Chapters Menu

Unnamed

18 Reviews | 3.33/10 (18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )

Drama Romance Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 1,435 Words 1 Chapter Complete

There's something about a Ministry dinner that makes Snape almost tell Hermione how he feels. That doesn't keep him from sleeping with her in the interim. A stream-of-conscious one-shot from Snape's POV. With, of course, the requisite lemons. AU/EWE.Voyeurism is portrait-voyerism and solely meant for a chuckle.

Start Reading

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: Unnamed

About astopperindeath

Validated
Author

astopperindeath

Member Since 2009 | 29 Stories | Favorited by 80 | 132 Reviews Written | 919 Review Responses

Twentysomething lover of Harry Potter fic. I have served as a beta (btw, i am P.I. accredited) for many authors, and welcome the opportunity to do more. I also serve as co-moderator of the LJ community ptterpr0nprmpts along with the fantabulous tonksinger.

I've been around the fandom for a long time... probably since 2003. I've spent most of it lurking, but published some stories under an old pseudonym. Upon entering the fandom, I immediately became a fan of the Snape/Granger pairing. I prefer Hermione to be a bit older, but have been known to deviate from that preference. Other ships that I prefer include Draco/Ginny, Draco/Harry, Snape/Lupin, and Snape/McGonagall. I am open to most ships and recommendations, as ultimately it is this universe that I love.

Author Website

http://astopperindeath.livejournal.com

Also Archived At

hp.adultfanfiction.net, fanfiction.net, OWL, Ashwinder, Enchanting the Bookworm, Occlumency, Lumos.

Reviews for Unnamed

Displaying all 18 Review

0/10

tenoh27

Very, very nice, thank you. A bit of awkwardness, a dash of angst and finally, a full dollop of sweetness. Thank you!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you so much. this story was my first step back into fandom, so i'm always so pleased when people like it!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you so much. this story was my first step back into fandom, so i'm always so pleased when people like it!

0/10

Werewolfon394

So lovely. So simple & yet extremely satisfying. Fluffy & adorable!

0/10

Ljpjcg

Awesome stream of consciousness! I adore stuff like this in Severus' pov. You ran me through the gamut of emotions but left me happy in the end. Thank you!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you!

0/10

rons_love

i was a little worried about this one to begin with but it had a cute ending. =]

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thanks :)

0/10

blyf

This is absolutely lovely, so very beautifully written! The last line is heart-warming. Thank you so much for sharing this!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

(bylby in lj)

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thanks, love! you need to post more on lj! i like your entries!!

10/10

angularmomentum

Seriously? This is the *first* thing you've written in forever?? This was awesome! Excellent portrayal of his emotions throughout! -emtp6811

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

other than a really silly, humorous one-shot that i've been sitting on for a few months, yeah...it's the first thing that's not been an academic paper. thanks hon!

0/10

sunny33

I like the use of different tenses. :)

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thanks!

0/10

mock_turtle

I really like this story. It's cute, and it's interesting. But most of all (even though it's slightly irrelevant) I like this line:"The survivors of the War had each had their weird quirks: instead of blasting roses, he now blasted garden snakes; Harry’s refusal to walk anywhere near King’s Cross; and Longbottom’s almost compulsive pursuit of a fencing career." That made me giggle so much.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

- thank you so much! i'm glad i could make you smile. life shouldn't be 100% serious :).

0/10

debjunk

LOL, all that nasty talk of indifference ahnd a good shag, just to hide the fact that he loved her. So very Severus. Loved that last line.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you!

0/10

whynot

Very-nice. I don't usually read one-shots as they leave me so unsatisfied. But this one was very nice indeed. Captured Snape well I think

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you! i never used to read one-shots, but i do like a really well written one. glad you felt that my story fell into the "very nice" category :)

10/10

braye27

Yes, Mam! This is positively delightful! The way Severus tries to convince himself that he Does. Not. Love. Granger. is as adorable as it is futile.I love that he doesn't mind that she knows his secret. And that she loves him, too.This gets a big thumbs up! Beth

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

why thank you beth! these are the kind of reviews that authors live for :)

10/10

indigo_rose

Bittersweet, and yet with hope for the future--beautiful! I also liked how you put Harry with Luna, because I always enjoy the idea of those two together. And the idea of Neville pursuing a fencing career was just priceless! Great story all around, and thank you!

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thanks! i've always like harry/luna--they seem like they would get each other more than harry/ginny imho. both have lost parents, both are kind of outcast kids w/ special abilities. and ginny can be a bossy grinch sometimes :-P.

10/10

Jinxie

Typical to self denial, yet he still keeps coming back for more. He he he, nice of Hermione to just say it and leave it be. Makes you wonder how many times she's had to say this to him the morning after or if this is the first.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

it's funny that you should say that. sometimes as authors, we forget that there's more than one way to look at our own work. in my head, this was definitely the first time she had said it to him; yet, i can completely see how it would work the other way. thank you for giving me a new perspective on my own work!

10/10

rosered

Nicely done! :D

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you so very much!

10/10

sregner

Men are so silly...we knew it before he did

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

men are silly... and i hope that you knowing it before he did didn't ruin it for you. i can't tell if you're happy or not :(.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

I was afraid that this would end badly/sadly, but no.... brilliant conclusion! And I was highly amused by the blasting of garden snakes, avoidance of King's Cross, and fencing career.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

why thank you! i'm glad i didn't disappoint you :).and yeah, i just had to get *some* humor in. i'm the kind of person that makes jokes at awkward moments, and sometimes it transfers into my writing :):)

0/10

kimjo2

well done. you do internal self-musings beautifully. thanks and smoochies

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

thank you so much!

0/10

snapify52

Awwww.... And by the by, I loved the voyeurism.

Response from astopperindeath (Author of Unnamed)

that was fun to write :) thanks!

Displaying all 18 Review