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Revelations
rosewood14 Reviews | 7.86/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Severus Snape has a little fun with a young admirer.
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rosewood
Member Since 2009 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 16 | 24 Reviews Written | 131 Review Responses
Just another wayward copywriter chewed up and spit out from the merciless world of advertising. Oh, and my writing for the most part centers around a fabulously snarky, drop-dead sexy dark wizard. He's my not-so-secret obsession.
Reviews for Revelations
I absolutely LOVE it! So glad you decided to post it here.
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
This was an immensely enjoyable writing exercise. Thanks for the positive review. :)
Hermione's middle name is "Jane"...
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Sometimes her middle name is Jane, sometimes it's Jean depending on the source material used. But honestly, in the grand scheme of things does it *really* matter?This is a mild tongue-in-cheek reference to Mary Sue regarding the student/teacher dynamic of the story. This drabble is merely a humorous little piece of fluff, no malice intended.Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Now THIS is a realistic "detention fic". Poor Hermione. :D
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Exactly! The entire point of this writing exercise was to determine how Severus would react to an obvious student crush considering his abhorrence to entering such a relationship.Thanks for reviewing!
Thank you for making my day and giving me a good giggle. here is a golden snitch and five stars for you.
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Ooooh, stars and a golden snitch. I like nice, shiny things!Thank you!
*g* Nice one!
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Glad to see it brought a smile to your face. :)
Oops. That would kill a crush pretty quick.
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
I believe Severus would file this under "lessons learned the hard way." ;) Thank your for reviewing!
LOL Well done for this - very clever indeed! (And you managed to get all three words of the challenge in aswell - I'm very impressed!) :-)
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Don't you just love a good challenge. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for your thoughts!
what a hoot! and a surprise! thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
This writing exercise proved to be immensely satisfying. I'm glad you enjoyed this little drabble.Thanks for reviewing!
ROFL!! Bad Severus. Bad. haha!!
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
The man does have a reputation to uphold. *grins*Glad you enjoyed this little bit of fluffitude.
Oh Severus that isn't fair!
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Most punishments seldom seem fair. Our dear Professor was merely dissuading an impressionable, hormonal girl from attempting to embark in a forbidden teacher/student relationship. Besides, her head of house was present to supervise the detention.Thanks for reviewing!
You are so bad. This was wonderful. Poor Hermione.
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Hermione survives wholly intact. Alas, her toothbrush doesn't fair nearly as well. In all honesty, it's Minerva who has my sympathy. The poor woman has apparently gone through this process multiple times with her brash little cubs. :)Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Poor girl! At least the cold floor will cooled her heat a bit... Or so I hope for her sake.
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
One would think so unless, of course, she's into that whole submissive thing... Thank you for reviewing!
Legilimency is cheating, I reckon! :)
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
Our favorite Slytherin considers cheating dishonorable, and we all know what a stickler he is for personal integrity. Severus was merely engaging in a harmless bit of reconnaissance. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Reviewer)
Reconnaissance. I like it! :)
ROFL!! I love this! I've never read a drabble, or full-fledged fic for that matter, about this sort of subject. I love how Severus teases her relentlessly, and I adore Minerva's response!
Response from rosewood (Author of Revelations)
This story was a true joy to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!Thanks for the rave review! :D