Invasions of privacy
Chapter 5 of 6
WaterSingerSeverus Snape saved Hermione Granger from the desolation of the battlefield after the last fight with Voldemort. Now, five years later, Hermione wants to know why and she is determined to find out. Chapter 4---Hermione and Severus exchange some words.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I still don't own any of the characters or locations. Except Rowena's raven. He's mine. *glares threateningly* The rest are JKR's. I just play with them.
Chapter Four: Invasions of Privacy
“Hermione Granger.”
At the sound of her name, Hermione stopped dead in her tracks, only half-way into the room. She observed the tall man before her with calm eyes, despite the feverish speed of her thoughts. He said my name. My full name. What have I done? Perhaps he’s just surprised. Surely, he wasn’t expecting me to barge in on him. At least, he wasn’t expecting me!
Her mind calmed slightly, she allowed her eyes to wander away from the figure that was Severus Snape and surveyed the room he had attempted to hide himself away in. On the wall to her right hung a life-sized portrait of Rowena Ravenclaw. The Founder gave her a quick amused look with her deep blue eyes before resuming what appeared to be a conversation with a bird whose pinions nearly matched the darkness of the woman’s hair.
“Miss Granger,” Snape’s voice snapped, returning her attention to him.
“Professor,” she replied, unthinkingly.
“Yes, Miss Granger, that is what I am.”
“No, Professor Snape. I am a professor, and I would ask that you honour me enough to use my proper title if you are unwilling to call me by my first name.” She watched his eyebrows rise marginally, but refused to back down now that she’d made her stand. I can’t let him think that he can still intimidate me, as he could when I was a student here, she thought to herself. If we’re to work together, he must respect me as an equal. There’s no other way things can work.
As though he sensed her thoughts, Snape’s eyes flickered with a trace amount of respect, and his next words were slightly less caustic.
“Indeed, Professor Granger. Now, would you be so kind as to tell me why you have sought me out when I so clearly desired solitude?”
The acidity of his voice was still there, she noted, but it seemed less disconcerting that it had when she was a student. Either he’s losing his touch, she mused, or I’m not as frightened by him as I used to be.
“I need to know what your lesson plans are, sir,” Hermione said respectfully, keeping her eyes fixed on his. “The last Transfigurations professor wasn’t very good at keeping things organized, and I believe it would be easier for me to rewrite my lesson plans entirely rather than attempt to sort hers out.”
“And you need to make sure that you don’t attempt to draw on knowledge the students don’t already have?” His eyes were dark enough to make her feel as though she were gazing into a black hole. A gravitational pull, almost. She blinked and looked back at the portrait of Rowena Ravenclaw swiftly. The haughtily beautiful woman was watching the two of them out of the corner of one eye. Noting Hermione’s glance, she winked one blue eye at the young professor and gestured encouragingly.
“Very well, Professor Granger,” Snape said, drawing her attention back. “Accompany me to my office where I will give you an extra copy of my lesson plan. If you have any questions in the future, however, I would ask that you simply ask a house-elf to bring me a message rather than intruding upon my privacy yourself.” Hermione ducked her head and blushed, only now recognizing how foolish she had been.
“Yes, sir,” she murmured, keeping her eyes fixed on her shoes as she followed the intimidating professor through the school hallways. Indeed, she was so fixated on the sensible black leather that she didn’t notice him stopping until she walked into his chest. Withdrawing speedily from the wall of black cloth, she flushed and looked swiftly up at him, only to look back down at the floor in seeing the blank disapproval in his eyes.
“Sorry, Professor Snape,” she mumbled to the silver buckles holding her shoes closed. She heard his snort of derision then one long cool finger lifted her chin.
“As much as I appreciate an apology when it is deserved,” he said, his cool voice dry, “I do think that you should accustom yourself to treating other staff members as your equals, Professor Granger. It wouldn’t do for the children to see you as having any sort of weakness, after all.” He chuckled at her as her eyes snapped up to his, fury burning in their depths. She’d show him weakness, she vowed.
Yes, little lioness, an unfamiliar voice whispered in her head. I’m sure you will. She could feel her eyes widening in shock and focused all her fury on the man in front of her.
“That, sir, is a blatant violation of my rights as a witch. I would ask that, in the future, you keep your prying mind to yourself!” Her tirade finished, Hermione glared once more up into startled black eyes then whirled about on her heel and stalked away, unconsciously imitating the professor currently standing staring at her in complete shock.
