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Chapter 3 of 6
WaterSingerSeverus Snape saved Hermione Granger from the desolation of the battlefield after the last fight with Voldemort. Now, five years later, Hermione wants to know why and she is determined to find out. Chapter Two---Hermione has a run-in with Snape, but not how she expected.
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Chapter Two: Return
“Wonderful,” Hermione spat, her voice laden with sarcasm. “Just lovely.” She threw herself backwards onto her new bed, shifting slightly once she had landed to make herself more comfortable. She allowed her eyes to slide closed with a sigh and sought the calm she knew was within her mind. It was very much unlike her normally phlegmatic personality, this outburst of annoyance and anger at so small a thing.
“Deep breaths,” she whispered to herself, unconsciously falling into the meditative pattern she’d developed over the last seven years. As much as she did not believe in the reliability of anything even slightly related to Divination, she found this ancient ritual worked more along the lines of a mental purification than the spiritual one it was intended to precipitate. Merlin knows I need something to clean up my mind, the young woman thought to herself, considering how fast things have been moving. Hard to believe it was only two months ago that I was still a ‘lowly apprentice’.
Rather than allow herself to laze about and get nothing done, the bushy-haired brunette hoisted herself off the comfortable bed and set out to re-explore the ancient castle and its grounds. She padded softly through the halls on cat-quiet feet, every nerve in her body attuned to the air currents around her. That was something she had learned during her apprenticeship: the importance of knowing one’s surroundings---when one was casting a spell especially, but at all times in general. She hardly even noticed that she was doing it any more; it had become such an ingrained skill.
She wended her way down from the upper levels until she was pausing at the door to the dungeons, hesitant to cross the threshold. Silly, she told herself, confronting her deeply buried fears. Snape’s not here, that’s why you were upset; he can’t very well pounce on you and deduct house points! You’re a professor now; he will not have control of you even when he does return. Her fear subsided slightly, she slipped through the wide doorway--hugging against the jamb as tightly as she could--and stepped down the stairs nervously.
Memories rose from the depths of her mind like scraps of mist from a damp roadway on a cool summer’s morn; flashing before her eyes, presenting her with images of times long past. Flickers of Potions classes; black robed students with blackened metal cauldrons mixing ingredients at the direction of the black robed professor. Red, gold, green and silver flashing from ties and crests, brief sightings of other colours midst the student body. Snape’s colours were unrelieved, black and pale flesh from head to toe.
With an almost physical shake, Hermione pulled herself back to reality. As her consciousness returned to her body, she realized that she was shaking and covered in sweat. Leaning against the wall, she forcibly slowed her breathing and pulled herself back into her usual calm. In the air went, passing down her trachea, through the bronchi and bronchioles, finally ending up in her alveoli, where the surrounding blood vessels brought their loads of cells to exchange waste gasses for oxygen. Out again, pushing with a slight bit more force now, seeking escape from the tightly confining lungs.
Her body returned to its natural state, the young professor continued down the dim hallway, one hand touching the slightly damp wall as though to reassure her that it was still there. Her fingers found the rough and uneven spots, exploring them in lieu of her eyes, which were fixed firmly on the ground in front of her. Slowly, she descended, each step forward lowering the floor by another millimetre or so. She bypassed many empty rooms, ignoring them in favour of her final destination. At last, she looked up at a familiar door--the one to the Potions classroom.
She pushed the heavy oak door open just far enough to permit her access and slipped through, closing the portal again once she was fully inside the large room. She slit her eyes slightly despite the fact that there wasn’t a particularly large amount of light in the room. As a matter of fact, there was a notable absence of light, the lack of windows leaving illumination up to candles. Said candles were not in evidence now, as it was summer, and there would be no need to cast light upon an empty classroom.
Looking around at the walls that she remembered so clearly, Hermione noticed a door that she had not ever entered during her years as a student. Walking up to it, she examined it closely with both fingers and eyes, noting that it was similar to the classroom door in grain, texture and wood. Testing the handle, she was slightly surprised to feel it give under her hand, retracting the bolt from its former niche. She opened the door cautiously, well aware that she was more than likely outside of her rightful boundaries but unable to quash her natural curiosity.
The room she entered was austere, furnished mainly with dark wood and dark green velour. She went over to examine the large desk placed prominently in the middle of the room, running fingertips over the finely carved ornamentation on the sides. She did not recognize the wood--not surprising, really--but judging by its texture, it was a difficult wood to work.
“Ironwood, Miss Granger,” a familiar cold voice told her almost dispassionately. She whirled to be confronted with the face of her ex-Potions professor as his likeness glowered at her from a life-sized painting. “Muggles can barely work it; it takes the most expert of wizard carvers all of their skill to create a piece such as that.” He nodded at the desk, and Hermione noticed the faintest traces of a humourless smile hovering about his thin mouth. “One of the few bits of my inheritance I’ve chosen to keep around me in my every day life.” Suddenly, his face closed in, and he glared at her.
“And what, pray tell, are you doing in my office, Miss Granger? I do recall that you have left the school and therefore have no business here.” He glared at her, as though he expected that to scare her away. Perhaps he does, she reflected.
