Prospect
Chapter 6 of 7
silviaelisa22Series of drabbles written for Dramione Drabbles - 7 Kisses Challenge Valentine's Day 2010. Through the prompts, follow Draco and Hermione's osculation experimentation.
"Episkey!"
The loud crack of his nose mending made Draco's skin crawl, but he bit back a curse and touched his face tentatively. He peered at the witch sitting next to him on the sofa, venturing a wan smile in her general direction.
"Thanks."
Granger waved her hand. "Don't mention it."
It seemed strange to have her there, in his home, in a room that was very much similar to the drawing room in which she had been tortured by his aunt. Mainly, it was her attire, or lack thereof, that stood in stark contrast with the lavish furniture all around them. It was also the mere fact that, in the years they had known each other, they had never had a real conversation. Even now, after sharing a total of five earth-shattering kisses, Draco couldn't recall talking to her for more than three minutes, in his office, about the blasted bittersweet plant.
"Alea iacta est," he muttered.
The die has been cast.
"I gather you told her," Granger said; her gaze was scanning the books of his personal library with a critical eye.
He nodded. "She threw china at me," he told her.
The corner of her lips curved upwards, but she didn't comment; instead, she breathed deeply and rested her back against the sofa. Draco imitated her, stretching his arms into the air and lowering them slowly as his body fell back, not so subtly sneaking his left arm behind Granger's shoulders. Her small smile widened a little, and she began nibbling her lower lip with her teeth, suppressing a chuckle.
"What?" he asked, intent on keeping the volume of his voice to a quiet murmur.
"Draco Malfoy." She turned her head slightly to look at him. "Are you hitting on me?"
He didn't even try to hide his smirk. "Maybe," he said.
There was a gleam in her eyes that he had never seen before; she gave the impression of being faintly amused by his surreal attempt at romanticism. He had to admit he was a little puzzled by his behaviour too. He had been taught how to court a woman, but Granger was nothing like Asteria. His former fiancée had been meek and unassertive, hence his surprise at her earlier outburst of rage.
"You don't need to play these games with me," Granger said.
"Hermione," he said softly, "I'm not playing games."
"We're already past the unspoken attraction," she countered. "I already know you want to be with me and..."
"I want to do things the right way," he interrupted.
Granger blinked twice in a terribly slow motion. She nervously licked her lips, and Draco saw the fingers of her right hand fidget on her knee. Her eyes were searching his own, though he couldn't understand what she was looking for, and when she spoke, it was in a faint whisper as if she were afraid of her own words.
"What do you mean?" she asked.
Why the sudden change? Draco wondered. Her mischievous, confident side he had had the pleasure of observing in the weeks she had pursued him had been incomprehensibly overruled by this less spirited half of her; he was slightly taken aback and thoroughly confused.
"I plan to date you properly, now that I'm a free man," he said.
Her hand gave a small spasm that his keen eyes did not miss, and without knowing the reason for it, he finally understood. It was fear. Granger was afraid of him taking control; it was something she had cleverly avoided dealing with in the past by making sure she was always the one to set up their encounters. However, now that she had got him to do the one thing she couldn't do herself – dispose of Asteria – she had realised she wouldn't be the one in charge of their relationship any longer; the prospect had driven all her confidence out of her.
Draco smiled.
"What?" she asked, thus mirroring his own previous confusion.
"Do I have your permission to kiss you?"
Granger bit her lip, clearly trying to decipher his intentions.
"I guess so..." she said.
She didn't sound at all convinced, but he supposed in the state she was in, he couldn't bank on anything more than a diffident consent. His arm, still behind her shoulders, served as leverage to press her flush against him, and he searched her fidgeting hands with his own left hand. He held her, waiting for her to figure out that he was letting her be in control of the situation. Her overactive mind was still doubtful of him though, and when she moved forward, her kiss was timid, and she kept her eyes half-open for a few seconds longer than usual.
Usual. Draco couldn't wait to apply that word to more aspects of their relationship.
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Prompt: Shy Kiss.
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Awww! I likes... More please?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Sorry about the late reply! I'm glad you liked PP for I liked writing it very very much. I am writing a small one-shot at the moment, we'll see how that goes. :)
Awww.... so sweet!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
^^ Pleased to hear you liked it! It was quite an adventure to write!
Oh its so kewl how she kept off-kilter the whole time. What a fun bedtime story. I've really enjoyed Draco's reactions in this a lot.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Draco was really fun to write! I had never expected him to be, so I had always refrained from letting him speak. Although, it was difficult because I couldn't show any of Hermione's internal struggle in this, it was all Draco all the time. :) I'm happy you liked the story and I enjoyed reading your thoughts as you read it very very much! Thank you!
LOL awww It's so sweet that he was able to read the situation and let her have some control. Very smart guy. Really enjoying this one - How did I possibly miss it before?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Oh, you're making me blush! Anyway, I agree, very smart of Draco... I think he wouldn't be totally clueless about women, even if Asteria was his main interest for quite some time and she's definitely not the I-need-to-be-in-control type of girl. Not in this story, at least. I wanted them to have a quiet respite from all the drama and the prompt came just at the right time!
