How About You?
Chapter 7 of 12
neelixHermione and Severus bump into each other while on holiday. Do they ignore each other, or risk saying hello?
ReviewedA/N: More smut and another chapter that is way too short. Honestly, I must have had a one track mind writing this!
Hermione allowed the hot water to run slowly through her hair and massaged her shampoo through it gently. Her eyes were closed as she concentrated on her task, and she didn’t see Severus, sitting on the small lavatory seat, watching her as she showered.
She had been sharing his house for three days, and he still couldn’t get enough of her. When she left a room, he missed her, and he felt that his house had never been complete without her in it. They had just started to talk more and fuck less, and it was stimulating to him. He had showed her his garden, in particular his small greenhouse where he was growing some more exotic species of Venus fly traps. They went for long walks on the beach, often holding hands as if it were the most natural thing in the world. And tonight they were going for dinner at her insistence, to give him a break from cooking. He didn’t tell her he loved cooking for her and watching her enjoying every mouthful. He didn’t tell her anything.
And he didn’t tell himself that he was falling in love with her, either. That thought was hidden in a deep, dark corner, covered in dust and cobwebs and would never be brought into the light if he had any say in the matter. Severus was determined never to fall in love again.
Hermione turned and saw him, laughing as he lounged comfortably, his eyes heavily lidded as he gazed on her bare arse. She pushed the shower door open and flicked water at him.
‘There isn’t room in here for two,’ she laughed.
‘I don’t need a shower. I came to admire the view.’ He smiled lazily and pointedly stared at the triangle of hair between her legs. They had become more sexually at ease together, and Hermione was enjoying her new-found power over him.
Sexily, Hermione looked at him.
‘Seen something you like, Severus?’ she purred at him and let her hands drop between her legs, parting her lips with her fingers and inserting a finger into her vagina.
Severus raised his eyebrows at her and shifted in his seat as his cock hardened.
‘Continue,’ he murmured and sat forward a little to get a closer view.
Hermione pushed the shower door fully back and stepped back, the water hitting her breasts as she leant back against the cold tiles. Slowly, she ran her hands over her pert nipples, pulling them taut and hard and gasping as she stared him in the eye. Her hands went to her pussy, and she parted her lips fully with one while massaging her clit with the other. Her head fell back as she bit her lip and began to moan.
Severus unfastened his jeans and pulled his cock from its confines, gripping the thick shaft and rubbing pre-cum over the tip with his thumb as he began to thrust his hand up and down, twisting slightly as he got to the head. He groaned as he watched her. Hermione was fucking herself quickly with her fingers, her hands a blur as she thrummed her clit.
‘Oh, gods!’ she moaned loudly, her eyes fixed on his cock as he started to pump harder, his hips lifting up from his seat a little.
‘Hermione,’ he moaned, ‘here.’ He hissed, and she walked towards him. With firm hands on her waist, he spun her around and pushed her forwards so she was leaning against the sink. He stood and shoved his denim around his ankles, his shaft still gripped in his hand as he entered her slowly from behind. They both cried out their pleasure together as he filled her and began to fuck her with speed. She was so wet; his cock was slick and slipped in and out easily, and he felt around the front of her quim for her clit. It wasn’t hard to find; heat was radiating from it, and it was so engorged it was like a small penis sticking out from her. He ran his wet fingertips over it as he bent over her and curled his hardness into her tight pussy. Gods, she felt good, his head pushing deliciously over her G-spot.
Hermione pushed back to meet his cock and moaned and gasped with each slap of his balls on her bare flesh, his scrotum tickling her labia with each hard thrust. She was coming, and she screamed at him to fuck her harder. He grabbed her hand and put it where his had been as he took firm hold of her hips, thrusting firmly and quickly into her tightness. He bounced her on his cock until neither of them could stand it any longer, and they shouted together before collapsing, wrapped in each other, her arms around his neck, his head bent, his hair curtaining his face.
Her held her close, cradling her as she rested her head against his shirt.
‘I think I love you, Severus,’ she said softly, playing with one of his buttons with her fingertips.
Severus closed his eyes, but said nothing.
