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Hermione hated her thighs. To be quite honest, most women feel they are a bit on the squidgy side, no? But Severus secretly adored her supple softness: the way his fingers sank into the flesh when he grasped her hips. He reckoned one would be hard pressed to find a single straight line on her entire body – he himself had spent a particularly languid afternoon examining her with close attention and found nothing but curves. He called her his 'little nectarine', for she was sweet, ripe, juicy – and more sophisticated than your average peach.
They had once spent hours, fingers entwined, wrapped up in the drama of skin on skin – the warmth. Feeling the blood running, the pulse under the thin skin of the wrist, tracing the bones of the top of the hand, the soft pouches of skin underneath the fingers. Seeing the blue tracery of veins under skin as clear as skimmed milk. The place under the fingernail where the skin transitions to the hard, shell-like nail with a slight catch. Slow sensuous stroking of fingers on skin made tactile and rough with sweat. The struggle for dominance when the fingers interlace and the web of one junction presses tight against another, the light scraping of fingernails – the clink of their rings.
The rings were a custom design in platinum – a parade of letters spelling out a phrase with special meaning for them, enciphered with a Muggle computer trick called 'rot13' and charmed to shuffle their order at random intervals so that no one else would ever know their secret.
She kissed his ear and whispered, "I love you."
He repeated, "I lobe you?" They laughed.
He gently lifted the mass of hair off the delicate, vulnerable, hidden spot at the base of the skull. He nuzzled the back of her neck. "I nape you."
She huffed an excited shiver. "You certainly do 'Snape me'!"
"Oh, is that what the children are calling it these days?"
They both laughed.
She kissed his eyelids. "I vitreous humour you."
He kissed her forehead. "I prefrontal cortex you."
She kissed the tip of his nose. "I aquiline you."
He pressed the side of his face to her chest, listening to her heart beating. "I ventricle you."
She tugged his head up for a kiss – a long langurous, voluptuous kiss. She impishly whispered in his ear, "I tongue you," and she blushed.
He pulled back to be able to look her in the eyes, and then he blushed too.
She splayed her hand across his chest, stroking the soft skin covering his breastbone. "I clavicle you" – she dipped her fingers into the intercostal notch and followed up with a soft, breathy kiss.
Then she darted down in a surprise attack and nibbled on a nipple. "I nip you!"
"Aha, Madam Snape! Two can play at that game!"
---***000O000***---
"I had a dream about you, about us . . ."
"And was your behaviour suitably reprehensible?"
"I patted you on the bum, but that's the extent of it. We had two children, though, so reprehensible actions can be inferred."
"Two! Boys?"
"A boy and a girl."
"I've heard that the fashion nowadays is to name children modern Muggle names – a touch of the exotic."
"No, no – they had proper Wizarding names. Justinian – named after a Roman emperor, just like you" – a quick glance at him, but he smirked and shook his head in a negation.
"Family name, I'm afraid."
"Well, it was my dream, and in my dream you're named after an emperor and so is our son, only we called him Justin, for short. And the girl was Eileen, for—"
"My mother." A pause. "Thank you, your unconscious is remarkably solicitous."
"I try."
"I had heard that you were trying . . ." She whapped him on the arm and favoured him with a mock scowl. He held her face in his hands and placed small, precise kisses on her scowl lines before brushing his lips across hers.
He sat back and looked intently at her face.
"What's the matter? Do I have a spot? Am I displaying the signs of Parani Fever?"
"No, no . . . nothing is amiss. Everything is as it should be. I'm just astounded that even your faults, your flaws, your glowers fill me with a tender regard for you. I must be going soft in the head."
"Clearly. Is there anything that can be done to halt the decline? I'd hate to see the great Severus Snape drooling and muttering, fit only to kiss the hem of his wife's robes."
---***000O000***---
She sat on one of the comfortable chairs, reading – her profile backlit and knife-sharpened by the fire in the grate. Watching the contours of her face wax and wane in the inconstant light, Severus was reminded of another time he had watched her.
"I have a question for you, my dear . . ."
