AWW this is so squeal worthy!! Is there a second part to this?? it needs it!! Lol well it doesnt need it but I want one *pouts* the story was brillantly written, I loved it!

This was absolutely lovely! I would so much like to see more of this!

Is Hermione still wearing the eyepatch in the kissing scene?  Because "she closed her eyes trustingly" and I never saw her remove the eyepatch...  just a continuity thing :)

Very nice.  I wish you'd continue on with this story.  I like this version of Severus & Hermione.

This was absolutely wonderful!  Truffles to you - Sara

this was really fun to read.

I found Severus' awkward inexperience much more believable than the notion of him as some kind of Slytherin sex god. This story was very sweet, touching, funny at the same time... loved it!

Very cute and endearing!  Poor Severus feeling a bit put upon, but very promising for him!  ;)

Wonderful story, I had a great time reading it.

This was a great diversion when it was four o'clock this morning and I realized we'd lost hot water and heat in the hotel.  I'm in England, so that's a rather dire circumstance, but I was pleasantly distracted while reading this.  Thanks.  :P

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad to be of help!

What a sweet story, and I didn't find anything that was terribly OOC (well, not to me anyway)!  I nearly laughed out loud when Severus asked "Are you sniffing me?"  It reminded me of the first time I sniffed my then-boyfriend, now-husband--he had pretty much the same incredulous reaction.  Now he doesn't bat an eyelash, proving that men can be trained.  I'm sure Hermione will have similar results with Severus, and I'd love a sequel story if the Muse strikes you.  Thanks for sharing this!

Your warning said, "Out of Character," but I disagree. Perhaps Hermione's many lovers over one summer could fall into that catagory, but certainly not her behavior towards Snape, or his reactions toward her.This was wonderful and quite believable.

I loved this! I didnt find Severus out of character at all. I enjoyed the tone of their conversation, and Hermione teaching him how to hug. Though this did seem a tad abrupt for a one-shot..it felt/sounded a lot more like the beginning of a longer story than a oneshot. Could this possibly be continued? I love what you've done with their characters and would really enjoy some more of their conversations. Great story!

Dear wingless.

That was just absolutely charming.

The to and fro between them is so believable, dynamic and cute, I had a smile on my face the entire time.

Very well done!!!

Loved it!!!!!

Lovely, I enjoyed that a lot.

So cute and inexperienced!

Very sweet, charming, and cute.  Reminded me of a '40s screwball comedy.  Very believable and true to character.  Would love to see a sequel.  Great job!

Very nice, different yet believable. Thanks for writing!

this was different - thank you! Also thanks for introducing me to the word fainéant!

This is so great. I loved it, and Severus's awkwardness made me smile. Bless him!!

Delightful turn of events for them. I loved the dialogue.

really clever story. I loved the inept severus