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Latest 25 Reviews for I'm Not In Love
112 Reviews | 6.86/10 Average
WOW - LOVE the ending! Thanks again for writing!
Love the ending -- embarking on another new adventure together. :D
Loved their love story. Thank you.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Thanks for reading :)
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Thanks for reading :)
Forget that vibrator , Hermione!
Good smut, though very fast paced.
What I did find slightly disappointing (and perhaps a little OOC for these two), is that their attraction seems to be entirely physical, and rather superficial. I like to imagine Snape is a man who wouldn't stare at a woman's breasts, forgetting about the rest of her. :-)
That was a beautiful story. Im new to this site and I kinda like what I have read of you stories. Keep up the good work
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the site, you'll find excellent writing here :)
And it ends on such a happy and full of hope note. I'm definitely jealous.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Of course! It's always warm and fluffy in my world!
I envy them to have found each other.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
I know. How lucky are they?
aahhh yesss...a gloriously happy ending! thanks so much
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Thanks!!
They're so cute both of them. *smile* I can picture them so easily. Oh and Hermione : you two are lovesick puppies.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
lol... they're pathetic aren't they!
It is sad when a hat is smarter than some people.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
ah but this IS the Sorting Hat we're talking about.. it's no ordinary hat after all!
Me thinks that there are a lot of men out there, like Severus, who could do with that Sorting Hat to make them aware of their feelings (like a sort of Jiminy Cricket - conscience - for them!)
I love the way he traced her handwriting with his fingers, so sweet - I don't think he can stay in denial for much longer personally! I also love the title of this chapter - Millinery Wisdom - inspirational!BTW: Thank you for the 'hug' you sent me earlier today, I really needed it - bless you! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
My other half definately needs a Sorting hat - he certainly doesn't take advice from me that's for sure!As for the hug... anytime love. We all need it!Thanks for the positive praise. It makes me glow!
I love this. That sorting hat isn't stupid is he? Lets hope Severus listens.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
lol... I hope so too, 'cos there aren't many chapters left!
Ohh, that's so sad and sweet... I hope they come to their senses soon. Great chapter!
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
Thanks for reviewing - I don't think you'll be disappointed!
Aw, how sad! Please make it better! :) This was lovely.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
I'll do my best~!
They both seen so afraid of getting hurt that they could possible let this chance for love slip away. Hermione, Severus don't let this chance get away. One of you needs to be brave enough to make the first move. I love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Hurry, Hurry, Hurry...................
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
It's in the queue!
Noooo...what a tease! More! More right now!
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
lol... it's queued, hopefully won't be long.
Please tell me this is going to have a happy ending. I am very emotional & sad today & when I saw you'd posted another chapter of this story I thought a quick read of a bit of 'smut' would cheer me up! But, once again, you've created a real 'romance' with these two & my heart is now going out to Hermione (imagining how I'd feel in her place) so now I've got even more heartache to cope with today! Boo hoo (Not trying to make you feel guilty or anything of course ... I totally blame Severus; stubborn man!)BTW: SS drinking guiness? Surely not? A glass of the most expensive red wine at least, I'd have thought! :-)
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
ahhh now. Red wine? You're confusing SS with AR!! Never ever do that! Sev is a Guiness and Whisky man, defo.As for your low mood... {{ hugging you}}Sometimes a good cry is whats needed... or a good shag. I can't do both in one chapter, but I hope you feel better soon!
OK, that was just...extremely hot. Whew!
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
lol... I'm glad you liked it!
Ooh, I just discovered this, and I AM enjoying it!
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
thanks... let me know how it turns out for you!
What a hot story.Just found it and couldn't stop reding.Come on Severus you are such a clever man I#m shure there's a resolve.
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
mmm... he's also a Slytherin!
You will make things all better won't you?
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
I think that depends on Severus. You know how damned stubborn he can be!
oh - please write more soon - when I got to the end of the text, my thought was "Is that all there is?"
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
I know... too short. Sorry.
No new job openings?
Response from neelix (Author of I'm Not In Love)
ah now... Severus wouldn't be that calculating. Or would he? *buahhaaaaaaaaaahaaahahaa* (evil laugh!)