Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 3
sara lady dalianA/N: This story was written quite a while ago, and some of you may have read it on another archive. Slytherinlaurel has given it an overhaul for me and it came out even better. She is a wonderful beta, and I couldn't repost these without her wonderful assistance. This is one of the first fanfics I ever wrote and was inspired by the Gary Allen song “Man to Man.” It is not a song fic, really, but a recognition of the song's universal situation. This is a three-chapter ficlet from Severus. The next story, "Something to Talk About," will come from Hermione. Both are completely written and will follow in a timely manner.
Disclaimer: I will say this once. My initials are not JKR. There. End of Story.
He was just covering Hermione with a blanket when he heard his classroom door slam open for the second time that evening.
Severus Snape sneered to himself as he heard his ‘visitor.’ That boy could wait until Lucius Malfoy grew wrinkles before Snape would hurry with this task. He flicked his wand over the girl, and the accumulated potions smears, dribbles and mess on her face and robes disappeared. Another flick lit the fireplace. Yet another dimmed the candles and sconces.
With the unhurried grace that he had perfected over years preying upon unsuspecting Hufflepuffs, he moved from his office – via a door that he now had to open – and into his classroom. As he had suspected there was a rather irate, male Gryffindor standing over Miss Grangers’ belongings.
Though most of the students could guess Professor Snape had a temper, very few had ever seen it in full force. Severus had grown very good at hiding the storm that raged inside him, most of the time. But this insolent Gryffindor was lowering the walls separating his freckles from Severus' fury very quickly.
“Well, well, if it is not one of the resident Gryffindor dunderheads. Come for a volunteer detention? Gryffindor bravery is certainly strong tonight.” The soft, menacing words somehow managed to echo off all the walls of the dungeon, producing an effect similar to Stupefy in its victim. Finally, the tall, lanky young man straightened his shoulders before gathering that same maligned bravery. When he managed to turn around, he faced a Professor who seemed to be oozing more evil than usual.
“I was just…” he paused, reflexively swallowing, “looking for Hermione. We had a d-- meeting this evening, and she didn’t come. She missed dinner, too.” The boy’s eyes were large, bright and slightly dilated.
Black eyes, cold and harsh, bored into the student’s. Snape’s mind remembered the girl’s eyes when she entered his classroom earlier that evening. Whatever the reason that she had not wanted to be with this little... dunderhead... it was something serious. “You have missed her, apparently. When you find her, you may tell your friend that she has lost Gryffindor five points for littering my classroom.” Snape sneered at the boy who was now looking more indignant by the second. “And as for you, I suggest you get back to your tower before curfew. If I catch you still about, it will be fifty points from Gryffindor for you and whomever you are with.”
The boy said nothing else, but clearly wanted to speak the disrespectful thoughts running through his head. His eyes widened and flared; his temper was begging to be let out and given a few minutes reign. However, in one of the smartest moves he had made since first year, he held that temper in check and left the Potions classroom - but not before he slammed the door behind him.
Snape glowered at the door as if he could pierce the boy who had just left. Damn male Gryffindors. They were always acting so… Gryffindorish. At the thought of Gryffindors, his mind flashed a picture of the female lying on his office couch. Why she was worth such consideration he did not yet know, but he was finding that she was different from her housemates. She, at least, could keep a civil tongue in her head and had learned how to keep her own mouth shut – most of the time.
He, out of habit, started to bottle the cooled and completed potions and placed her freshly prepared ingredients under a holding charm. In just a few minutes, he was done, but he still did not know what to do about the sleeping girl on his couch. If this were any other student, he would have woken her with a rather rude jinx and sent her about her way with a nice deduction of points. However, as she was not any other student, and the situation was definitely not a normal one, he could not. Minerva was not in the castle now, so he could not send her there.
Severus sighed as he walked back into his office – via a door that once again opened for him and his armful of supplies. As he sat the supplies down on the shelf next to the door, he saw the answer – a flask of a very special potion. A wicked smile appeared on his face. She could go there, and no one would think anything of it.
He walked over to the fireplace and grabbed a handful of Floo powder. Just as he was about ready to throw it in the fire, he saw a burst of green flames.
And Albus Dumbledore’s head.
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32 Reviews | 7.13/10 Average
very nice. I am intrigued. Please keep going!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Hello - The next story is Something To Talk About. It's written and being uploaded - slowly. Thanks for the read and review. Sara
oh now this is interesting.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thanks! Truffles - Sara
Ah ha! Cryptic as ever, Dumbledore has given Severus much to think about. Hell, he's given me more to think about!Wonderful way to write a series of related stories! And now that I have something to think about, I think I'll go read chapter one of Something to Talk About.Thanks!Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
There is much to think about. Sometimes I think Severus has been hiding so long, so deep, that genuine caring and sympathy are completely foriegn to him. He's about to need a passport. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sara
LOL! Albus' timing can be soooooo bad! Wait a minute... did Ron go whining to Dumbledore? And where was Severus about to send Hermione? I've gotta go check out the last chapter, so I can begin reading "Something to Talk About."*grins* Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*shoo, *shoo... off with you... Thanks for reviewing... Truffles to reviewers... Sara
I loved this and I'm looking forward to the new story.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*squees and claps hands. Thank you! I will probably be posting the first chapter of the next installment towards the end of next week. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sara
Huh, now what does that old codger want?