Hermione placed the bookmark in the crease, closed the book and looked up at him. Her face was open and reflected an engaged interest.
"When we went to the concert, in New York, were you wearing stockings with a suspender belt?"
She gave a slight start and a sputtered laugh. "What? Just now, you were wondering if I was wearing girly-girl stockings?"
"I am not in my dotage, Hermione. My memory is as clear as ever. Something put me in mind of it, and I was wondering if you would be so kind as to Answer. The. Question."
"Yes."
"'Yes', you'll answer the question, or 'yes', you were wearing stockings?"
"Both," she said with a smirk.
"The further question remains as to whether you took the traditional route of also wearing, shall we say, special occasion knickers?" Severus tried very, very hard to seem as though this question followed logically from his first query and not that it was the end goal he had had in mind.
"No."
"No, you won't answer the question, or 'no', you weren't wearing fancy knickers? Hermione, this is getting quite tedious."
"Is it? I thought I was having quite a success, teasing you." She got up from her chair and walked over to him. At a slight gesture, he sat upright and presented her with a level lap on which to perch. She sat sideways on his knees and twined her arm around his shoulder, under his hair and tucked it into the soft part of his neck. She leaned close to his head and whispered into his ear. For a full breath, he was perfectly still. Hermione was seen to blush. From that point proceeded physical declarations of love and affection that were entirely pleasing to both parties.
The End
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I literally just finished reading this on Ash and in my desperate search for more of your stories, I was lead to your account here. You are amazingly talented and I hope your will grant us with more of your writing in the future. Btw, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I'm sorry to say that I think this story is a one-off - I just woke up one morning with the idea of it very detailed and I knew exactly what the major twists and turns would be. I wrote like a fiend, had it beta-ed and brit-picked like crazy and then let it loose on a friendly audience. I have other friends who are real writers - they were very encouraging of me and of this effort, but I can't imagine how hard it must be to write something when you don't have that kind of clear vision of how it all must go.I promise that if I ever get another bolt out of the blue like this one, I'll write again.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I'm sorry to say that I think this story is a one-off - I just woke up one morning with the idea of it very detailed and I knew exactly what the major twists and turns would be. I wrote like a fiend, had it beta-ed and brit-picked like crazy and then let it loose on a friendly audience. I have other friends who are real writers - they were very encouraging of me and of this effort, but I can't imagine how hard it must be to write something when you don't have that kind of clear vision of how it all must go.I promise that if I ever get another bolt out of the blue like this one, I'll write again.
It was a lovely story. Thank you.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Glad you enjoyed it - thank you for the feedback!
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Glad you enjoyed it - thank you for the feedback!
*sigh* oh, that was perfect. loved sev's to git or not to git soliliquy. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
You get halfway through your life and then suddenly something forces you to re-examine your presuppositions. It can be vertigo-inducing :)
Loved this ending! Great story! Thank you for sharing it! After finishing I read your profile and cracked up -- we could be the same person, though I'm 36. Hopefully I'll have some stuff up here soon. Thanks again!
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I look forward to seeing your stories :)
This chapter had me laughing out loud. Bwahaha
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Thank you! I thought it was rather clever, myself. I was snickering as I wrote it. I asked my spouse to read it and his reaction was very noncommital, so I thought perhaps it wasn't as funny as I had hoped.
Response from cmwinters (Reviewer)
Oh no! It was funny! Maybe if your spouse doesn't read HP, and doesn't know what a stick in the mud Snape is, he wouldn't understand, but Snape's comment of "I find this entire conversation offensive in the extreme" had me CRYING laughing.BWAHAHAHA
What was his objection again? ;)
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I think he just thought the conversation was getting away from him and he was feeling huffy and unsettled.
Obviously they are at cross purposes, neither one secure enough to think the other would want a relationship. I'm glad they will continue to get to know each other, though.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Which one of them, do you think, is brave enough to venture forth? Don't give up hope.
Very nice, I'm looking forward to how you bring them together.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Glad that you're coming along for the ride :)
Looking forward to more :)
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
More is in the pipeline - Chapter 9.5 has been submitted to the queue.
