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The Precious Few

1: Crimson

2: I Promise

3: Thankful, he was

4: Vindicated

5: Home

6: Just friends, right?

7: Sleep never came easily

8: She had most definitely lied

9: And he held on

10: She'd Promised, After All

11: Soon, He Thought

The Precious Few

ConstantComment

103 Reviews   |   103 Ratings, 0 Likes, 46 Favorites )

Humor Drama Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Epilogue post-HBP/HBP compliant What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 3,904 Words 11 Chapters Complete
Severus Snape Hermione Granger Mr. Granger Mrs. Granger

Sets of 300-word drabbles featuring HG and SS after the the episode in the Shrieking Shack. EWE, otherwise DH-compliant.

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Chapters (11)

Chapter 1: Crimson

Chapter 2: I Promise

Chapter 3: Thankful, he was

Chapter 4: Vindicated

Chapter 5: Home

Chapter 6: Just friends, right?

Chapter 7: Sleep never came easily

Chapter 8: She had most definitely lied

Chapter 9: And he held on

Chapter 10: She'd Promised, After All

Chapter 11: Soon, He Thought


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10/10

rosered

Yes!!!!!!!!   I'm so ecstatic that they expressed their feelings for each other and got some kisses.  :D

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Oh, me too!! ;D Thanks for the stars! -CC

10/10

debjunk

LOL What a great scene! And now the seed's been planted.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hehe, thank you! Oh, those awkward mom-talks. What would we do without them?

0/10

Clairvoyant

"And where else would I put my head?" LOL  I can follow her thinking there.  Nice job.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

LoL. I tried to infuse as much of the awkward mom-daughter talk as possible. It really is quite funny hearing that kind of stuff in real life, you know? XD Thanks for the review! -CC

10/10

braye27

The seed was planted, indeed.  I'm not so sure that Hermione's mother planted the seed as much as she watered and cared for an already existing seed till it sprouted and found the sun!Now I wonder what the guys were talking about while they were grilling in the back yard.  Would her father give Severus his blessing or the third degree?I'm looking forward to the next update!!!!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Indubitably, although I don't know whether Mr. Granger was thinking "Does this man have feelings for my daughter?" or "This man needs to get his teeth bleached!" more. ;)

10/10

rosered

Oh, brother!  The 'mom' talk - how embarrassing...but, it did get Hermione thinking.  Do you think Severus will be getting the 'dad' talk, too?  Maybe the 'friends' will have something to discuss after dinner.  Great chapter.  :D

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Well, I didn't write 'the dad talk', mostly because it didn't occur to me, but also because I feel like it wouldn't occur to Mr. Granger. He seems like an Arthur Weasley, kind and generous, but also slightly oblivious. :) *shrugs* I feel like the only thing he'd be thinking about would be: "I have to fix this man's teeth!" LoL. Thanks for the review! -CC

0/10

kimjo2

how beautifully you pack so much emotion into so few words.  thanks so much

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank YOU! I'm glad my writing seems to be effective. :D I'm happy you're liking it!

0/10

sunny33

Poor Severus. What a long flight for your first! :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

I know, right? And likely there was a stop in Hong Kong! The horror! To get on another plane! ;) Thanks for the review! -CC

10/10

snitchette

How sweet. He-is-falling-for-her *happy dance*

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Ain't it just so cute? ;) Glad you like it, so far!

10/10

rosered

I'm so glad that Severus will be there for her if she needs him.  Buying the tickets and going with her was perfection!  Great chapter.  :D

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks!

10/10

braye27

This is the sweetest chapter.  It's wonderful to see Severus allowing Hermione to truly know the real Severus Snape.  And for him to be able to witness her reunion with her parents was such a plus!I love this, CC!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hooray! Isn't he just too cute? Yeesh, I make him so mushy. ;) Yay for romantic heroes, right? I'm glad you like it so much, Beth. It's great to hear that people love your writing, you know? Thanks for the spectacular review. -CC

10/10

debjunk

He's so adorable when he's white-knuckled.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

LoL. For sure. Silly Sev, you're not fooling anyone. Thanks for the review! -CC

0/10

Clairvoyant

I'm close to crying here.  Don't do it, CC.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

*hands you tissue!* No boogers on the keyboard,

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

! ;)

0/10

Clairvoyant

Aww.  Sweet kiss.  Finally recognized for his years of sacrifice.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Snarkiness held to a minimum.  Good sign.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Finally, right? Curbing the grump! ;)

0/10

Clairvoyant

Yeah.  Let the healing begin.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Glad you're enjoying! 

0/10

Clairvoyant

Yeah.  Finally he wants to fight for his life.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Indeed. Hopefully there's more for him in this life. :) Thanks for the review! -CC

9/10

ella2

Lovely, beautiful, wonderful.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you! :)

10/10

rosered

Recognition for all that he's suffered, being awarded a medal, and getting a kiss from the girl!  What else could a wizards ever want?  Lovely!  :D

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

:D Exactly. Glad you liked. Thanks for the review! -CC

0/10

sunny33

Great, now to start a life. :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Yes! It can only get better. :D Thanks for the review! -CC

0/10

sunny33

Gratitude is a good start! :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Indubitably. Glad you're enjoying! -CC

10/10

debjunk

Finally, the man gets what he deserves... hopefully in more ways than one!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hopefully! ;) Thanks for the review! -CC

10/10

braye27

This chapter was the vindication I have always thought Severus deserved, and it is so beautifully written.  I could see him as he slowly made his way to the dais amid the standing ovation and the echos of the Minister's words of praise.  And the perfect element was the kiss, so unexpected and so full of meaning.I love this chapter soooooo much.  Well done!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Aww, thanks, Beth! So sweet. I'm glad you liked it. I'm taking this drabble series to "do it right" for Snape, you know? He did deserve it. :) -CC

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad he received his so deserved medal and the praise and recognition from his peers. weel, that and the kiss of course.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

And the kiss, of COURSE! ^.^ Glad you liked! -CC

10/10

braye27

This is pure magic, CC.  Each chapter builds on the last, and it keeps getting better and better.When he put his arms around her and nestled into the crook of her neck, I just melted!  Very NICE!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hey thanks!!! 

10/10

snitchette

The more I read it the more I love it.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Well... good! ^.^

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