However, her departure wasn’t fast enough to miss his whispered, “But I didn’t…” before she turned the corner and marched off to cool her fury in her rooms.
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I've never read a story that redeems Salazar Slytherin, but I appreciate the effort. One thing I've always resented about HP is that Rowling condemns the entire House of Slytherin as evil and conniving beyond redemption. I think this is a most unrealistic take on humanity; no sane man is pure evil, and there was undoubtedly good in Salazar Slytherin. I really like this version of the truth, because of course, that's all we, as readers of history, can ever have - versions of the truth, and never the truth itself.
i'm not sure if you're still working on this story, but I, for one, would be very interested in hearing the rest of this tale.
I can see that you have been writing this over quite a period......don't give up! This has so much potential to be one really great story, no matter that it's AU now. I am impressed at how easy to read it is...it flows effortlessly, which probably means that you've taken great pains over it! I am, along with countless others awaiting your next tidbit.....don't leave us starving too long.
Glad this wasn't abandoned! I like the idea of a ghost Salazar helping Hermione. May I make a request? Please don't make this one of those Hermione-is-rude-to-Snape-a-lot-to-prove-she's-an-equal-and-Snape-just-sucks-it-up kind of story. I always envision Hermione being unfailingly polite to a senior faculty member, even if she were annoyed. While I'm at it, may I beg for a happy ending? I'm a happy ending junkie and need a few after DH! Will be awaiting the next installment -- and thanks for your work!
Response from WaterSinger (Author of Aftermath)
I can't say that I'll give you what you want exactly because stories often get away from me, but I can say that this won't be that sort of story. I agree that the Hermione in my mind would be polite to senior staff members... however, I don't see her as the sort to simply accept someone being in her mind without her permission, hence her reaction when she thought Snape was using Legilimency on her. In the next chapter, you should see a bit more of the polite Hermione. Polite not meaning "lying down and taking whatever Snape throws at her"... I never saw Hermione as the type to do that, no matter how polite she is. She's smart enough to stand up for herself without needing to be rude.
As far as a happy ending goes... it won't be an angsty "life sucks" ending, that's for sure. Beyond that, it's all up to what you define as "happy".
Ooh, I'm glad you've come back to finish this. I had been wondering about it. :D
hmm most enjoyable
AU or not I like where you are going. Update asap!
Haha! Quite interesting! Now, I'm wondering about his painting. Does he use that to "spy" with? Anyway, good chapter. I like that Flitwick has helped him out. I can't wait for the exchange with Hermione.
I'm very glad Flitwick stood by Severus. I suspect he has a painting of himself because it's the only painting he'd really trust in his own office. Thanks for updating!
Ohhhhhh. A portrait, wonder if he will be more or less willing to give up information than his real life counterpart. I am really liking this story.
I do so love a writer that likes to write. I am also intrigued as to what Snape will claim is the reason that he saved her life. Will he say that he did it because it was the right thing to do. Or perhaps because he could not imagine a world without her kind of enthusiasm for learning. Or maybe, just maybe, because he could not imagine living in a world that she was no longer a part of. -- B
Ok, I am in. Write more soon. It sounds great. -- B
I'm excited that she's getting to teach at Hogwarts. Finally, she'll be able to see what his reasoning was--eventually anyway. Good story. Thanks for posting.
Great start. I'm interested in the inferred ramifications of Hermione looking into Snape's eyes, and "falling into them". Here's hoping that you update frequently.
Lovely story. Thank you for posting it.
I also wanted to point out though, that there is another story of the same name. You might want to mention this one is different from that one, just so there is no confusion.
Great start. I like this so far and am quite interested in seeing where you are headed with it. Good job.
I'm sorry to see this was abandoned - it had great potential. Thanks for letting people know your intentions, though, since it ends the hopeless waiting.
So was she somehow able to see into his mind. Hummm. I look forward to finding out. -- B
Hey, loving your story so far! Shame Snape's still the same old git, even after saving her life, I hope he changes a bit soon. I loved how you portrayed Hermione and Snape, they are very like what you would expect from JKR's books. Please update soon!
Well now....interesting...hmmmm. Who could that have been inside her head?
I kept thinking I'd read this one before but now I'm not so sure. Maybe it was that other story of the same title. I've read so many now that I can't remember them all. LOL. Anyway, the story so far is very good and I am enjoying the involvement of Salazar Slytherin.