You May Meet a Stranger
Chapter 2 of 6
AmitaTom is a bad boy.
Chapter 2: You May Meet a Stranger
"No, I don't want any punch," Bellatrix told her husband.
She went to a balcony, breathed in the night air, twisted her handkerchief, and decided she had better return.
"You usually dance better than this," said her father during the next number.
"I'm distracted," she said.
"You're not older; you're better," he replied.
It occurred to her that as the oldest Black sister she should put a better face on things at her birthday ball. "I'm just not into the party yet, Father," she replied.
"It might be me," he said chivalrously. "Our unofficial guest of honor has yet to appear."
"We can do quite well without him," she said.
Her father nodded approval. That was the spirit one expected from a Black.
While she was having a cup of punch with her father, Bellatrix noticed someone across the room. She took several steps forward before she was able to stop herself. She looked around. No, no one had noticed her lapse. She waited patiently, certain that he would single her out above all others. He was walking straight toward her. She told herself to be calm. Wait, was he talking to her youngest sister? He was dancing with her. How could that be?
Didn't he know her youngest sister was an empty-headed fool who had had the poor judgment to marry Lucius Malfoy? It was true the Malfoys had money, but she had always thought Lucius was a pig: it wasn't that he was the type to chase other women; it was that he would neglect his wife while doing so. Now, thanks to his pig habits, his wife, that blue-eyed, blonde angel, ha, was not only dancing with Tom, she was vulnerable. Bellatrix looked at the doe-eyes Cissy was making and thought the best plan would be to whisper to Cissy that her gown was buttoned crooked, take her to a private room, and tear her golden locks out by their roots. The red haze grew until Bellatrix even allowed herself to be thankful that that cow Andromeda wasn't here. That simpering bitch, after experiencing the sharpness of poverty and the lack of virility of what's-his-name, would have been all over a real wizard of wealth and power. It calmed her to think that she had only that one obstacle who was dancing-too-close-to-be-decent to eviscerate. How could Cissy's husband allow that in public? Not that dancing too close meant anything with her youngest sister's lack of endowments. No wonder Lucius neglected her. The blonde bimbo certainly didn't have the figure to be worth undressing with anyone's eyes the way Cissy's current, tasteless partner seemed to be doing. Perhaps the disemboweling could be followed by some eye-gouging. She examined her sharp and shiny fingernails.
After an eternity, the dance ended, and Bellatrix watched Tom extricate himself from the clingy blonde only to stumble into the grabby arms of Patricia Parkinson, the secret slag. Luckily, Lucius, a lousy husband but a true gentleman on occasion, swept Bellatrix onto the dance floor with a gracious invitation.
A few minutes later at the refreshment table, Bellatrix watched as Patricia Parkinson, with her eyes on Tom instead of where they should be, put the ice cubes in her saucer, placed the biscuit in the cup, and ladled the punch on top of the biscuit.
"Well, you got one right at least," said Bellatrix.
"Aren't you being rude to a guest?" asked Patricia.
"I was obviously making a joke about my inadequate arrangement of napkins and plates," said Bellatrix. "I was joking. Can't you take a joke?"
"If it was a joke, I apologize," said Patricia.
"If?! If?! I told you it was," said Bellatrix. "If I had wished to insult you, I would have commented on your second rate jewelry, your out-of-fashion gown, and your lusting after my guests like a bitch in heat."
"That's insufferable," said Patricia, walking away.
"Your attitude and your walking away when I'm talking to you are what are insufferable," said Bellatrix, concluding that some people were overly sensitive.
Bellatrix set her cup down and went out to commune with the cold and distant stars that offered a more promising relationship than the ill-behaving guests.
As she stood in the cool air, the door opened and closed, a shaft of light from the party split the night and vanished, and she saw the person walking toward her.
"What excuse do you have for your bad manners?" asked Bellatrix before she could stop herself.
"None at the moment," said Tom. "I'm ignoring your guests, and I'm failing to meet people who have important business with me just so I can talk to you and enjoy your company."
He was behind her. She could feel his warm breath and his commanding presence.
"Have you waited for me?"
Her pride told her to be quiet. "Yes," she said.
"Have you let your husband touch you?"
Her honor told her to be still. "No," she said.
She felt his hands on her waist. She gasped as the fire and ice of his touch shot through her. She reminded herself she was a Black and a married woman. She stepped back into him. Her head leaned back on his shoulder, and she moaned with relief when his arms went around her in acceptance.
"You have waited long enough," he said.
She wanted to make a caustic remark about his arrogance, but she wanted him to hold her more.
"You want people to know I have chosen you. You want to be admired," he whispered, "but by a small, select audience, not by the masses."
