Potential
Chapter 7 of 7
silviaelisa22Series of drabbles written for Dramione Drabbles - 7 Kisses Challenge Valentine's Day 2010. Through the prompts, follow Draco and Hermione's osculation experimentation.
There was a perfectly good explanation as to why dating came as natural as breathing to Draco: he had had an exemplary upbringing, and courting women was part of the package. Asteria, in his parents' eyes, should have been the feather in his cap; dating her had been easy. However, predictably enough, Granger didn't even begin to compare with the other witches he had gone out with in the past. To put it simply, she didn't play by the rules.
They had gone out on four dates already. Draco would owl her, suggesting a reasonable time when he could swing by and pick her up at her flat; Granger would refuse, claiming they would only waste precious time. Instead she'd write a time and a place to meet at. Upon greeting her, he would peck her almost imperceptibly on the cheek, but she would withdraw almost immediately, diverting his attention to the uncanny chill of the evening or to the latest issue of the Daily Prophet.
Draco had long agreed with himself that if his 'doing things the right way' had been interpreted as doing things her way, so be it. Nonetheless, it was how their outings together always ended that irritated him; this was not the usual he had been planning to achieve with her. Before midnight struck, when he would gentlemanly offer to take her back to her flat, his offer would be politely declined. She was a grown woman, she would tell him, and she didn't need a bodyguard to escort her home.
Well, Merlin be damned he didn't manage to walk her to her door that night.
"Here I am, sorry to have kept you waiting!" she greeted him cheerfully.
Draco smiled pleasantly. "I haven't been here long," he lied.
He put forward his arm, which she took with a playful curtsy, and they started walking down the street.
"So where are we going tonight?" she asked.
"The theatre," he said simply.
It had taken him some effort to plan the evening. It was Valentine's Day and while he couldn't care less about the silly tradition, they had already agreed to go out that Sunday without bothering to check a calendar. Draco had therefore had less than two days to arrange everything, but that was part of the challenge with Granger and he revelled in it.
"Here?" She looked puzzled. "In Soho?"
"Yes."
The challenge tonight was to show her he had truly changed, and seeing as part of her heritage was Muggle, going into Muggle London seemed like a good idea. He was just lucky that the entrance to the Leaky Cauldron was so close by to the city theatre district; they arrived at the playhouse in no time.
Granger was still looking at him warily as he collected the tickets and led her into the hall, but when the lights dimmed she had to put a damper on her doubts to enjoy the performance. Draco was quite pleased with his choice and even more so after stealing a glance at his date to find that, by the end of the second act, she was clutching his arm in sheer excitement; Hamlet had just revealed his plans to catch the conscience of the King and, in Draco's opinion, the play had barely begun.
"I thought that was an interesting adaptation," he said.
He really did. In the four hours they had sat in there, Granger hadn't been the only one enjoying herself.
"Yes," she replied, "yes, it was."
Her voice was subdued and her gaze was downcast; he stopped walking.
"Did you not like it?"
That seemed to rouse her, and she lifted her head with a jerk. She asked him to forgive her, that the play had affected her more than she could have anticipated, and she just needed a moment to process it all. Draco smiled at her and when they started walking again, they were conversing about the actors' performance and the choice of costumes. He went as far as to suggest they might stop by a pub and talk a bit more over drinks, but Granger heard a distant clock chime the hour and dismissed the idea; it was getting late, and they were both working the following morning.
Charing Cross Road was, for the most part, empty and near the Leaky Cauldron, there was no one in sight. They lingered on the sidewalk for a few minutes, their conversation slowly dying; Draco could see Granger's fingers itching to grab her wand and Disapparate away.
"I had a good time tonight," she said.
"Me too," he replied.
She caressed his cheek with a small smile in her eyes. He had learnt to recognise the signs of her departure, and he knew exactly what she would say, how she was going to break it to him that then, like on any other of their dates, she would be taking herself home. In turn he would make a half-hearted attempt at changing her mind, but Granger would huff and be on her way.
He saw her lips move, but the sentence she was supposed to be uttering wasn't in sync with the movement. Draco blinked.
"I'm sorry, what?" he asked, leaning closer.
Her smile grew wider. "I said," she began, "take me home, Draco."
