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The Lightness of Love Chapter 1: The Lightness of Love
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The Lightness of Love

1: The Lightness of Love

The Lightness of Love

The Lightness of Love

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karelia

A white stone talks to Severus.

Poetry/Prose Potions Under Duress 309 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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Belongs not to me

Potterverse to JKR

Nathan to dear Fer


He walked on the sand

Again, as he did daily

Barefoot felt so good

The white stone called him

Again, as it did daily

He sat down on it

He was comfortable

And the stone began to tell

Its long history

Interesting snippets

Of a girl not long ago

Sitting down on it

Longing for someone

Someone she’d known long ago

Longing for—a git?

Did he hear that right?

Messy-haired know-it-all, her

Really, was it her?

She whom he’d dreamt of

Too often to count the times

Perhaps she liked him?

‘Thank you, Stone,’ he said

Then returned back home, barefoot

No shoes still felt good

He considered it

Wearing no shoes in classes

Instead he sought her

‘Good day, Miss Granger.’

She stared at him and his feet

‘Hello,’ she whispered

She stretched out her hand

‘Shall we go for a walk, sir?’

‘Lady, I’d love to.’

They walked on the grounds

Until a white stone was reached

‘Home,’ both voices said

‘I dreamt,’ she started

‘As did I,’ his words came forth

‘I heard,’ the stone said

‘Get together, you

‘The love is there between you

‘Live a happy life!’

And they both obeyed

And Nathan was born to them

True joy had arrived

Every year they went

To visit an old, white stone

Who said, ‘Hello, dears’

And they greeted it

With happiness and much love

‘Hello, dear white stone’

The old white stone smiled

‘Dear humans, it feels so good

To have spread such love’

Hermione and Snape

Felt much of the loved stone’s warmth

Nathan felt its love

‘Mum, Dad, it loves you’

He stated matter of fact

‘And I love you, too.’


Grateful thanks to Annie for the beta.

Written for ferporcel on her birthday.


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Latest 25 Reviews for The Lightness of Love

8 Reviews  |  9.88/10 Average

10/10

snitchette

How beautiful! I'm always amazed by your wonderful mind and writing skills. Please, never stop to grace us with it.

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

Your kind reviews always cheer me up no end. Thank you!

10/10

sunny33

Awesome! :)

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

TYVM! :D

10/10

beaweasley2

 This is a lovely poem.

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

Thank you!

10/10

soccermom

Very beautiful.  Thanks for sharing it.

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

Thank you!

9/10

moiramountain

A very Celtic thing - to listen to the the speaking of stones... well done !!    Moira

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

I'd imagine anyone with a modicum of spirituality can communicate with stones. :)Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

astopperindeath

i loved this the first time i read it on your LJ and i still love it!

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

Aw, so glad you like it! :D

10/10

makaem

Lovely.

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

:D Thank you!

10/10

neelix

That was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.

Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!

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