She knew he was speaking to her secret desire.
"Your husband, your sister, and her husband will do. They are waiting as I lead you into a room. You are as elegantly attired as you are now. You want this, but you are nervous."
Yes, she would be both eager and anxious.
"You see a throne of a couch with no arms or back and covered with dark, shimmering, green silk. You know it will compliment your skin and hair."
She glowed at the elegant image.
"I take you to the couch. You know what is going to happen. I tangle my fingers in your hair and pull you close. You know you shouldn't, but you respond with lips swollen with desire that beg me to continue."
She blushed with maidenly modesty.
"You tell yourself not to as you press against me, but your sinuous body has a mind of its own, and it offers whatever I want. You both hope and fear that I want everything."
She felt herself losing the struggle to be aloof.
"At my silent command, your fingers unbutton your gown, and it falls to the floor. You let the audience see that your full and firm body needs no support. You are thinking that you are undressing for someone who is not your husband, but you stand regally in flimsy lace bra and knickers."
She felt a forbidden thrill, but she knew she would be proud.
"I reach out my hands. Your breasts are mine to hold. I trace their shape."
She felt the craving grow within her.
"My touch nearly burns; your firm mounds swell; your nipples press against the lace. You think about the audience watching you rotate your shoulders to brush your breasts against my fingers. You unfasten your bra."
She realized, deep down, that she would.
"You cup your breast and offer them to me like the goddess of sex and power that you are."
She was certain he would appreciate the offer.
"I tend your lovely breasts with my lips, my tongue, my teeth. Your nipples rise. I take them into my mouth. I can taste you."
She sighed as he cupped her breasts.
"You become impatient; you've been waiting so long for this. You slide your knickers over your hips and off. You pull me to the couch; you recline; your legs open."
She knew she would, that he was right, damn him.
"Before I enter you, I tell your sister, her husband, and your husband that you will look at them and smile twice: after you're mounted and before you have your orgasm."
She told herself that she was too regal for that.
"Your soft nether lips are swollen with desire and slick with need. I enter easily, slow and dignified. You want to be equally dignified, but the audience hears you moan. They see your face turn as soft as a little girl's."
She knew, despite what he said, that her demeanor would be majestic.
"The audience is captured by the look on your pretty face as you're mounted. They are equally captured by the look of your ugly furry folds as they're entered. Your beautiful face and the primal invasion: the contrast is stimulating."
She imagined it would be magnificent.
"Your husband does not want you anymore, but he still feels a twinge. He notices his wife makes no protest. He has seen his wife spread her legs in invitation. He did not want to know it would be this easy for someone to have his wife."
She thought he deserved it.
"You know that your little sister, who hasn't the nerve to betray her husband, is watching with open eyes. Her nostrils are as flared as yours."
She thought the little hypocrite would try to hide her feelings.
"I slide in the last inch. You are lightly panting. The audience watches your defenses go down. When you realize you no longer control what is going to happen, you look at them and smile. Go ahead. Smile."
She could imagine them present; she did turn her head and smile.
"You try not to move. Your moves are small at first. You try to control it. You look into my eyes and begin a sensuous wiggle. The audience is astonished. Your husband has told them you are a cold fish who just lies there."
She pushed back against Tom.
"The husbands want to feel your slick hotness and your flexing muscles; they are erect. Your sister wants to feel being filled and ridden; she is wet."
She knew Tom was right. They wanted her or to be like her.
"The audience watches as we couple. They watch us move in sync."
She would be proudly shameless.
"Your moves become more intense. You resist, but control slips away. You wonder if your sister has writhed like this for her husband. You wonder if your sister has writhed like this for anyone."
She imagined her sister watching raptly.
"Before you can think that this is going to be embarrassing, you can't think anymore. The audience listens to liquid slaps and involuntary grunts as your body rocks back and forth and your thighs begin a rhythmic squeezing. You give them your pre-orgasmic smile."
She was smiling.
"Your sister, her husband, and your husband cannot take their eyes away. They will always remember your look."
She moaned.
"The wizards wish you were clenching them. You sister wishes she were clenching me."
She knew they would be jealous.
"You want the audience to see the Dark Lord lose himself in your charms. Instead, I wait till your afterglow has subsided and magisterially sample your wares. The audience sees that I am glistening with your juices and that my tension is slowly increasing. They watch me take what is mine to take. I grip your hips and bury myself. They know I'm squirting my seed into you. They know you are now my witch."
Tom pressed his hands against the junction of her thighs and sensations shot out both directions from her spine to explode in her brain and to melt between her legs.
"Your husband hurries off to find his doxy of the evening to take her to a secluded spot. Your sister's husband hurries her home, but he will be in her up to the hilt before they reach the bedroom."
