)Yes, it seemed to me, for them to have become what they were very skilled at, as adults, Dark Arts professors and outlaws feared by Ministry and Death Eaters alike, the desire, skill, necessity and need to be very proficient in the Dark Arts had somehow been an innate part of them and their circumstances at an earlier stage, wanted to explore that by dropping in on them at an earlier time on the timeline of things.Thank you so much for your insightful thoughts!
It's all coming into place in line with canon - clever, Nag! Lupin spending time with Aurors will put him in the way of Tonks. And if this ends badly for Lupin and Nagini, it will explain why he never seemed able to fully commit to Tonks. And there was me thinking he was gay!! ;) This is the first time I felt chilled at the appearance of The Order.This can't end well.Or can it??
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you! Yes, believe it or not, in this oddity, I would like to keep with canon as much as possible - lol! - just exploring the possibilities in the back scenes: Being my twin, you know how my mind works-- yep, yep, and yep, with how he'll meet up with Tonks (small circle they move in - ha!)-- I finally indulged and purged myself in my first (and last) Remus slash one-shot (an anonymous prompt from an LJ thingy) which reads like a textbook, literally, of slashy content (didn't understand the importance of the prostrate being hit in flagrante delicto--googled it --and now, I understand - hahaha!). *whew* back to my hetero (or at least, bi - lol!) RemusOh, I'm so glad The Order came across like that to you because that is how precisely they will be--I have this perception they were as equally dark as those they were fighting (allowed to use the Unforgiveables, etc.)--the First Wizarding War has a level of brutality & intensity in the evolution of Voldy's rise to power and those who tried to counter it... Thank you again for all of your generous observations--truly, deeply appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you! Yes, believe it or not, in this oddity, I would like to keep with canon as much as possible - lol! - just exploring the possibilities in the back scenes: Being my twin, you know how my mind works-- yep, yep, and yep, with how he'll meet up with Tonks (small circle they move in - ha!)-- I finally indulged and purged myself in my first (and last) Remus slash one-shot (an anonymous prompt from an LJ thingy) which reads like a textbook, literally, of slashy content (didn't understand the importance of the prostrate being hit in flagrante delicto--googled it --and now, I understand - hahaha!). *whew* back to my hetero (or at least, bi - lol!) RemusOh, I'm so glad The Order came across like that to you because that is how precisely they will be--I have this perception they were as equally dark as those they were fighting (allowed to use the Unforgiveables, etc.)--the First Wizarding War has a level of brutality & intensity in the evolution of Voldy's rise to power and those who tried to counter it... Thank you again for all of your generous observations--truly, deeply appreciate it!xx
I'm breathless! Nagini's stiff-necked collar and strange green hue.... OH! What's happening to her? And poor Lupin! I love the idea of classification: XXXXX. It sounds like a department that should have a whole fanfiction to itself. Right now, I can't see this ending well for our erstwhile lovers, but whatever future you have in store for them, you have woven a fascinating and compelling tale - if very dark at times.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for the read and lovely, detailed feedback! I agree about the classification department - lol! Thank you so much for your generous supportive commentary and observations in spite of the content and pairing--truly, deeply appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for the read and lovely, detailed feedback! I agree about the classification department - lol! Thank you so much for your generous supportive commentary and observations in spite of the content and pairing--truly, deeply appreciate it!xx
Oh! Listen to him, Dumbledore. Why are you being so obtuse? Dear Nag, please get them out of this situation. What is going to happen to Nagini now? Off to find out.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for continuing to read this and for the feedback! Dumbles is being Dumbles--he always has the excuse of being preoccupied with greater good things--thank you again, really appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for continuing to read this and for the feedback! Dumbles is being Dumbles--he always has the excuse of being preoccupied with greater good things--thank you again, really appreciate it!xx
Alright, nag.... I'm getting ready for the heartbreak. Why can't they just get away? It seems so sad that she is trapped in the layers of her horrible family and their expectations. He's a lovely guy (werewolf transformations notwithstanding!) and it's so obvious he likes her - but every time they get closer, she seems to remember her obligations and pulls away. Come on Remus! Pxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh, Pxx, thank you so much--you needn't have, you know why--but thank you for the specific feedback, truly appreciate it! I was hoping that enough of his sincerity, his feelings for her are coming across, and hers for him--I agree: come on, Remus!--even Remus needs a little loving attention now and then - lol! Seriously, thank you for ALL of your support with my wandering muses... xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh, Pxx, thank you so much--you needn't have, you know why--but thank you for the specific feedback, truly appreciate it! I was hoping that enough of his sincerity, his feelings for her are coming across, and hers for him--I agree: come on, Remus!--even Remus needs a little loving attention now and then - lol! Seriously, thank you for ALL of your support with my wandering muses... xx
So Tonks is still in his future? Doesn't bode well for Nagini! :0
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Yes, Tonks has been seen by the Inner Eye:-( Thank you so much for continuing to read & the feedback--truly appreciate it!xx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Yes, Tonks has been seen by the Inner Eye:-( Thank you so much for continuing to read & the feedback--truly appreciate it!xx
Explanations are needed, but I'm sure she has a good one. :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for reading, and yes, explanations will be given with time--I think Remus will agree with you--she has a few good ones:-) Thanks again!xxx
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Dearest
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for reading, and yes, explanations will be given with time--I think Remus will agree with you--she has a few good ones:-) Thanks again!xxx
Well I can see why they felt the need to indulge in each other in the aftermath of the confrontation and revelation of Lupin's 'furry little problem' in the previous chapter.I'm really glad that Nagini took it so well, but perhaps she is already in too deep to be deterred by his animl side. Or perhaps it adds to his charms ;)Very juicy and well-written lemons too, Nag. I wish I could write them :). I have to say that I think your Lupin is much sexier than JKRs. I'm intrigued by the title: it sounds very Gaelic, is it Irish?But after all that, what a cliffhanger! Update very soon!!!!
