The Lightness of Love
Chapter 1 of 1
kareliaA white stone talks to Severus.
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Nathan to dear Fer
He walked on the sand
Again, as he did daily
Barefoot felt so good
The white stone called him
Again, as it did daily
He sat down on it
He was comfortable
And the stone began to tell
Its long history
Interesting snippets
Of a girl not long ago
Sitting down on it
Longing for someone
Someone she’d known long ago
Longing for—a git?
Did he hear that right?
Messy-haired know-it-all, her
Really, was it her?
She whom he’d dreamt of
Too often to count the times
Perhaps she liked him?
‘Thank you, Stone,’ he said
Then returned back home, barefoot
No shoes still felt good
He considered it
Wearing no shoes in classes
Instead he sought her
‘Good day, Miss Granger.’
She stared at him and his feet
‘Hello,’ she whispered
She stretched out her hand
‘Shall we go for a walk, sir?’
‘Lady, I’d love to.’
They walked on the grounds
Until a white stone was reached
‘Home,’ both voices said
‘I dreamt,’ she started
‘As did I,’ his words came forth
‘I heard,’ the stone said
‘Get together, you
‘The love is there between you
‘Live a happy life!’
And they both obeyed
And Nathan was born to them
True joy had arrived
Every year they went
To visit an old, white stone
Who said, ‘Hello, dears’
And they greeted it
With happiness and much love
‘Hello, dear white stone’
The old white stone smiled
‘Dear humans, it feels so good
To have spread such love’
Hermione and Snape
Felt much of the loved stone’s warmth
Nathan felt its love
‘Mum, Dad, it loves you’
He stated matter of fact
‘And I love you, too.’
Grateful thanks to Annie for the beta.
Written for ferporcel on her birthday.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Lightness of Love
8 Reviews | 9.88/10 Average
How beautiful! I'm always amazed by your wonderful mind and writing skills. Please, never stop to grace us with it.
Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)
Your kind reviews always cheer me up no end. Thank you!
Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing it.
Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)
Thank you!
A very Celtic thing - to listen to the the speaking of stones... well done !! Moira
Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)
I'd imagine anyone with a modicum of spirituality can communicate with stones. :)Thanks for reviewing!
i loved this the first time i read it on your LJ and i still love it!
Response from karelia (Author of The Lightness of Love)
Aw, so glad you like it! :D