Bellatrix knew both husbands would be thinking about her.
"I help you to your feet, wrap my cape around you, and escort you out of the room."
When Bellatrix re-entered the ballroom, she glanced surreptitiously at Rodolphus, Lucius, and Narcissa, certain her secret desire was written in the radiance of her being.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Riddle in Black
19 Reviews | 3.16/10 Average
Thoroughly enjoyed Tom being in each Black, in one way or another; each has been his and is his, and contrary to social mores, all seem to have benefited from it--each witch has a stronger sense of self and has been empowered, as well as Riddle attaining full power and dominance over each one and, either directly or vicariously, theirs. Enticing and insightful tale, as always!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
This is almost 'The Secret History of Tom Riddle,' telling the story suppressed by the official account. The Black sisters are part of the pure-blood clan, and they deserve special attention - even one disowned by her famiily. He does do right by them, even though it goes beyond social mores and even though it is at a cost to them. But perhaps his excessive clannishness and deire to do right by his own caused him to transgress enough that it brought about his downfall.As you observed, he both empowered them and dominated them.
I love how each Black sister and her predicament is given special attention and consideration by the Dark Lord--at first, I had almost thought he was being a cruel tease to Bellatrix, similarly to Andromeda, but he was generous enough to carry through with her, and there seemed to be a mutual caring and need shared between them, and now with Narcissa, there is a perverse delight and satisfaction with his considerateness of Narcissa and his punishment of Lucius for his misguided philandering ways with witches not deemed 'clean'. Riddle shows himself as a true Master to those witches he has chosen worthy enough of his attention and in a certain way, his protection, regardless of any other ulterior motives. Enjoyed the background history of Narcissa and Lucius!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Your review is encouraging since the objective was to present each sister as unique with Tom giving each what she needed. Thanks for the generous commentary.
Arousing erotica, and Andromeda has sought out that which she apparently needs, a sensual, sensitive side of the Dark Lord is depicted--intensifying her need of initimacy stronger than the social mores, beyond wife and mother, bringing and narrowing the exchange of intimacy between an appreciative and knowing Riddle with an appreciaive and needy Andromeda, both seem to find the interaction agreeable. Her child and husband suffer not from her actions but seem to be benefiting from her having had some release. Poignant ending, but Andromeda seems to have grown stronger to handle and categorize and detach her husband's infidelity and embracing and at peace with hers. Great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Your review manages to transcend standard morality and find the positive aspects of an ambiguous situation.
Poor Andromeda, damned if she does, damned if she doesn't--her husband projecting and speculating and believing his accusations are real, perhaps to justify his own wayward and selfish goings-on; a brilliant, concise depiction of a marriage/relationship gone bad, to the core: it seems Ted has committed himself from detaching and indulging himself elsewhere, the hypocrite. Glad Andromeda has progressed and honed in her skills, and saved some money on the side, as she'll be needing it and not completely left in dire straits... but as she is working under the umbrella of Riddle, what will be the true price or will he allow her to be left alone and as is? Great chapter, sad but true to life depiction for some witches in the world.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Yes, it was intended to depict financial problems causing a downward spiral with the solution to the finances causing even more problems since the best monetary option is working for a group that considers her husband a lesser form. (The destructive effect of poverty.) Thanks for reviewing a painful chapter.
Breathless from the build of the depiction of the erotica described and going on between Tom and Bellatrix, both within the proposed narration by Tom for Bella to visually and feel and experience, as well as the real time haptic and descriptive, erotically emotional content. Brilliant, arousing technique along with the developing relationship and intimacy between Riddle and Bellatrix. Great chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
A verbal seduction with Tom pressing Bellatrix's buttons (and Bellatrix): her pride, her passion, her desire to be recognized as superior. A difficult chapter to write. Thanks.
The impenetrable Bellatrix and mysterious, dubious Riddle--yum! Intrigued and thoroughly enjoyed their initial meeting and interaction in the moonlight--his directness and innate sureness about her--this wonderfully captures an exquisite chemistry between the two. Will Riddle be quixotic or malicious, or both in this tale? Must read on as fast as I can! Enticing chapter!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
I have been hoping you would discover this story. I worked hard at giving the sisters their own personality and having Tom respond appropriately. Thanks.
Oh my. So very well done. Will there be any more? I know it's been a while...
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Jumping out of sequence for your welcome reviews, 'In the Valley of the Lily' is almost a sequel.
Oh, goodness! I love how sneaky Narcissa is, and find it intriguing how Tom has his claws in all the Black sisters. I doubt they'd be pleased to know he has them all, though. Bad Lucius, tend to your wife.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Thanks for all the reviews of a story that violates canon (except possibly for Bellatrix). No, none of them would be pleased if they knew all that Tom was up to.
