Part Seven
Chapter 7 of 7
HanagasumeAt the urging of Albus Dumbledore, Severus Snape takes on Hermione Granger as his apprentice shortly after the beginning of her Seventh year. After completing her very rushed N.E.W.Ts, ending a relationship, making a friend, gaining an enemy, and battling everything Snape could throw at her, what else is left?
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Many thanks to WriterMerrin for trying to make this story suitable for the public eye. Anything you dislike about it can be automatically blamed on my 18 year old self.
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Part Seven
This time it was a house. It was a rather large and expensive one that was most likely courtesy of one Lucius Malfoy. The odd thing about it, though, was that Severus couldn't see the Dark Lord anywhere. Lowering his mask from his face, he went directly to his blond former schoolmate and gave him a questioning look.
'Where is our Master, Lucius?' he demanded roughly.
'He couldn't attend. He said he was feeling a bit under the weather today, so he left orders with me to ensure that everyone enjoyed the afternoon,' he said with a wicked gleam in his eyes.
'What kind of fun are we talking about, old friend?' he asked curiously.
'Avery and Lestrange have gone to round up some Muggles for us. Entertainments should last us well through the night,' he said carelessly.
Severus cringed inwardly at Malfoy's crude recital of the afternoon activities. He couldn't do it this time. He just couldn't. He looked at Lucius square in his empty silver eyes and frowned. 'I cannot stay here for this, man. I have classes to teach this afternoon. People will begin to wonder where the hell I am. You will have to take part in the festivities without me,' he reasoned.
'Severus, you are under obligation to kill at least one of the Muggles. As soon as Bella and Theodore arrive, you can make your kill and go,' Malfoy drawled.
'I'm afraid that is not acceptable. I have been gone from Hogwarts for almost an hour now; I can not stay away any longer. Now, punish me for neglecting my duty, and send me on my way,' Severus said with an exasperated groan.
'Very well, old friend,' Malfoy said with a sigh. 'Crucio!'
Severus fell to the ground and felt the pain coursing through him. After a few minutes, someone began to kick him in the ribs, and one even landed a blow to his nose, which broke with a disgusting crunch. He was placed under the spell for a good thirty minutes, and when he was finally released, he coughed out a heap of blood and stood on shaking legs.
His body was shaking and convulsing with pain, yet he stood rigidly all the same and nursed his broken nose in one hand and his broken ribs in the other. He Apparated into the Forbidden Forest and fell to the ground in a messy heap. His body convulsed yet again, and the pain was worse with all of the broken bones. Not many of the other Death Eaters, including Lucius, could ever last through that kind of torture. He was stronger than most of them. He would survive it.
He waited for a moment until the tremors became less intense and frequent, managing to haul himself into a sitting position against a tree. One step at a time... It was probably the worst he had been beaten in quite a long time. He pressed his wand to his nose and muttered a healing charm, feeling it hurt for a brief moment before the blood stopped flowing and the bones and cartilage moved back into their regular position.
Eventually, he managed to stand and stumble his way towards his hidden door, crash through into the castle, and somehow find his office. He threw himself into his chair and summoned an elf.
'What can I do for you, sir?' asked the elf timidly.
'Go to the classroom next door. Summon Madame Apprentice to me, please,' he rasped painfully, straining to breathe under the pain of his broken ribs.
The elf popped out of the room, and he settled down in the chair to find a position that was slightly more comfortable to him than the way that he was. He heard the door open and saw Hermione slip into the room and gasp when she saw his state. She closed the door and put locking and silencing charms on it, and rushed immediately to him. By then, the convulsing had started again and he was shaking in the chair.
Oh, sweet Merlin, what happened?' she asked faintly, tugging the Death Eater robes off him quickly before rushing to the potions cabinet and retrieving the Cruciatus Potion. She yanked the stopper off it roughly and tipped it down his throat, massaging his neck muscles to make him swallow it properly through his spasms.
Snape coughed up a lot of blood after swallowing and slumped into the seat. 'Miss Granger, would you mind terribly if I asked you to heal my broken ribs?' he asked quietly.
'Of course not," she replied, complying with his request straight away.
Severus watched her as she ran her wand over his chest, and he felt the bones knitting themselves back into place beneath his shirt. He studied her posture and saw that she was rigid with shock, almost, and saw the concern in her eyes. She was still mad at him, no doubt, but somehow, seeing him wounded so badly had an affect on her sensibilities. When she was done, he took her hand in his gently and closed his eyes.
'Thank you, Hermione,' he said quietly.
He pulled her hand up to rest over his chest, right above where his heart was beating furiously. He knew that she could feel his heart pounding beneath her hand. But he wanted her to feel that. He wanted her to know what she did to him. 'Hermione, can you feel that?' he asked in a strangled voice.
