lovely, just lovely.  muchas gracias

Great POV from Severus on his wedding day.  Thank you for translating this for us to enjoy!Beth

What an AWESOME story...thank you

Wonderful story, I loved to read about a totally satisfied and happy Severus. He deserved to be a lucky bastard:-)))

This was lovely - a very good interpretation of the Marriage Law and wonderful language and imagery. :)

Very sweet story! I really liked this line a lot:She danced like a leaf caught in the wind. And I was that wind.

You did an incredible job translating this story. There are some lines that defy translation and that are so much more evocative in Spanish, but you achieved a wonderful thing here. No me sorprende para nada que lo hayas logrado!

That was bloody brilliant!

Thank you for translating.  It was a really good story.

Thank you so much for letting those who don't understand spanish discover this wonderful piece of writing.

I'm not particularly into reading SS/HG stories at the moment, but this caught my attention and made me change my mind.  I loved the fact that it was written in the first person from Snape's POV - it really made it seem real.Parts of it were so moving and truly beautiful, yet also heartbreaking; especially Snape's low self-opinion/self-esteem and the fact that he didn't seem to think himself worthy of Hermione (or indeed any woman.) I think this low opinion seems to fit in well with canon Snape as well, in that everyone assumes it would be terrible for Hermione to marry him, assuming he's such a heartless brute - something that really irks me time & time again as I have never believed this. Evidence of the sensitive, tender man is always there in JKR's reminder (whether we like it or not) of his deep love & constant feelings for Lily (even to the extent of his Patronous changing to a doe like hers.)'I'm one lucky bastard' he says quite frequently, but, IMHO, I know who I think is the luckiest! Thanks for translating/sharing your friend's lovely story! :-)

Oooooohhhhhhh. I'm sooooooo not surprised that you chose to translate this. It's a very enjoyable read!

This was really nice.  I thought it wasn't going to turn out well when I started reading, despite the romance genre.  But I love where it went.  I think things are going to work out just fine for them.  So, bravo to June for writing such a lovely story, and bravo to you for making it available to us.

wonderful!

This was really good.  I enjoyed reading it.

There have been so many amazing stories produced by the Marriage Law challenge and this is one of them!  Short and sweet.

Thats really wonderful, Loved it so much.