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Potions Under Duress Mirrored Fascination
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Mirrored Fascination

1: Mirrored Fascination

2: Mirrored Meetings

3: Mirrored Tranquillity

4: Mirrored Morning

5: Mirrored Mind Shifts

6: Mirrored Momentum

7: Mirrored Measures

8: Mirrored Memories

Mirrored Fascination

Somigliana

71 Reviews   |   71 Ratings, 0 Likes, 26 Favorites )

Drama Romance Action/Adventure Potions Under Duress 9,945 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Attraction, unfeasible in each of their minds is in actuality, mirrored.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Mirrored Fascination

Chapter 2: Mirrored Meetings

Chapter 3: Mirrored Tranquillity

Chapter 4: Mirrored Morning

Chapter 5: Mirrored Mind Shifts

Chapter 6: Mirrored Momentum

Chapter 7: Mirrored Measures

Chapter 8: Mirrored Memories


About Somigliana

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Somigliana

Member Since 2005  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 110  |  11 Reviews Written  |  309 Review Responses

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0/10

apisa_b

They really are alike, aren't they?And I'm sure their companions are speaking of the same Horcrux. Which one and where did they find it?Ah, I will just have to wait and see.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

They're alike in a lot of ways, yes, I think.  It's interesting for me to try and hightlight both the similiarities and the differences.Ah, the Horcrux - smiles mysteriously.

0/10

apisa_b

The idea of mirroring their experiences and feelings is a stroke of genius. I hope something is nagging further for you to continue this.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thanks so much :)  It's a lovely experiment in style for me... just very challenging to write... I'm getting there ;) 

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Lovely. I love the premise. Your descriptions are brilliant.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thanks so much!  It is quite a difficult style to maintain, but I'm enjoying the challenge!

8/10

beletseri

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thanks so much.  I'm glad you're enjoying it!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I just love how they seem to go together so flawlessly. Excellent work. I can't wait to see what's next.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you very much! I'm glad that the step from the first chapter to this one went smoothly. A traditionally linear story isn't going to work with the style that I've adapted here - I'm going to have to be careful not to leave out any important plot issues.

10/10

neelix

I loved this take on the final battle. Amazing writing.

10/10

mick42

A wonderfully inventive story, and a perfect ending, thank you.

10/10

mick42

P.S. Loved the hands touching, so neer, and yet so far.

10/10

mick42

And awaaay we go! 

10/10

mick42

Things are moving along quite quickly, now that Severus and Hermione are able to put their heads together. I'm sure Crookshanks would have been happy to have helped Severus out with his rodent problem, even though it would have given him a terrible tummy ache, if he had only asked.

10/10

mick42

Now that they have found eachother, prehaps the road will be easyer.

10/10

mick42

Wait, What! But I thought.. and then he... best read the next chapter quick.

10/10

mick42

I hope they have not been hunting the same Horcrux, could prove awkward.

10/10

mick42

They are answering to different masters,  yet both have the same question, where's Harry?

10/10

mick42

I have never read a story from both POV, at the same time. Looking forward to more. 

10/10

Lkmaide

Huhhhh-- sigh--  gorgeous!

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Grin--thank you so much!

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Grin--thank you so much!

0/10

Snapeaholic

Great execution of this unique concept.  Thank you so much for seeing it through and finishing it - especially with the happy ending.  Tres magnifique!

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

I'm thrilled to have finished it! Thanks so much for reading :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

I'm thrilled to have finished it! Thanks so much for reading :)

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Snapeaholic

I'm reading through, and I love this story so far and how it mirrors.  One nitpick is that when Severus says: "Oh, come on, Draco! He was an abdominal house mate," - You mean abominable.  Abdominal is pertaining to your stomach muscles. :)Otherwise, I'm hugely enjoying the story.  I was happy to see it finished as I remember reading and enjoying the first two chapers a couple of years ago.  The writing is superb.  This is truly a unique story in the mirrored POVs.

Response from Snapeaholic (Reviewer)

Excuse me - I meant to say that abdominal refers to your STOMACH AREA not just the muscles. :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Oh, thanks for picking that up... I guess it's one of those that slipped through :)

Thanks very much. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

Response from Snapeaholic (Reviewer)

Excuse me - I meant to say that abdominal refers to your STOMACH AREA not just the muscles. :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Oh, thanks for picking that up... I guess it's one of those that slipped through :)

Thanks very much. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

0/10

Saracen77

This was a lovely concept.  The mirror image works so well to show the two opposing sides of this conflict.  And I'm always a fan when Severus gets his happy ending!


Thank you for a job well done.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you very much--it was a wonderful challenge to write, but a lot of fun to explore their similarities and differences :)

I love happy endings, too!

Thanks for reading.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you very much--it was a wonderful challenge to write, but a lot of fun to explore their similarities and differences :)

I love happy endings, too!

Thanks for reading.

10/10

savine_snape

that was beautiful :D

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you very much :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you very much :)

9/10

ladyluv

Good chapter - like them comparing each other - cannot wait to see what is next

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thanks so much :)

That's that, though--the fic is complete.

With the style of fic it's excruciatingly difficult to write when they're in the same room. lol.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thanks so much :)

That's that, though--the fic is complete.

With the style of fic it's excruciatingly difficult to write when they're in the same room. lol.

0/10

FruGal

I think you did a great job with your writing exercise. I'm anticipating the next installment.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the final chapter :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the final chapter :)

9/10

ladyluv

Liked the latest chapter and cannot wait to see what happens next

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you so much - I hope you enjoy the conclusion of the story :)

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you so much - I hope you enjoy the conclusion of the story :)

9/10

Maddie

Your comparative study is an interesting way to tell a story. This chapter I feel particularly bad for Severus as he fails with his Felix Felicis for the Dark Lord.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you :)I feel a bit sorry for Severus, too, because Tom Riddle won't react well. He did ruin the potion on purpose, though. Giving liquid luck to Voldie = not good idea :)

10/10

pookah

Thank you for updating quickly,and thanks even more for a story worth waiting for.

Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)

Thank you so much!

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