Maybe she had been waiting for something, he considered, or perhaps she had still been testing the waters and allowing him to determine when the date ended meant giving him more power than she deemed advisable. He had gone over the details of their outings, but other than her already established desire for control, why couldn't she give him an inch? He was ready to swear he wasn't going to take the rest of her arm, if that was what she was afraid of.
All that thinking and now she was giving him what he wanted. And this time, he hadn't even asked. He grinned at her, hugging her briefly and Apparating them both just outside her flat; he had only seen it once when they had met up not too far from it and he had insisted she'd show him the place. As soon as they arrived, Draco expected her to step back and regain the boundaries, but she surprised him once more by remaining within his reach.
"What changed?" he asked, genuinely curious.
"Five dates," she said. "I always wait five dates before I really give the guy a chance."
Draco frowned. "But... I left my..."
She shushed him with a finger. "I know, I know," she told him. "We didn't go about this the conventional way, but now the test is over, you passed," she smiled again as she went on, "with flying colours."
He couldn't help smiling too, and though part of him desperately wanted an invitation to join her in her flat, his manners reined him. He brought both her hands to his lips, softly kissing her knuckles; Granger shivered slightly, but her smile didn't falter.
"Is that how you plan to wish me goodnight?" she teased him.
"What did you have in mind?" he countered. "It's only our fifth date, after all."
"No, it's not only that," she said. "It's Valentine's Day."
Her hands broke free of his grasp and she clasped her arms around his neck, toying with his hair while she locked lips with him and pushed him gently against the door to her flat. Draco thought he liked this unconventional witch, and he deepened the kiss to show her just how much he liked her; his hands stroked the small of her back, and the frustration he had felt waned with the satisfaction of kissing her properly after his previous failed attempts.
When he was the one to withdraw from the kiss first, his first thought was of how to turn that into a regular occurrence.
"Goodnight, Draco," she said breathlessly, cutting into his thoughts.
He pecked her once more on the cheek. "Goodnight, Hermione."
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Prompt: Goodnight Kiss.
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Awww! I likes... More please?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Sorry about the late reply! I'm glad you liked PP for I liked writing it very very much. I am writing a small one-shot at the moment, we'll see how that goes. :)
Awww.... so sweet!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
^^ Pleased to hear you liked it! It was quite an adventure to write!
Oh its so kewl how she kept off-kilter the whole time. What a fun bedtime story. I've really enjoyed Draco's reactions in this a lot.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Draco was really fun to write! I had never expected him to be, so I had always refrained from letting him speak. Although, it was difficult because I couldn't show any of Hermione's internal struggle in this, it was all Draco all the time. :) I'm happy you liked the story and I enjoyed reading your thoughts as you read it very very much! Thank you!
LOL awww It's so sweet that he was able to read the situation and let her have some control. Very smart guy. Really enjoying this one - How did I possibly miss it before?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Oh, you're making me blush! Anyway, I agree, very smart of Draco... I think he wouldn't be totally clueless about women, even if Asteria was his main interest for quite some time and she's definitely not the I-need-to-be-in-control type of girl. Not in this story, at least. I wanted them to have a quiet respite from all the drama and the prompt came just at the right time!
Oh did Harry hit him with an Imperious? Astoria's reaction was about what I expected - two days before the wedding! Oh poor girl. Harry's reaction was a surprise, but I liked Draco's reasponce a lot! Whoot!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Hehe, her reaction was pretty standard. Goodbye china set! Yes, that was an Imperius and a slightly dark!Harry to go with it. I had a very visual idea of how Draco would have behaved with Harry in this, so so so glad you liked it too! ^^
Okay this is going to come to a horrible head soon isn't it? I mean, he's slipping - and needs to talk to Astoria, soon.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I had half a mind to write the showdown between Asteria and Draco, but due to time (and prompt) constraints I finally settled with what you've read in the next chapter. I'm overjoyed you caught the 'he's slipping' thing because I was really trying to give this chapter a sense of foreboding.
Oh he and Astoria had that fight over Hermione afterall. So, to make matters better - he kissed her agian? LOL not the best move for his relationship with his fiancée.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Despite the carefree outlook in the first chapter, things really aren't that good with the happy couple, are they? But yes, veeeery bad move on his part!