“As a matter of fact, Professor Snape, I do have business here,” she replied calmly, enjoying the brief flicker of surprise that crossed his face. He was clearly not used to having students, even former students, speak back to him. “You see, I’m the new Transfiguration professor, and as such, I need to know what you will be teaching your students. I believe most teachers keep their course syllabus in their offices.” She arched one eyebrow in challenge, disregarding for the moment that she was speaking to a portrait. “As well, I have a few questions I must ask your flesh-and-blood counterpart. I don’t suppose you know where he is?”
A/N: It has been brought to my attention that there is another story by the same title as this one by cocoachristy. They are, obviously, not the same story nor do they have the same plot line, as far as I am aware. I'm very sorry if I have confused anyone due to the title.
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I've never read a story that redeems Salazar Slytherin, but I appreciate the effort. One thing I've always resented about HP is that Rowling condemns the entire House of Slytherin as evil and conniving beyond redemption. I think this is a most unrealistic take on humanity; no sane man is pure evil, and there was undoubtedly good in Salazar Slytherin. I really like this version of the truth, because of course, that's all we, as readers of history, can ever have - versions of the truth, and never the truth itself.
i'm not sure if you're still working on this story, but I, for one, would be very interested in hearing the rest of this tale.
I can see that you have been writing this over quite a period......don't give up! This has so much potential to be one really great story, no matter that it's AU now. I am impressed at how easy to read it is...it flows effortlessly, which probably means that you've taken great pains over it! I am, along with countless others awaiting your next tidbit.....don't leave us starving too long.
Glad this wasn't abandoned! I like the idea of a ghost Salazar helping Hermione. May I make a request? Please don't make this one of those Hermione-is-rude-to-Snape-a-lot-to-prove-she's-an-equal-and-Snape-just-sucks-it-up kind of story. I always envision Hermione being unfailingly polite to a senior faculty member, even if she were annoyed. While I'm at it, may I beg for a happy ending? I'm a happy ending junkie and need a few after DH! Will be awaiting the next installment -- and thanks for your work!
Response from WaterSinger (Author of Aftermath)
I can't say that I'll give you what you want exactly because stories often get away from me, but I can say that this won't be that sort of story. I agree that the Hermione in my mind would be polite to senior staff members... however, I don't see her as the sort to simply accept someone being in her mind without her permission, hence her reaction when she thought Snape was using Legilimency on her. In the next chapter, you should see a bit more of the polite Hermione. Polite not meaning "lying down and taking whatever Snape throws at her"... I never saw Hermione as the type to do that, no matter how polite she is. She's smart enough to stand up for herself without needing to be rude.
As far as a happy ending goes... it won't be an angsty "life sucks" ending, that's for sure. Beyond that, it's all up to what you define as "happy".
Ooh, I'm glad you've come back to finish this. I had been wondering about it. :D
hmm most enjoyable
AU or not I like where you are going. Update asap!
Haha! Quite interesting! Now, I'm wondering about his painting. Does he use that to "spy" with? Anyway, good chapter. I like that Flitwick has helped him out. I can't wait for the exchange with Hermione.
I'm very glad Flitwick stood by Severus. I suspect he has a painting of himself because it's the only painting he'd really trust in his own office. Thanks for updating!
Ohhhhhh. A portrait, wonder if he will be more or less willing to give up information than his real life counterpart. I am really liking this story.
I do so love a writer that likes to write. I am also intrigued as to what Snape will claim is the reason that he saved her life. Will he say that he did it because it was the right thing to do. Or perhaps because he could not imagine a world without her kind of enthusiasm for learning. Or maybe, just maybe, because he could not imagine living in a world that she was no longer a part of. -- B
Ok, I am in. Write more soon. It sounds great. -- B
I'm excited that she's getting to teach at Hogwarts. Finally, she'll be able to see what his reasoning was--eventually anyway. Good story. Thanks for posting.
Great start. I'm interested in the inferred ramifications of Hermione looking into Snape's eyes, and "falling into them". Here's hoping that you update frequently.
Lovely story. Thank you for posting it.
I also wanted to point out though, that there is another story of the same name. You might want to mention this one is different from that one, just so there is no confusion.
Great start. I like this so far and am quite interested in seeing where you are headed with it. Good job.
I'm sorry to see this was abandoned - it had great potential. Thanks for letting people know your intentions, though, since it ends the hopeless waiting.
So was she somehow able to see into his mind. Hummm. I look forward to finding out. -- B
Hey, loving your story so far! Shame Snape's still the same old git, even after saving her life, I hope he changes a bit soon. I loved how you portrayed Hermione and Snape, they are very like what you would expect from JKR's books. Please update soon!
Well now....interesting...hmmmm. Who could that have been inside her head?
I kept thinking I'd read this one before but now I'm not so sure. Maybe it was that other story of the same title. I've read so many now that I can't remember them all. LOL. Anyway, the story so far is very good and I am enjoying the involvement of Salazar Slytherin.