'Yes,' she said breathlessly.
'Do you know what it means?' he asked, rubbing small circles over the back of her hand. 'Do you understand what I am trying to tell you?'
'I I don't know,' she admitted, letting her other hand travel up his chest to cup his face gently in it. She brushed her thumb across his bloodied cheek, and he heard the soft sob escape her throat. 'Who did this to you?'
'Lucius, among others,' he replied. 'I couldn't fulfill my duties today. I asked to return to Hogwarts. There was going to be a mass Muggle slaughter at this so-called party.'
'Oh Gods, how on earth are you still living?' she asked softly, searching his tired face for an answer.
'Sheer dumb luck,' he replied, imitating what Minerva had once stated to the Gryffindor three after their run-in with the troll in their first year.
Hermione looked at her pocket watch quickly and pulled away from him. 'You need to get some rest, and I have to go back to teaching my class for the next hour. Go to your chambers and take a Dreamless Sleep,' she suggested thoughtfully.
Severus nodded and stood, and suddenly he realized something that he should have known all along. He grabbed Hermione's hand before she could leave, and held her still. 'Hermione, I don't have any feelings for Professor Cole. She tried but I shoved her away and told her never to return. I would never abuse your trust that way,' he said softly.
Tears welled up in her eyes as she nodded and pulled her arm away from him, then went back to her class. Severus, feeling slightly better, did as she said and went to his chambers. He took a hot shower and lay down on the bed and closed his eyes, not bothering with the Dreamless Sleep, and dozed for a while.
About an hour and a half later, he heard the door to his bedroom open, somewhere in his semi-sleeping state, and his eyes flickered open. He thought he might as well wake up; Albus would be expecting a report soon anyway.
He heard the bedroom door open and soon after felt the mattress dip a little on one side and rolled over to see Hermione looking down at him with tear-filled eyes.
'I'm sorry, Hermione,' he said softly, reaching up a hand to brush away the tear that had begun to travel down her cheek.
'I forgive you,' she replied, touching his now-clean cheek with her hand lightly.
'I don't deserve your forgiveness,' he said seriously.
Hermione moved closer and leaned forwards, brushing her lips over his tenderly. He pressed his mouth back against hers more firmly and drew her closer with his arms now around her waist. She moaned softly when his tongue began to trace her lips before it pressed against them, begging entrance.
Severus only pulled back when the need for oxygen became paramount, and they were both panting heavily, lips swollen from their heated kisses. By this point, Hermione was resting on top of him, forehead pressed to his and hands rested on his chest as his arms wrapped around her.
'You wont change your mind about us, will you Severus?' she asked unsurely.
Snape shook his head firmly. 'Not this time.'
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The silvery orb floated in the dark sky above the grounds of Hogwarts. Severus sat with Hermione between his legs, arms wrapped firmly around her petite waist, and chin resting on the crown of her head.
She pressed her back into his chest and rested her head back on his shoulder slightly and hummed in contentment. It had been an extremely tense week after Severus had returned from the Malfoys' celebrations; although, with Hermione around, it all became a little more bearable. Severus and Hermione had come to a compromise and decided it was best if they kept their relationship a secret for the time-being.
'You're shivering, Hermione,' Severus noted softly.
'Hmmm, I'm a bit cold,' she replied sleepily. It was Friday, finally, and she had a perfectly relevant excuse to be so tired. It had been a long week for everyone.
Severus opened his cloak and drew her into it, wrapping both the cloak and his arms back around her and pulling her closer, if it were possible. To anyone who saw them, this would have looked extremely romantic or sweet, but if they were to take a second look, they would probably faint from seeing Professor Snape, of all people, hugging Hermione Granger under the stars.
Severus was not usually an openly demonstrative person, but he felt that he somehow owed Hermione the intimacy for being there for him whenever he was tempted to do something irrational. Besides, he liked to be able to show her how much he cared for her without actually having to say it.
'Better?' he asked quietly.
'Hmmm, yes, much better,' she answered, turning a little in his arms to give him a brief peck on the cheek.
They hadn't been able to spend any spare time together during their first few days as a "couple" because of all of the Potions work they had to catch up on from the time when she had been ignoring him. Fortunately, it didn't take long for them to complete, but at the end of it, both were completely beat.
'I think it would be as appropriate a time as any to let Mr. Potter know about our... changed dynamics,' Severus said offhandedly.
'Why does Harry need to know?' Hermione questioned.
'Because he saw fit to give me the over-protective brother speech on how to treat you, my dear, and because he is aware of both of our feelings regarding... us,' he replied quickly.
