Very entertaining.

hilarious!  it's always nice to read something totally new.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Poor Hermione, she definitely doesn't want him to find out the implications of her not responding to the potion! I can't wait to see where you take this next, it's been so much fun!

hahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
She is doomed. How cute. I can't wait for more!!
I wonder who did it? I bet it was someone who knew she liked him so that it would be out and in the open. Probably Ginny.

Well, one never know: he might return her feelings. After all, there are two more effects on the potion, and one might be a grand love declaration to the objet of the drinker's affections. What would be most humiliating for Snape than to reveal he has romantic feelings, for a student no less?

What a great twist! Now she really has a problem on her hands.

Too funny. I wonder what Hermione did to get this reaction from all the females, and how does he know it is her fault?!

Interesting. He assumed it was her because of her lack of response, and the only reason she was not responding was because she is the only one with real feelings for him. Can't wait til he finds out that little bit of info! I wonder who has it in for him, and what the other 2 components will be?

Wonderful update, I can't wait to read more:-))

Great chapter!  It makes me smile.  Can't wait for detention!

LOL - this is cute. I wonder why Hermione is immune?

Loved it, but I am wondering what annoys Severus the most: The idea that Hermione is the one to blame (where is the proof of that?), or the fact that she is not swooning over him?
I am very much looking forward to read more!

I hope he will do unspeakable things to her *devilish grin* that you will relate to us of course *wicked grin*

Ha! That's a truly interesting start, please, do continue!

Oh, my.  McGonagall coming on  to Snape.  Whatever next? :)

Interesting little doo-dad....  Sara

Oh Wow! Neville! I didn't see that coming.

Brilliant!

Neville would be very disapointed if only he knew he just gave the most wonderful gift to his dreaded Professor for his unbirthday party.

Oops.  Do you think she can magically stick those incriminating pages together? :)

ROFL  She is doomed all right! :)

Someone is going to be in big trouble tonight. *evil grin*

Great update, I can't wait to see Severus reaction when he finds out just why Hermione didn't want him to see the book.

oh this is funny! I don't suppose you've posted this somewhere before ... it seems familiar?