Some progress at least he opened his mouth and told her she meant something to him, I'm looking forward to more of the "ice" melting.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
It took a lot of courage for Severus to get to this point.
LOL annoying when you hear their thoughts and they care for eachother but don;t open their mouths.. Excellent descriptions of Hermiones reactions.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
One of my friends was reading my earlier drafts and noted that there wasn't any dramatic tension. Thus - the conflict between what they mean and what they say, and what they say and what the other person hears.
These are such nice chapters of conversation and thought. I very much like the way this is developing.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Thank you!
Very much enjoyed their day and the Beach and their comfortable companionship
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Discovering Rockaway Beach was one of my favorite surprises about living in NYC.
What better place to find eachother again than a book store. Thats a nice encounter.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I like spending my Saturdays at a bookstore, too.
:) only he would part with that remark...LOL I enjoyed their conversation and hearing his thoughts.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Good!
I'm really not sure if I started this already but am reading it now. Very much enjoyed the first encounter.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I hope you stick with it!
I like the reasons you've given them for being at Columbia. She's matured quite a lot, to be able to understand that his venomous comments are routine protection, not personal. And I love the descriptions of texture in his clothing - wonderfully evocative. In fact, I love your descriptions generally.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
I think Hermione is a pretty reflective and perceptive person. I can see her connecting the dots. And I see Snape as having a wholely undeveloped sensual side. Long repressed.
Ooh, cerebral sexual speculation - love it! And now I wonder what Hermione was wearing. Audrey Hepburn's dress is a stroke of genius.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Well, if *I* had the power to make my clothes look like anything I wanted, I'd do that.
I look forward to seeing how it will play out.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Thanks!
He should owl her, it would be quite interesting. Or whatever you decide, actually. I am so enjoying this.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
He's telling himself that he wants to let her figure out her path without influence from him - but really, I think, he's afraid he's imagined the whole thing, and if he approaches her she'll reject him. Such a conflicted fellow, our Severus!
stalking the wild snape with book and sandwich. sounds like a plan! great update. thanks and mucho smoochies
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
Observe the lone Snape in his natural habitat...
I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well done. The best stories are the ones in which the writing becomes pictures in my head. This is only possible with reasonably well-written stories. Awkward grammar, repetition of the same words all the time, spelling and punctuation errors tend to drive me nuts. Of course there is none of that here. So I read and I don't notice that I'm reading words because it's all in pictures in my head. Excellent!
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
*blush*Thank you! I try to write in an impressionistic manner - capturing moments in terms of how they feel, the real meat of the matter. My punctuation is not the best (commas, in particular, bedevil me), but has been ruthlessly pruned and pared by my excellent betas, and the admins of this site. I use the online thesaurus religiously in an attempt to avoid repetition, for the same reasons that you mentioned. I'm glad that it's all coming together for you!
OH Noo, poor Snape. He'll think she had a bad time, now. Silly people, so confusing. Excellent story.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
People ARE silly. And romance is so treacherous. The whole idea of trying to communicate with our hearts in the balance, when it's clear that everyone is speaking his or her own private language with its whole lexicon of specific meaning - well, it boggles the mind.
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
It certainly boggles my mind. I tend to be a bit of an open book, like a Gryffindor. I have to work at not blurting out whatever is in my head. I live in a house full of people who are either unable or unwilling to communicate what is in their heads. My son has asperger syndrome so isn't a great communicator. My husband has asperger tendencies so a lot of times it's a communication skills thing. But he also has Slytherin tendencies and knows how to leave out information. My daughter is very able to communicate but can choose not to divulge information if she feels it is in her own best interest. My husband and son will speak in metaphor or will finish a sentence without having started one. They forget I don't know what the beginning of the sentence was. It's pretty typical asperger stuff.
yay! That's weasley out of the way. Silly Snape slipping and calling her Hermione. LOL. Oh but things are going in a nice direction.
Response from bluewillow (Author of The Thing With Wings)
The situation with Ron seemed like something that could happen, if two people weren't well matched. Not that he's a terrible person - just that neither of their affections were particularly engaged.