Hermione let out a small giggle before promptly beginning to laugh properly, the vibrations buzzing against Snape's chest. 'He did that?' she asked in between gasps and giggles. Severus nodded, and she doubled over with laughter again. 'Imagine, scary Professor Snape being given "the talk" by one of his own students, and Harry Potter, his greatest foe, no less,' she laughed.
'Miss Granger, I would appreciate it if you would cease destroying what little there is left of my pride. You had better not start broadcasting that around the school, or I could become a very difficult man to be around,' he said smarmily.
'Hmmm, and as if you weren't enough of a grump already,' she retorted wittily.
'That'll be enough out of you, Madame,' he said, hugging her around the middle tighter and kissing the top of her head.
'Alright, grumpy, let's go inside,' she said with a cheeky grin.
'Agreed, you'll catch your death in this cold,' he agreed hastily, slipping out from behind her and standing up. 'Coming?' he asked, holding a hand out to her.
Hermione took his hand and allowed him to pull her smoothly from the ground. She slipped her hand into the crook made by his elbow, and together they made their way back to the castle. Once inside, Severus threw his damp cloak onto the chair in his office near the fire to let it dry and went back to his chambers to find Hermione flicking through the books on one of his many shelves.
'Find anything you particularly like?' he asked, coming up behind her and resting a careless hand on her jutting hip.
'Perhaps,' she answered mischievously, spinning around to wrap her arms around Snape, the book lying all but forgotten on the shelf. 'But it is not exactly a book.'
'Is that so?' he asked in a low growling voice. 'Perhaps you would like to enlighten me?' he suggested, grabbing her by the hips and pulling her flush against him.
Hermione's eyes fluttered closed a little, and she took a shaky breath as she felt the thrill of emotions running through her the way that it always did when she was so close to him. 'Well, some would say he was pale and brooding,' she started, kissing one of his cheeks. 'But I like to think of him as mysterious and brilliantly dark,' she continued, brushing a kiss over the other cheek.
'I know that most question his temperament,' she said quietly, kissing one corner of his mouth. 'But I like that. He is always good for spurring on an argument, and I am exhilarated by him.' She then placed a kiss to the other corner of his mouth. 'And of course, he is the only man I have ever truly loved,' she finished, before pressing her lips to his hungrily.
Severus responded in kind, kissing her back with fervor to rival all. His tongue swept into her mouth and tasted every sweet part of it, like a conquering general on a battlefield, taking every advantage and going home victorious.
She moaned, and he pulled away. 'Hermione, we have to stop,' he said breathlessly.
'Stop what, Severus?' she asked, giving him a sultry smile.
'You know very well what. If we don't stop now, I will take you right here on the oriental rug in front of the fire,' he reasoned.
'And that is a bad thing because...' she asked, running her hands over his shoulders.
'Because you are my apprentice and have been left in my care. And because I have done too many terrible things to people in my entire life, and ruining your chances of settling down and having a reasonable marriage is not a mistake I am about to make,' he said firmly.
Hermione sighed and looked up into his obsidian eyes. 'Don't be daft, Severus. You're the only man I ever want to marry,' she replied seriously, emphasizing her point by pressing herself against him closer.
Severus was dumbfounded to say the very least. The woman standing in front of him, looking up at him with expectant brown eyes, the only woman he could ever picture a life with, admitted to wanting him and only him for the rest of her life also. 'You wish me for a husband?' he asked quietly, voice filled with wonder.
'Only you,' she breathed.
'Will you have me, then?' he asked seriously. 'Will you have me as your husband and promise to be my wife?'
'Yes.'
That was all he needed. He kissed her slowly, tenderly, and with all of the love he had in him. That was a kiss of promise. Not only for her, but for him as well. 'Then, I suppose we'd better get organized,' he growled into her ear when he pulled away.
'Organized for what exactly, dear?' she asked, feeling like Molly Weasley for calling him that.
'Well, you just agreed to be my wife, and I will not wait to get married to you. I want you bound to me as soon as possible, which means that we will have to find a person each to stand as witnesses to our marriage. We can ask Dumbledore to perform the private ceremony,' he answered as if the answer were so obvious.
'You want to get married this weekend?' she asked unsurely.
'Yes.'
'Well, I guess I can't argue with that,' she replied with a giggle and hugged Severus close. 'Let's go get ready, then?'
'Exemplary idea, witch,' he replied, stooping to give her a chaste kiss. 'There is much to be done.'
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The bright green eyes of the young wizard couldn't have looked more like the twinkling eyes of Albus Dumbledore at that very moment. In fact, Severus had only seen the Headmaster just under an hour ago and hadn't quite recovered from that light show, and was now confronted with the twinkling of yet another set of eyes.
'You're serious, aren't you?' Harry Potter asked him, eyes growing to the size of plates.