Oh did Harry hit him with an Imperious? Astoria's reaction was about what I expected - two days before the wedding! Oh poor girl. Harry's reaction was a surprise, but I liked Draco's reasponce a lot! Whoot!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Hehe, her reaction was pretty standard. Goodbye china set! Yes, that was an Imperius and a slightly dark!Harry to go with it. I had a very visual idea of how Draco would have behaved with Harry in this, so so so glad you liked it too! ^^
Okay this is going to come to a horrible head soon isn't it? I mean, he's slipping - and needs to talk to Astoria, soon.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I had half a mind to write the showdown between Asteria and Draco, but due to time (and prompt) constraints I finally settled with what you've read in the next chapter. I'm overjoyed you caught the 'he's slipping' thing because I was really trying to give this chapter a sense of foreboding.
Oh he and Astoria had that fight over Hermione afterall. So, to make matters better - he kissed her agian? LOL not the best move for his relationship with his fiancée.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Despite the carefree outlook in the first chapter, things really aren't that good with the happy couple, are they? But yes, veeeery bad move on his part!
LOL Oh he's sinking in deeper! This is really funny. I love his reactions.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I'm glad you liked Pie! I was afraid it'd be too icky (it certainly was for me writing it).
EEk! How did he manage that and not get hexed?
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
You know, a lot of people have asked me this by now. My thinking was that the circumstances were... complicated, when this first encounter takes place. ;)
Poor Draco, having to wait for the fifth date! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Hehe. I think he wouldn't have endured another (test-)date and Hermione, luckily, understood that! ^^ Thanks for sticking with me until the end!
I'm almost sad it's over. Because their story is just beginig after all. And I'd love to hear more about the dating until the proposal at least. Anyway thanks for the fun.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I am so so happy you enjoyed the ride. :) It was an exciting challenge for me because I didn't think I'd be any good at writing romance and kissing scenes! I like the open ending because it gives you room to expand it with your imagination, but yes, it was a bittersweet feeling to end this. Thank you for reading!
Holy cow! Harry really ought to have gotten his magic under control by now- most folks couldn't/wouldn't cast a spell just by being really angry and forbidding a relationship. But then, TBWL would be the one to break the rules... and so would Hermione. I like the magical imperative, and the subsequent flouting of it. A really formidable kiss indeed, if it's breaking curses!
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I think Harry has proven to be very agreeable to bending the rules, even when Unforgivables are concerned. Plus, this is all happening before the 'all was well' of the Epilogue, so I allowed for some post-traumatic stress. It was challenging to write this piece, tbh, because I really really wanted to give the forbidden part of the prompt a double meaning; what Harry is doing is probably forbidden magic, but Draco's (and Hermione's) willpower is stronger, obviously. Thank you so much for reading!
Good going, Draco! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
I'm very proud of him in this chapter, yes. ^_^
WOW! I think that was the most formidable kiss of all.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
^^ Merci! Harry helped Draco make up his mind, didn't he?
So he is seriously considering cancellinghis wedding? Wow ! I wouldn't have expected him to rebel againt his parents wishes. Of course he has yet to talk to everyone. And I want to be there to witness that.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
In all sincerity, I can't fully answer you now, but I will say that this is all happening at one imprecise point in the HP history, so... anything can happen. ;) I'm sorry, I really don't want to spoil the experience for you.
LOL. Sneaky witch! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
She is, isn't she? ^_^ I'm happy to keep you entertained!
add fav story! ;))
That one is really lovely. So I guess he will be marrying her. Later.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
You're pleased! ^^ Thank you, I tried a softer approach with Prospect; they had both been on a roller-coaster so far and I thought they deserved a break. Less action/drama and more... Draco and Hermione.
Bet that was unexpected! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
To write? Most certainly, thank you dictionary! ;) And to both of them too, but we're hitting the point of no return, aren't we? *cue to ominous music* Thank you for reading!
At least he found THE way to shut her mouth.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
And he's so good at it... Malfoy, Draco Malfoy - License to Kiss :D Thank you for reading!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
ROFL! That could be the prompt of the Year.
Eww. What a way to get revenge! :)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Revenge, a dish best served cold? Hermione thinks it's best served hot! ;)Thanks for reading, and reviewing!
That is a brilliant repsonse to the prompt. I can't wait to find out if he will cancel his wedding or not.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying this! I can't say much, but you'll find out... soon enough...
I've always been leery of apple pie, for the same reason as Draco- they're usually too sweet and gooey! Of course, if snogging came with, perhaps my opinions would change. Though really, kissing Hermione while skipping out on your rehearsal dinner? Bad form! (When will Astoria find out?)
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
Gooey being the operative word... ugh, apple pie...I think it is rather contradictory of Draco to chastise Hermione and her manners when, as you said, he is cheating on his wife-to-be! He didn't initiate the kiss, but after a weak struggle, he didn't exactly shove her away. That dinner must have been a nightmare...(Will Asteria find out? Maybe, or maybe not. :P)
Anonymous
LMAO!
That was beautiful, sweet, and well-written! Nice job! ^_^
Author's Response: Ahah! Thank you, such sweet compliments... *blush* I loved writing it! :)
He is lucky Astoria didn't arrive a few minutes earlier or he would have been in serious trouble.
Response from silviaelisa22 (Author of Pesky Pecks)
If he hadn't been in such a hurry... :)Thanks for reading!