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Without Magic
karelia112 Reviews | 7.57/10 (112 Ratings, 0 Likes, 116 Favorites )
The after-effects of the Final Battle are despair - especially when the magic disappears.
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Member Since 2005 | 83 Stories | Favorited by 232 | 666 Reviews Written | 2,343 Review Responses
Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
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Oh crap! Weasleys. Hopefully they won't throw a spanner in the works of Hermione finding Snape. Red Cloud talking to ... hmm ... maybe the Sorting Hat!? Just a wild guess, but hey! Am totally enjoying this story!
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Not the Sorting Hat, me thinks, LOL. Am glad you're enjoying it!
Okay, so wept after the very FIRST paragraph! Harry - gone. Weasleys - gone. How CRUUUUUEL! Still, wonderful idea and I'm hastening to Chapter 2
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Yeah. I'm cruel. That's why I love writing. I can kill anybody. Be warned there'll be more deaths, but the story will lighten, I promise.
:-)
Started reading this fic at another website and was thrilled to find it here up to ch 4. Wish there was a way to squeeze more story out faster!!!
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Thank you! I'm writing Chapter V presently, so it shouldn't take too long. :-)
A great chapter, but I did notice when mistake.“'Well, I do most of that side of potions. He’s mainly busy with brewing medicinal potions for Draco. And then he has to play the piano regularly, in order to keep the magic up,' volunteered Pansy"In the above passage,. Hermione is talking to Parvati, not Pansy. (Your story made it clear that Pansy is still with the medium.)Other than that, it was wonderful. I patiently wait for the next chapter.
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Oh Merlin! You truly deserve a box of chocolate frogs for that one! I haven't a clue how that one sneaked itself in, but i changed it, so there. Must talk to RC about such silly mistakes... *scatters_off_to_find_Severus_to_have_serious_words_with_RC*
An amazing chapter. You're doing great, and I can't wait to read more. So please update soon!
Brilliant. I love how you portray Severus here. And not just that he's a likable person, but that you have added other characters perceptions of him and their shock at his more likable nature.
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Thank you, that means a lot! I'm so glad you like it! :-)
Dean? I though it was Seamus and Pansy who were in Ireland.
Love this fic. More soon please.
wow what a story you have going.
i was disapppointed that the chapters stopped here.
please hurray with a new chapter.
thanks p
very intriguing
great beginning
mas, por favor...I want more!!
And can we just hang Ron from his dangly bits for being us a pain in the arse? It'll make everyone much happier...except Ron, but then again, that is the whole point.
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Thank you for your lovely review, and my apologies for being so late in answering it!
LOL @ your wish for Ron! You know, I never mean to portray him in that way, I quite like him, really, I do, it just comes out that way... Next chapter will be out soon.