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Potions Under Duress Man to... Man?
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sara lady dalian

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Drama Angst General Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 3,979 Words 3 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus has words with a disgruntled suitor of Hermione's. Words are said, accusations are made and feelings are discovered.

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Chapters (3)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3


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sara lady dalian

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10/10

mimmom

very nice.  I am intrigued.  Please keep going!

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Hello - The next story is Something To Talk About.  It's written and being uploaded - slowly.  Thanks for the read and review.  Sara

10/10

mimmom

oh now this is interesting.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thanks!  Truffles - Sara

10/10

braye27

Ah ha!  Cryptic as ever, Dumbledore has given Severus much to think about.  Hell, he's given me more to think about!Wonderful way to write a series of related stories!  And now that I have something to think about, I think I'll go read chapter one of Something to Talk About.Thanks!Beth

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

There is much to think about.  Sometimes I think Severus has been hiding so long, so deep, that genuine caring and sympathy are completely foriegn to him.  He's about to need a passport.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Sara

10/10

braye27

LOL!  Albus' timing can be soooooo bad!  Wait a minute... did Ron go whining to Dumbledore?  And where was Severus about to send Hermione?  I've gotta go check out the last chapter, so I can begin reading "Something to Talk About."*grins*  Beth

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*shoo, *shoo... off with you...  Thanks for reviewing...  Truffles to reviewers...  Sara

10/10

makaem

I loved this and I'm looking forward to the new story.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*squees and claps hands.  Thank you!  I will probably be posting the first chapter of the next installment towards the end of next week.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Sara

0/10

debjunk

Huh, now what does that old codger want?

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*smiles...  You'll just have to wait and see.  Thanks for reading and reviewing....  Sara

10/10

Jinxie

Intriguing chapter.  Where's he planning to take her and what's Dumbledore's head doing in his Floo? 

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*Smiles for things yet to come.  You shall see, my dear reader...  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Sara

0/10

sunny33

He let Ron off far too easily.  Hope he gets another chance later! :)

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

We'll just have to see what happens.  Afterall - the insult wasn't entirely his to settle.  And he's wondering about his own concern.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Truffles - Sara

10/10

HBAR

Dear evil author,This is very good.  But I was just really getting into the story, and the rest of the chapter won't load onto my screen.  It just stops mid action.  *off to call tech support* Well, I'm told the rest will be out soon, but I'm afraid that is just unacceptable.  I'm going to need it now.  Thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.Your faithful reader,Holly :)

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*cackles...  I guess it's a good thing that I've got the story written, isn't it?  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  The next chapter will be put into Q Sunday night and probably posted Thursday or Friday.  I hope you can bear the suspense until then.  Truffles - Sara

8/10

Nessa

Ohh go where??

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

You're just going to have to see.  There are still several questions to be answered.  Fortunately, chapter 3 will be put in Q on Sunday night - hopefully out next Thursday or Friday.  Unfortunately, not all the questions you have will be answered at the end.  Those will have to wait until the next story.  I hope you continue to read.  Thanks for the review - Truffles, Sara

0/10

sunny33

Nice to see he didn't turn her away. :)

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

No, he didn't turn her away, and that surprised the devil in him.  He's not sure why, and that knowledge will be quite a while in coming.  Thanks for the review!  Sara

10/10

braye27

OMG!  Who could it be slamming his classroom door a second time?  Malfoy... perhaps?I love it!Beth

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

You'll just have to wait and see.  Thanks for reviewing!  Truffles - Sara

0/10

missmolly

I also was intrigued and am looking forward to the next chapter.  But I, too, keep getting update notifications.  What's going on?

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

I am so sorry for the constant emails.  I, too, am getting concerned as I keep getting "Story Validation" emails.  I have contacted the Headmistress twice, but have not heard back.  Please accept my sincerest appologies and a box of my best virtual Truffles.

If it helps, chapter 2 is in Q waiting to be validated.  Here is a sneak peek:

 

Though most of the students could guess Professor Snape had a temper, very few had ever seen it in full force. Severus had grown very good at hiding the storm that raged inside him, most of the time. But this insolent Gryffindor was lowering the walls separating his freckles from Severus' fury very quickly.


Sara

0/10

ladyljd

I like this story enough to have added it to my favorites.  Now, I am constantly receiving email notices that it's been updated only to find it hasn't.  Do you know what's going on?  I've received 4 separate update notices just today. 

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

I do appologize.  I, too, have been receiving similar notices, except they are "Story Validation" emails.  I have written the Headmistress twice, but haven't heard back.  Please accept my sincerest appologies and a box of my best virtual Truffles.

If it helps, chapter 2 is in Q waiting to be validated.  Here is a sneak peek:

 

Though most of the students could guess Professor Snape had a temper, very few had ever seen it in full force. Severus had grown very good at hiding the storm that raged inside him, most of the time. But this insolent Gryffindor was lowering the walls separating his freckles from Severus' fury very quickly.


Sara

Response from ladyljd (Reviewer)

Wow!  Thanks for the wonderful sneak peek.  All is forgiven!!    And may all the system gremlins be defeated!Looking forward to reading more ...

10/10

debjunk

Now who could that be?I like the respect Severus obviously has for Hermione.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

The thing about this scenario is that we are seeing a very small segment.  We're picking up in the middle of their association - she's already done the "professor can you approve my project" bit and has already started the research.  He's already starting to see the differences in between this Hermione and the little hand-waving firstie that she used to be. 

0/10

kimbee73

Okay....now who????Great start and I am looking forward to your update.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thanks kimbee!  The next update will be put into Q later today.  Thanks for reviewing - Sara

10/10

livvy6

I have a feeling this is gonna be good. Eagerly waiting for next chapter!Livvy

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

There are times when we just know drama is going to occur.  And as humans we eagerly await it.  The next chapter will go into the Q later today.  Thanks for reviewing - Sara

10/10

sregner

Oh great now we have to guess...my money is on Ron, hurry with chapter 2 please

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

You'll just have to wait and see.  Chapter 2 will go into Q later this evening.  Thanks for reviewing - Sara

10/10

Jinxie

Interesting start, wonder how's in the classroom?Looking forward to reading more!

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thanks!  I will be  putting the next part in the Q later today.  I'm glad you enjoyed the first part.  Sara

10/10

Nessa

Look forward to the next installment.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thanks - it will be put in Q later today.  Sara

0/10

gersknightlady

Very entertaining, I look forward to more.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thanks!  The second installment will be put in Q sometime later today.  Sara

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, I've never seen this.  I like it so far.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

It was posted years ago over at SH.  I'm glad I was able to give you something new.  The next installment will be put into Q later today.  Thanks for the review!  Sara

10/10

makaem

Very nice.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

Thank you!  The second part will be put in Q later today.  Sara

0/10

liviconnor

For whatever reason, the "Gryffindor bravery is certainly strong tonight" conjured up images of the centaurs' "Mars is bright tonight.  Unusually bright."  Made me smile a little, even if it was unintentional.  You have several good one-liners in this chapter; separating freckles from fury, and Lucius' unwrinkling face, that really stand out and add humor and sparkle.  

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

*smiles... thank you!  I needed a smile just now.  I hope you enjoy the rest of the work.  Truffles - Sara

10/10

sregner

When will be reading "Something to Talk About"?  Hopefully soon.

Response from sara lady dalian (Author of Man to... Man?)

I'm hoping so.  It's completely written (8 chapters plus epilogue) and off to the beta's.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Sara

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