Awesome one-shot! By the way, I'm so glad you're thinking of writing a sequel to this...I would really drop dead if you didn't. No, really. Your stories are as much a necessity as the blood running through my veins...

Oh yes, the Black library - I bet there are many useful things hidden there, if Mundungus Fletcher hasn't taken them away yet.A believable setting - pity the challenge-rules restricted the size of the story. But I've read in other reviews that you are planning on a sequel, which will not be limited and I'm looking forward to reading it.

If you ever decide to add another chapter or write a little sequel, I'm there. In fact, this is good as is. You can use this concept for a larger story, eh? muahahaha

Please update??

Just thought on something regarding UV and Secret Keeper.  Wormtail was the Potters SK.  He betrayed them and nothing physically happened to him as far as we know. 

Patty

will read your other story soon. 

Looking at the other reviews - you seem to be "pimping" Christmas Magic...

Perhaps a little distraction in the meantime would not be amiss either. I do have more than one need. - Dirty OLD perverted man...  ;)

A very good beginning...  Is the story complete? 

Does the same thing happen to a Secret Keeper and a person who takes the Unbreakable Vow?

Thank you for a new story.

Patty 

Ooh!  Is there more?  Will Snape decide to seduce her into his cot (or is it just a thin mattress on the floor) over the next 6 weeks?  Off to a quick start to the heart of the matter.  Waiting for the next installment.

Can we have a sequel of some sort? I would love to see how this played out long term.

I'm a little confused, and I feel like an idiot. Is this a 1,000 words one-shot, or an actual story? You said it was a response, but I haven't read the rules to the resonse (I'm guessing it's the 1,000 word one-shot that's the rules, basically, but I'm not sure). Sorry for the stupid question. If it isn't a one-shot, I hope you update soon. If it is a one shot, well I wish it wasn't, but awesome job.

Hey, I know it's a one-shot, but is there any chance for a sequel? Great job on keeping Snape in character, Hermione as well.

I NEED you to carry on with this idea, if you catch my meaning, subtlety is not one of my virtues.  Great writing by the way and this idea conjures so many interesting possibilities.  I really hope you continue.

Good story.  So Severus Snape always gets what he wants.  If you continued this, I'm sure Hermione would give him a run for his money!Mum

perhaps you could go over the contest and write a sequel ?

Completed?????  I think not!  More, more!  And what happened to Draco?  Can't let Voldy kill Severus.... can't let Hermione betray Severus... and she could be VERY vindictive if she thinks he has betrayed her! (as in Umbridge and Marietta Edgecombe and Rita Skeeter).  Back to your keyboard, wench!

I do have more than one needYeah, me too!  And I think I need you to get cracking.  The yummy possibilities.

Oh! You can't stop there! LOL! I want to know what happens next!

Scary that he could steal her that easily.  But, looks like it will work out.  This does fine as a stand alone, but I would love to know more.

Very interesting!  Too bad you were forced by the challange to leave it off here!