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Unlikely Allies

84 Reviews | 84 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 39,298 Words 10 Chapters WIP

Arthur Weasley Hannah Abbott Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Molly Weasley Neville Longbottom Nymphadora Tonks Poppy Pomfrey Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Original Character Crookshanks George Weasley

She needs his help, and though he doesn't know it, he needs hers.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

About Romione Ravendor

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Romione Ravendor

Member Since 2009 | 1 Story | Favorited by 0 | 0 Reviews Written | 67 Review Responses

The stories listed herein are a joint effort between lyn_f and HermioneWeasley1972.

Reviews for Unlikely Allies

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10/10

carolinaunc

Love this story - I hope that you update soon!

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Thank you. Chapter 6 is in the queue. Glad you like it!

0/10

sunny33

Sounds like something triggered it while she was arguing. Wonder what it was? :)

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

It certainly seems that way, doesn't it? All will be revealed soon. :)

10/10

FlittterKat

Oh, so that's why Hermione needs Severus. It is too bad that Severus still holds himself apart from anyone who would be his friend. Heart breaking....

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Yes, indeed. Severus has a long way to go, I'm afraid. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

10/10

jessajohns

Ah, so we finally start to get some idea of why Hermione needs Severus. . . Good chapter.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Thanks so very much. More soon. :)

10/10

indigo_rose

Hey, just read the first four chapters of this story, and I'm really enjoying it so far! First, I'm glad that all of my favorite characters are still alive here, which makes it a fun read no matter what. Also, I'm curious to find out just what happened to Hermione and where the curse came from. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Yes, I'm curious to know that, too. ;)The next chapter will be coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

0/10

debjunk

Wow, wasn't expecting that! I was wondering how these two would ever be thrown together. You've come up with a clever reason. And mysterious too!

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Thanks so very much! More soon. :)

0/10

sunny33

Yay. Everyone is alive! That's much better. :)

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

I wholeheartedly agree. Thanks, Sunny!

0/10

Clairvoyant

Snape's been very stealthy these past few years if Hermione didn't even know he was alive. Any guilt there on her part?

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Could be ... or not. You'll have to wait and see. Thanks for sticking with this story.

0/10

genrou

well, seeing the prompt- im guessing that the subject in uestion is dolonov's curse which if so is something i whole-heartedly agree with it.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Time will tell what the situation is. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

10/10

FlittterKat

Whoa, what a pleasant surprise to find Severus Snape, Remus and Tonks are alive. Ron and Hermione? erm, well, Ron has wonderful taste in rings. I'm enjoying your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

That was one thing I wanted to change: not only is Snape, Remus, and Tonks alive, Fred is also alive and making mischief with his other Weasley relatives. Thanks for giving this pairing a chance and for reading and reviewing.

10/10

makaem

Poor Hermione, fainting at Snape's entry.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Yes, poor Hermione, indeed. I'm afraid it was such a shock to her poor system. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

9/10

apisa_b

Well, fainting could be called a tiny bit of an overreaction to seeing someone unecpected, even if the person in questions is thought to be dead. I'm curious what is the reason behind her fainting.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

You'll see. All will be answered in due time.

0/10

debjunk

She fainted! How embarrasing.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Yes, poor Hermione.

0/10

sunny33

Nice proposal, Ron! :)

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Thanks, Sunny!

0/10

sunny33

Aww, Ron is so sweet! :)

10/10

Jinxie

Well written, nice to see Ron acting like an adult for once instead of like a twat! When will she tell him that she's ill so he knows what's going on?

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

You'll see. Ron will find out, eventually.Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)~lyn_f

10/10

debjunk

Poor guy is missing her, with reason. Lancelot and Gueneviere, huh? Sounds intriguing.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Indeed. We were charmed by the costumes we found on-line. I'm sure they'll look rather smashing. :)Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)~lyn_f

10/10

blue artemis

Ron's trying anyway, but he is still Ron.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

LOL, indeed! :)Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)~lyn_f

9/10

sinbad

Nice chapter, good flow and it held my interest. When will Ron figure out Hermione is sick?

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

You'll see. We will get back to this story, eventually.Thanks for reaading and reviewing. :)~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

I liked this chapter because it was almost a 'slice of life'. I found it believable as well as entertaining.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Thanks so much! This was a fun chapter to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

Sweet, but I'm expecting the other shoe to drop soon.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Hee! Keep reading... and don't worry; this story is not abandoned. Updates just have been slow in coming...~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

That was so sweet of Ron, but this utter exhaustion Hermione experienced has me worried.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

It is worrying, isn't it? Keep reading ... there will be more to come!~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

It seems wrong to keep this from Ron, he seems to have grown up quite a bit and this affects both of them.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Indeed so. However, you will see why Hermione felt she had to keep this from Ron.Keep on reading! :)~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

I wonder why Severus is still so defensive? Life has got to be easier now that the Dark Lord is gone...

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

Severus does have his reasons....~lyn_f

10/10

sinbad

I was surprised that Hermione fainted.

Response from Romione Ravendor (Author of Unlikely Allies)

I guess she startles easily...~lyn_f

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