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, thank you for all of the generous feedback - what a lovely gift:-) yes, they both couldn't resist, regardless of the furry little problem - LOL! Thank you for the feedback on the lemony content, and you're such a sweetheart about Lupin, thank you for your comments, hope he is a bit more than what JKR only allowed us to peek at - hehe! - I can't help wanting to give him a bit more *attention*; the title's Scottish, and is literally translated as 'second sight', more bits & pieces of Scottish to come later, just for flavouring:-) Thank you again for all of your support!
I really enjoyed this chapter, Nag! I know it is said a lot in reviews but I have to say that your characterisation of Severus is eerily acurate. He wasn't like some romantic, Rickmanised version of Snape, this was JKR's Snape through and through, yet without the Harry filter we are so used to. His reactions and dialogue were perfect. The argument between Lupin and Snape reminded me, to some extent, of the one some years later between Severus and Sirius at Grimmauld Place.I love the idea of Nagini part turning into Lily, and of Snape's reaction to that. I could really imagine him seething away as he discovers that his love is being used in such a cavalier way by his enemy.I know, I know, I'm focusing on the Sev bits, what am I like? It was a very well written and exciting chapter, but oh dear, trust Severus to spill the beans about Lupin's furry little secret (although, to be fair, there HAD been other clues). How will Nagini respond? I suppose I will just have to wait.
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Hahaha, oh
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, focus on Sev's bits all you want, my dear, I know I have & will - beyond my control! Thank you for your feedback on Sev's characterisation; I'm *blushing* at your compliment that he is recognisably JKR's Snape - as much as I am utterly made gaga whenever the Rickman appears, I did want the Sev in these stories to be more of JKR's harsh canon depiction of him, so, thank you for the feedback! It means a lot to me! I just felt he had to be a bit, justifiably (sorry Remus - hehe!) nasty to Lupin... (can't help being, um, loyal to Sev when he'll appear on the scene - more of Sev later!) Boys will be boys type of thingy going on... Sev would truly have been irked if anyone used anything-even-remotely-related-to-Lily, wouldn't e *sighing* 'Oh, Severus...' OK, I'l stop fousing on Sev - Thank you so much for the read & review - your precious free time!
Things went a bit downhil between them in this chapter. I hope you're planning to make it up to them later, missy! :P
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Thank you for reading & the review! I agree & I'll make a promise right now to make it up to them later! ;-) Thank you so much for all of your feedback!
Hehe, wonder who the Polyjuice will be. Hope it's not Sirius. :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Sirius - brilliant! ROFL! Hahaha - omg, I feel a crack/slash-fic, pwp, coming on me, you naughty
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
, or maybe a threesome and Remus has to experience & decide which one's the real Sirius & which one's the real Nagini - HA!:) I'm grinning wildly & giggling about that idea - Thank you so much for the read & observation! LOL!
Oops. They got a little carried away. What is she, a jellyfish? :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Hahaha! I love jellyfish, but Nag still has some vertabrae:) Neither of their spells could fully succeed as intended, due to each one's particular (biochemically speaking) precursive/'secret' conditions (more on that later) so a variant of it/each transfigured - thank you so much for the read & review!
Merrythought obviously gave NO thought to the pairings! :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Oh,
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
- you've made my day - Merlin bless you- thanks for reading & the review! It always amazed me how seemingly 'oblivious' the professors were to house rivalry... Again, thank you so much for the read - really appreciate it (know its 'way out there' - just wanted to give Remus a little attention...)!:)
About time Remus got himself a little lovin'! :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Here, here - absolutely! LOL! Thank you so much for the affirmation!:)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Here, here - absolutely! LOL! Thank you so much for the affirmation!:)
Sounds like two people who need a sympathetic ear. :)
Response from nagandsev (Author of The Twists of Fate)
Aww - thank you for reading & the review! Yeah, they both definitely could use & need a little objective sympathy without all the judgement and expectations of either's peers & acquaintances - thank you again, really appreciate it!:)