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*smiles... You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reading and reviewing.... Sara
Intriguing chapter. Where's he planning to take her and what's Dumbledore's head doing in his Floo?
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*Smiles for things yet to come. You shall see, my dear reader... Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sara
He let Ron off far too easily. Hope he gets another chance later! :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
We'll just have to see what happens. Afterall - the insult wasn't entirely his to settle. And he's wondering about his own concern. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Truffles - Sara
Dear evil author,This is very good. But I was just really getting into the story, and the rest of the chapter won't load onto my screen. It just stops mid action. *off to call tech support* Well, I'm told the rest will be out soon, but I'm afraid that is just unacceptable. I'm going to need it now. Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.Your faithful reader,Holly :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*cackles... I guess it's a good thing that I've got the story written, isn't it? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. The next chapter will be put into Q Sunday night and probably posted Thursday or Friday. I hope you can bear the suspense until then. Truffles - Sara
Ohh go where??
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
You're just going to have to see. There are still several questions to be answered. Fortunately, chapter 3 will be put in Q on Sunday night - hopefully out next Thursday or Friday. Unfortunately, not all the questions you have will be answered at the end. Those will have to wait until the next story. I hope you continue to read. Thanks for the review - Truffles, Sara
Nice to see he didn't turn her away. :)
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
No, he didn't turn her away, and that surprised the devil in him. He's not sure why, and that knowledge will be quite a while in coming. Thanks for the review! Sara
OMG! Who could it be slamming his classroom door a second time? Malfoy... perhaps?I love it!Beth
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
You'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for reviewing! Truffles - Sara
I also was intrigued and am looking forward to the next chapter. But I, too, keep getting update notifications. What's going on?
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
I am so sorry for the constant emails. I, too, am getting concerned as I keep getting "Story Validation" emails. I have contacted the Headmistress twice, but have not heard back. Please accept my sincerest appologies and a box of my best virtual Truffles.
If it helps, chapter 2 is in Q waiting to be validated. Here is a sneak peek:
SaraThough most of the students could guess Professor Snape had a temper, very few had ever seen it in full force. Severus had grown very good at hiding the storm that raged inside him, most of the time. But this insolent Gryffindor was lowering the walls separating his freckles from Severus' fury very quickly.
I like this story enough to have added it to my favorites. Now, I am constantly receiving email notices that it's been updated only to find it hasn't. Do you know what's going on? I've received 4 separate update notices just today.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
I do appologize. I, too, have been receiving similar notices, except they are "Story Validation" emails. I have written the Headmistress twice, but haven't heard back. Please accept my sincerest appologies and a box of my best virtual Truffles.
If it helps, chapter 2 is in Q waiting to be validated. Here is a sneak peek:
SaraThough most of the students could guess Professor Snape had a temper, very few had ever seen it in full force. Severus had grown very good at hiding the storm that raged inside him, most of the time. But this insolent Gryffindor was lowering the walls separating his freckles from Severus' fury very quickly.
Response from ladyljd (Reviewer)
Wow! Thanks for the wonderful sneak peek. All is forgiven!! And may all the system gremlins be defeated!Looking forward to reading more ...
Now who could that be?I like the respect Severus obviously has for Hermione.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
The thing about this scenario is that we are seeing a very small segment. We're picking up in the middle of their association - she's already done the "professor can you approve my project" bit and has already started the research. He's already starting to see the differences in between this Hermione and the little hand-waving firstie that she used to be.
Okay....now who????Great start and I am looking forward to your update.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thanks kimbee! The next update will be put into Q later today. Thanks for reviewing - Sara
I have a feeling this is gonna be good. Eagerly waiting for next chapter!Livvy
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
There are times when we just know drama is going to occur. And as humans we eagerly await it. The next chapter will go into the Q later today. Thanks for reviewing - Sara
Oh great now we have to guess...my money is on Ron, hurry with chapter 2 please
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
You'll just have to wait and see. Chapter 2 will go into Q later this evening. Thanks for reviewing - Sara
Interesting start, wonder how's in the classroom?Looking forward to reading more!
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thanks! I will be putting the next part in the Q later today. I'm glad you enjoyed the first part. Sara
Look forward to the next installment.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thanks - it will be put in Q later today. Sara
Very entertaining, I look forward to more.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thanks! The second installment will be put in Q sometime later today. Sara
Oh, I've never seen this. I like it so far.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
It was posted years ago over at SH. I'm glad I was able to give you something new. The next installment will be put into Q later today. Thanks for the review! Sara
Very nice.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
Thank you! The second part will be put in Q later today. Sara
For whatever reason, the "Gryffindor bravery is certainly strong tonight" conjured up images of the centaurs' "Mars is bright tonight. Unusually bright." Made me smile a little, even if it was unintentional. You have several good one-liners in this chapter; separating freckles from fury, and Lucius' unwrinkling face, that really stand out and add humor and sparkle.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
*smiles... thank you! I needed a smile just now. I hope you enjoy the rest of the work. Truffles - Sara
When will be reading "Something to Talk About"? Hopefully soon.
Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)
I'm hoping so. It's completely written (8 chapters plus epilogue) and off to the beta's. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Sara