Oooh, chilling. Despite my thought that in canon the Tonkses were very happy, this is so, so well written.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
An encouraging review since I may have invested more in these psychological portraits than in any other work.
Oh, goodness. I've always liked the Tonkses. Not so fond of this chapter, I'm afraid- poor Andromeda!
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
This is a rough chapter for anyone fond of the Tonks family, but did Andromeda make a poor choice of employment?
Ooh, Bellatrix is a mean one. Poor Narcissa, I've always rather liked her. Not surprising to see her hating Lucius, though.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Bellatrix is quite the character, and Tom plays to her traits.
Oh, my, he is a riddle, isn't he. I approve. Very well written, excellent back-and-forth dialogue.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Thanks. Glad you like the dialogue.
Interesting comparison that Narcissa makes between herself and Lucius. I gather this is before the Tedious One's first fall? It's too bad he didn't approach Lily the same way he did the Black sisters. He might not have fallen at all.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Narcissa and Lucius are similar. The tale takes place in the mid 70's. I hope this Tom was not tedious.Your comment on Lily summarizes the subversive nature of this story. If it were to continue, Tom would wait until James reverted to type and Lily was vulnerable.
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
Oh, sorry, your Tom isn't tedious. The Tedious One, or TO, is the short hand between my beta and myself for him. We find the hyphenated euphemisms that are all through the canon to be tedious.Part of my interest in your story is due to the fact that I recently wrote one about Ted & Andromeda. It's a bit more heroic, but I come to the same conclusion you did, which is that the TO draws the people to whom he can offer something. Not so much the people who are just fine without him. You're right about Lily. While James is a faithful husband, Tom has no chance with her.
This Narcissa and what Tom gives her are just right. Interesting that what Andromeda wanted was recognition of her own accomplishments but what Narcissa wanted was recognition of her husband's misdeeds.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
There is another chapter, and Tom is not finished with Narcissa. I tried to write Tom connecting with each of them differently and on several levels. Your insights are good and rewarding to the author.
Appreciation. That's what she wasn't getting from Ted and that's what got her. Poor thing. He's going to toss her aside like a used hanky at some point while he moves on to his next conquest.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Good call on the lack of appreciation which Tom has guessed extends to her childhood, making her extremely vulnerable.
For tossing her aside, the story is silent on the matter, but there is no reason to think that he will since he has not tossed Bellatrix aside, and this may be a deeper Tom than canon. It would be kinder to toss her aside since the alternative is that she loses her sister, husband, daughter, and son-in-law in the conflict with Tom, and if he has not tossed her aside, she loses her lover, the primary cause of the conflict, as well.
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
I don't see the Tedious One making that long-term a committment to anything other than his own quest to live forever, myself, but it's an interesting question. We see in both the end of OotP and DH that Bellatrix wasn't one of the normal DEs in his mind. You're writing a a story that's on the AU side of things, but in a way that highlights good questions about the canon.
He was suave back then! :)
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
I keep thinking this is much deadlier than threats.
Wow, that's a different Ted Tonks than I ever pictured. I think I see how Tom will go from merely employing Andromeda to bringing her within his web. Creepy. By any chance, is he manipulating both sides of that marriage?
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Would almost any husband behave as Ted is reacting if placed under similar stress? It is all mind games on Tom's part. What do you think his hook will be for Andy? The story relates everything that Tom is doing.
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
These characters are outside my experience to some extent. I'm used to married people working together when things get difficult.Given the way you've painted things, I think your Andy wants recognition that she's doing all of this working and juggling and managing pretty well. She's also almost as big into family loyalty as her baby sister, so someone who promises to fix either her family or marriage would rate pretty high with her, too.
He's pretty bold in describing what he intends to do with her. I wonder though... will he actually do it or just make the promise?
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
The question is 'What will seduce Bellatrix?' Money? Not likely. An offer of eternal love? Not likely.
Response from Rose of the West (Reviewer)
And he has to offer her something, as well as everyone else who comes to him. He's good looking and all, but he's poor and doesn't have pure blood. So he has to offer that one thing that they each crave. I'm interested in seeing what that thing is for Bellatrix in this story.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
Since Narcissa has been married a while, this chapter takes place in 75 or 76, and Tom has become a powerful figure. What did seduce Bellatrix?
This is an interesting start to a story. I always pictured Tom Riddle as belonging to their father's generation. He seems younger, here.
Response from Amita (Author of Riddle in Black)
The story attempts a series of somber psychological portraits. Yes, Tom is in their father's generation, early forties, which can be regarded as young for a wizard.