LOL Oh he's sinking in deeper! This is really funny. I love his reactions.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I'm glad you liked Pie! I was afraid it'd be too icky (it certainly was for me writing it).
EEk! How did he manage that and not get hexed?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
You know, a lot of people have asked me this by now. My thinking was that the circumstances were... complicated, when this first encounter takes place. ;)
Poor Draco, having to wait for the fifth date! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Hehe. I think he wouldn't have endured another (test-)date and Hermione, luckily, understood that! ^^ Thanks for sticking with me until the end!
I'm almost sad it's over. Because their story is just beginig after all. And I'd love to hear more about the dating until the proposal at least. Anyway thanks for the fun.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I am so so happy you enjoyed the ride. :) It was an exciting challenge for me because I didn't think I'd be any good at writing romance and kissing scenes! I like the open ending because it gives you room to expand it with your imagination, but yes, it was a bittersweet feeling to end this. Thank you for reading!
Holy cow! Harry really ought to have gotten his magic under control by now- most folks couldn't/wouldn't cast a spell just by being really angry and forbidding a relationship. But then, TBWL would be the one to break the rules... and so would Hermione. I like the magical imperative, and the subsequent flouting of it. A really formidable kiss indeed, if it's breaking curses!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I think Harry has proven to be very agreeable to bending the rules, even when Unforgivables are concerned. Plus, this is all happening before the 'all was well' of the Epilogue, so I allowed for some post-traumatic stress. It was challenging to write this piece, tbh, because I really really wanted to give the forbidden part of the prompt a double meaning; what Harry is doing is probably forbidden magic, but Draco's (and Hermione's) willpower is stronger, obviously. Thank you so much for reading!
Good going, Draco! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I'm very proud of him in this chapter, yes. ^_^
WOW! I think that was the most formidable kiss of all.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
^^ Merci! Harry helped Draco make up his mind, didn't he?
So he is seriously considering cancellinghis wedding? Wow ! I wouldn't have expected him to rebel againt his parents wishes. Of course he has yet to talk to everyone. And I want to be there to witness that.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
In all sincerity, I can't fully answer you now, but I will say that this is all happening at one imprecise point in the HP history, so... anything can happen. ;) I'm sorry, I really don't want to spoil the experience for you.
LOL. Sneaky witch! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
She is, isn't she? ^_^ I'm happy to keep you entertained!
add fav story! ;))
That one is really lovely. So I guess he will be marrying her. Later.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
You're pleased! ^^ Thank you, I tried a softer approach with Prospect; they had both been on a roller-coaster so far and I thought they deserved a break. Less action/drama and more... Draco and Hermione.
Bet that was unexpected! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
To write? Most certainly, thank you dictionary! ;) And to both of them too, but we're hitting the point of no return, aren't we? *cue to ominous music* Thank you for reading!
At least he found THE way to shut her mouth.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
And he's so good at it... Malfoy, Draco Malfoy - License to Kiss :D Thank you for reading!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
ROFL! That could be the prompt of the Year.
Eww. What a way to get revenge! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Revenge, a dish best served cold? Hermione thinks it's best served hot! ;)Thanks for reading, and reviewing!
That is a brilliant repsonse to the prompt. I can't wait to find out if he will cancel his wedding or not.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying this! I can't say much, but you'll find out... soon enough...
I've always been leery of apple pie, for the same reason as Draco- they're usually too sweet and gooey! Of course, if snogging came with, perhaps my opinions would change. Though really, kissing Hermione while skipping out on your rehearsal dinner? Bad form! (When will Astoria find out?)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Gooey being the operative word... ugh, apple pie...I think it is rather contradictory of Draco to chastise Hermione and her manners when, as you said, he is cheating on his wife-to-be! He didn't initiate the kiss, but after a weak struggle, he didn't exactly shove her away. That dinner must have been a nightmare...(Will Asteria find out? Maybe, or maybe not. :P)
Anonymous
LMAO!
That was beautiful, sweet, and well-written! Nice job! ^_^
Author's Response: Ahah! Thank you, such sweet compliments... *blush* I loved writing it! :)
He is lucky Astoria didn't arrive a few minutes earlier or he would have been in serious trouble.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
If he hadn't been in such a hurry... :)Thanks for reading!