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Don't Stop Me Now
sunny33110 Reviews | 7.42/10 (110 Ratings, 0 Likes, 118 Favorites )
Lucius and Severus have survived the war with finances and social standings intact, but they are bored. Come with them as they re-visit the guilty pleasures of their youth. However, they are found out by a certain young woman.
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for Don't Stop Me Now
I want to be on that road trip. Can I bump Hermione aside?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Sure... but YOU tell her! :P
yum on the treasure trail.............
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
I think there is a consensus on that... ;)
Promises, promises! More please.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Coming! Plus there are a few more paragraphs at the end of chapter two. I lost them somewhere when I posted! D'oh! :)
Never really been into leather pants on a bloke but I suppose I could make an exception for these two. A little too much Freddie Merc if you get my drift. Went to see HBP last night at the flicks so am very much in the HP mindset. I don't know if it was my imagination but there appeared to be more Snape in it than the previous two films put together. So that was good. I too am a child of the Seventies being born a couple of years after the Marauders and am enjoying this very charming and funny trip down Memory Lane with the boys. Also enjoying Hermione's assertiveness with them. Great stuff! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. PS Sorry! But I still stand by Yorkshire's finest fish suppers cooked in beef dripping. Nothing can compare apart from perhaps Glasgow's Deep Fried Mars Bars! Yum yum......pass me the sick bucket!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Well, you would know better than me about the fish and chips if you live there! Check Chapter two again, I've just realised I chopped off the last few paragraphs when I posted it. :)
Oh my God, this is the most hilarious banter I've read in a very long time. I love it. The floppy omelette, the treasure trails, Snape sans pants. I can't get enough of it. Please, write more and post soon.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Will do! I have also fixed chapter two, where I had mislaid the last bit. May make more sense now! :)
That was great.Brilliant yarn.I too love fish & chips On Brighton pier...I live about 8 miles inland from Brighton,so I go there regularly...on pub crawls etc.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Didn't notice two hotties stumbling around one night then? ;)
Response from wiccakitty (Reviewer)
Cor! If I had noticed those two..I wouldnt have gone home LOL!!!!!
“Floppy. Definitely floppy. Just as well, too. Any other state and it would have been smacked.” Every time I read this story I laugh out loud at this line -- I LOVE Hermione's attitude toward the two miscreants she's taken up with! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Thanks. I had great fun writing that story! :)
Well first off...I love Queen and was quite amused with SS and LM rocking out to 70s glam rock. Love the story so far :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Thank you! :)
Ooo--they are so close to meeting... I'm so excited!;~D I'm dying to see them flirt, hook up, and do what comes naturally between consenting adults that are ready, willing and able to follow through on their desires. You know?;~D Well done--keep up the good work!☺
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Thanks! :)
I love how Lucius takes it upon himself to put some fun in their lives... Lucius and Severus cruising in an Aston Martin - gah! Thanks for the great visual, can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Read on McDuff! :)
Very charming--And I like how we don't have to wait a million years before the characters all come together.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Couldn't afford to wait too long. It's only five chapters long! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Now you're talking! Aston Martins, Queen, Sev, Bond, Pink Floyd, Luce, Bowie and now you've chucked Hermione into the delicious mix. This is definitely one for the big girls and boys. But puhleese.........I'm a native Scot adopted by Lancashire but everyone knows that the best fish suppers come from Yorkshire. I've even tasted Rick Stein's expensive offering and it didn't compare to Grandma Pollard's in Todmorden. But I'm willing to forgive this faux pas because I love your story thus far so much. Until next time...and don't be cruel by naming a chapter "Fat bottomed girls". Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Wouldn't dream of it, sweetie! Actually, the BEST fish and chips come from a little place on a wharf in the far North of NZ, they catch the fish and batter it in front of you! YUM! )
And Providence leads the two men to the pier and a new partner to accompany them as their adventure continues. Yes!!!! I'm doing cartwheels! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Don't fall on your head, or you will miss the rest! :)
This is so perfect! Severus, Lucius, Queen and a bitchin' ride (I love the DB5, especially)! Fantastic beginning. Looking forward to more tunes. I'll have Bohemian Rhapsody playing in my head the rest of the morning!!! :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Hehe. I got to you too! :)
You didn't say that my two favourite wizards were visiting my local beach, would of shut up shop and joined them!!Great start to what is sure to be another great tale, if your previous stuff is anything to go by.Lu
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
You would have to have fought Herms off, and she has a wand! :)
Mwahahahaha! And so it begins!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
What do YOU think happens next? ;)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
Seduction at its finest, my dear!
Tee hee. They're off to an odd start to say the least!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
At least they are doing something rather than moaning! ;)
I love this! I can't wait for the next update. When you had Lucius walk into the glass fronted building, I had no idea where you were taking him but I do enjoy your decision to have them do a roadtrip in style. Keep writing 'cause I'll be reading.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
It's all done, just has to be posted. :)
And the game's afoot. This looks like it will be a fun, and hopefully smutty read.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
You think? ;)
Alright, you have my attention! On to the next chapter...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
LOL. Thanks! :)
*Pictures Hermione's spit take at the sight of Professor Snape and Lucius Malfoy in arse-hugging jeans* LOLBut I think our adventurous duo might have a few alternative suggestions for her... not all of them involving suggestions regarding her career options. ROWR!!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Oh, yes! :)
Oh, this is too amusing. Although I feel bad for Hermione.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Don't feel too bad, she will be having fun soon! :)
This is so fun, I can't wait for more.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Thanks! :)
OOPS! I forgot to mention that I'm looking forward to reading additional chapters.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
I'll upload one right now for you! :)
Hmm, I like the idea of Lucius and Severus being footloose and fancy free, and looking for a good time. It makes them sound like young studs on the prowl. You know?;~D Well done--keep up the good work!☺
Response from sunny33 (Author of Don't Stop Me Now)
Thanks! :)