Mirrored Tranquillity
Chapter 3 of 8
SomiglianaChapter 3: A moment of peace and quiet
ReviewedChapter 3
Mirrored Tranquillity
Disclaimer: Severus and Hermione most definitely belong to J.K. Rowling.
Hermione sat in the drawing room of number twelve, Grimmauld Place. She sat comfortably with her feet curled up under her, reading a very engrossing romance novel about a writer and her quest to make her handsome agent fall madly in love with her. Perhaps she was enjoying it far more than she necessarily would have under more normal circumstances, because it was so disconnected from her current reality, a blissful escape. The wan autumn sunlight streamed in feebly through the double-glazed windows, lighting the homely room with a honeyed glow. Dobby and Kreacher had been exceptionally busy of late—Harry was of the opinion that the busier Kreacher was kept, the better—and all the rooms were spotless.
She was taking a much-needed break from research while Harry and Ron were out on their continuing search for the elusive Horcruxes. Three months had passed since they had left Hogwarts, and their search had been fruitless thus far. The frustration and anxiety of carrying out and keeping their secret weighed heavily on all of them at times. They had some nerve-grating moments, but their friendship was established and tested. Hermione trusted Harry and Ron implicitly.
She finished the chapter, laughing softly at the unlikely antics that the writer had employed to attract her agent’s attention. If such antics did work, and you snagged your man, he would invariably disappoint you in some way. She sighed, trying not to think of her failed attempt at a romance with Ron. She stood up to pour a cup of tea from the delicate tea service, ever-present on the dresser. She noticed the new Daily Prophet on the dresser as well. She decided that she might as well catch up on the news now; it would not do to be uninformed, no matter how intensely the misinformation annoyed her. She moved slowly to sit back down, sipping her tea and scanning the headlines.
She glanced at the main picture on the top half of the front page and flicked past that immediately; some idiot photographer had snapped them during a much-needed grocery shopping expedition. She looked anxious and annoyed in the photograph, an accurate reflection. The article would invariably include some blather about threesomes and speculate wildly about the perceived incompetence of Harry Potter. She skipped to the lower half of the front page, where she stopped to gaze at the familiar photograph of Severus Snape: Wanted Criminal. She touched the sneering photograph lightly and sighed. Before she could think too much about the man that occupied her daily musings far too often, she heard the front door open with a bang.
“Hermione!” Ron’s excited shout was three octaves higher than usual. “Hermione, we've found it!”
Severus sat in the living room of his home on Spinner’s End. He sat comfortably with his long legs stretched out in front of him, reading a very intriguing theory about coercion magic. Perhaps he was enjoying it far more than he necessarily would have under more normal circumstances, because it was his own research, disconnected from his current reality as a spy, a welcome escape. The threadbare curtains shut out all sunlight that could have warmed the stark, shadowed room. It seemed that Wormtail was neglecting his duties again—Severus continued to delight in treating the disgusting little man like a glorified maid—a thin layer of dust covered most surfaces.
He was taking a much-needed break from brewing while Draco and Peter were out working on the task that he had assigned them. Unknowingly, they were aiding in his search for the one Horcrux that he knew the young Gryffindors would never find. In the three months since he had fled Hogwarts, his search had yielded nothing. He was close though to discovering where she had hidden it. The frustration and anxiety of directing the search and keeping his secret was detrimental to the atmosphere in the house. He was more easily annoyed now, his temper hair-trigger. Draco’s continued whining and Peter’s sycophantic grovelling irritated him immensely. He would rather live alone, but conceded that he required their unwitting help. There was absolutely no hint of friendship between the three men, and he spoke only to give terse commands. Severus didn’t trust Draco or Peter at all. In fact, Severus trusted nobody but himself.
He finished the chapter, snorting with disdain at the unlikely conclusion that the obviously deluded author had reached. If the idiot’s method worked at all, and your target was rendered susceptible to your will, the effect would invariably fade within hours. He sighed, trying not to despair at the obvious lack of insight into the mechanics of spell weaving. He stood up to pour a cup of tea from the chipped tea service on the table, first cleaning the cup meticulously. He noticed the new Daily Prophet on the table as well. He decided that he might as well peruse the news now; it would not do to be uninformed, no matter that the propaganda angered him to near boiling point. He sat back down and sipped at his tea as he scanned the headlines.
He glanced at his picture on the lower half of the front page and flipped the paper over immediately. It was the same photograph that they had been using since Albus’ death. He knew that he looked condescending and angry in the photograph, an accurate reflection. The two-line article beneath the photograph would invariably appeal to the public to watch out for the evil, Dark wizard. Skipping to the upper half of the front page, he stopped to gaze at a new photograph of Harry, Ron and Hermione. He watched as her tiny likeness bit her lower lip, and he sighed. Before he could think too much about the woman that occupied his mind far too often, he heard the front door open with a squeak.
“Sir,” Draco’s smooth drawl was self-satisfied and accompanied by a satisfied smirk. “Sir, I think I’ve found it!”
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Latest 25 Reviews for Mirrored Fascination
71 Reviews | 5.86/10 Average
Nicely done. I really enjoyed the dual POV.
Amazing- wish that JK's novel ended just like this!
so them!
I was rereading the Silvering Divide, which I just LOVE, and decided to see what else you had posted here. I really enjoyed The Traveller during the last SSHG Exchange. This was also a great read and a great concept. I hope you are participating in the upcoming Exchange. Your fics are a joy to read.
Nice!
Muggle post rules!
One rat down! Just a snake or two to go.
At last, they are working together.
Phineas?
found what?
We know who he could trust...
That's very well done. :)
Light and dark and all that diametric jazz... cool.
Wow! Simply Amazing!
I loved the writing style. It was very unique and intriguing. We know there are always at least two points of view to every story, and you gave us both of them: coherently, and as it happened. (If I ever get a plot-bunny that I think might work this way, I might just have to give this style a shot myself!)
The story itself was great too. I loved that they were able to recognize the similarities between themselves, as well as the strengths that the other had in areas that were not their own, and to find an unexpected way to communicate across the miles without risking blowing Severus' cover.
"I killed Voldemort," she said, gesturing towards the hunk of metal.
"Well... three-sevenths of him anyway." She grinned. "Do I get to be
three-sevenths of a Chosen One?"
Loved that line! Very clever!
Aw, that's really sweet. A bit fluffy, but a diet of constant angst jades the soul. Thanks for writing!
Aw, that is so sweet. The up in tempo works well too.
Duh! Phineas, I forgot all about him! Still loving the fic though!
I'm intrigued, must find out who the portrait is... a possible relation of Sev? But his dad was a muggle, maternal grandfather perhaps?
That blind sided me, I thought Sev was speaking at the end of Hermione's bit, but obviously not... on to the next chapter!
I like the style of writing, with the POVs being (almost) exactly opposite. Like looking in a mirror! ;)
Excellent. This is a really effective way of writing.
Oh, I thought he was the one that was in her room. Now, I can only wonder who is in his.
I just happened across this story and quite like it. I have never read a mirrored fic before. This is very refreshing. I am looking forward to your next update.
Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)
Oh, Thank you very much :) It is very interesting to write -- I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
oh wow good! update
Response from Somigliana (Author of Mirrored Fascination)
Thanks very much--I'm glad you enjoyed. Next chapter is in the works :)