'Yes, Potter, I am marrying your best friend, and yes, I am asking you to stand as my witness, purely because you are one of the only people aware of our current... situation, and because it would please my Hermione,' he drawled sardonically.
One thing Harry admired about this man was his determination and his steadfast ways, even in the worst of times when he was being an old, sarcastic bastard. 'Well, then I'd better stand for you,' Harry replied with a laugh.
'Thank you,' Snape said with a deep sigh.
'When will I be expected?' he asked the older wizard.
'Tomorrow is Sunday; therefore, I hardly think that it would be appropriate for an early ceremony, so I arranged for it to be in the evening. You will be required in the Headmaster's office at five o'clock sharp. Dress should be formal,' he listed off flatly.
'I'll be there,' Harry said, getting out of the chair in Snape's office and walking out just as Hermione walked in.
'Hello, love,' she said with a cheerful smile. 'What was Harry doing here?'
'I asked him to stand as my witness,' he replied, grabbing her by the hips and tugging her to sit across his lap in the chair behind his desk.
Hermione looked at him in amazement. 'You asked Harry?'
'I thought you might be pleased. However, have you found someone equally as suitable to stand with you?' he asked seriously.
Hermione nodded. 'I just got back from asking Luna Lovegood. And before you ask why I did not tell or ask Ginny, it's because Ron is her brother, and even though we are not on the best of terms, she's his sister, and I don't want her to have to keep secrets from him,' Hermione replied, reasonably pleased with her decision.
'Excellent point, my dear. This is exactly why you are my witch and not some dunderhead's. You're entirely too practical at times,' he said jokingly.
'This coming from Mr. Practicality himself,' she teased back playfully, giving him a tentative kiss on the lips. 'But thank you, and I'm glad you approve.'
'What are you talking about; I hardly had a say in the matter anyway. Although I am glad that you've decided not to share this with the Weasleys or Minerva. Merlin only knows that Minerva would have my head on a platter if she ever found out that I was cavorting about the castle with her prized student,' he said, breathing out a sigh of relief.
Hermione laughed. 'Let's get to bed. It's getting late, and we have a big day tomorrow,' she said with a warm smile.
'Of course, you're right, my witch,' he said, giving her a peck on the cheek and lifting her off his lap.
They both went their separate ways Hermione to her chambers, stomach crawling with anticipation, and Severus to his, mouth twitching into the first genuine smile he had smiled in a very long time.
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Severus flicked open the button at his neck and loosened the ridiculous neck tie, realizing, for the first time, just how stupid and impractical a thing it was. He looked at his polished black shoes and then back to the raven-haired best friend of his wife-to-be. Why was he suddenly nervous about this? Was it always going to be this way when he was waiting for her?
Perhaps it would, but he really didn't mind. As long as he would be seeing her at the end of it, everything would be fine. He straightened himself out and stood still in a very Snape-like manner. He couldn't let down his ruse just because it was his wedding ceremony in just a few short minutes.
'How are you feeling, Professor?' Harry asked evenly.
'How does it look, Potter?' he grumbled back.
Harry opened his mouth to reply, but was cut off when both men saw their women walking through the door into Dumbledore's office. Hermione was dressed in a simple, cream-colored gown that had no straps or sleeves and fell gracefully to around her knees. It swished a little around the bottom as she moved. Her hair was pulled back in a loose, but tidy knot and was adorned with a few small white roses, and her neck was adorned with the necklace he had bought her, and her wrist with the bracelet. And finally, her heart hand had the platinum engagement ring with the Celtic knot woven over the top of it resting at the base of her finger, waiting for the plain platinum partner to join it on her finger.
Luna was dressed similarly, in a deep wine gown that had spaghetti straps and went just a little above her knees, her straight, blonde hair swept back in a neat braid. She was a good couple of inches shorter than Hermione; although, it wasn't surprising considering that Hermione was tall for a female anyway. The two women provided a beautiful contrast to each other; Hermione with her dark hair and light gown, and Luna with her fair hair and darker gown.
Hermione stood next to Severus, clasped his hand in her own, and turned to face Dumbledore, who had managed to sneak in some time while Severus and Harry had been transfixed on their beautiful partners. The old wizard cleared his throat and smiled warmly at them all.
'Let's begin then, shall we?' he said cheerfully.
Hermione and Severus nodded together and smiled at each other, all of their earlier nervousness replaced with a rush of sheer innocent joy.
'Do you, Hermione Jane Granger, wish to take Severus Tobias Snape as your husband, to love and to hold, in sickness and in health, to honor and cherish until death do you part?' Albus asked seriously.
'I do so wish.'
'And will you, Hermione, promise fidelity to Severus only, for so long as you both shall live? He asked.
'I will.'
'Excellent,' Albus said, and then turned to Severus. 'Do you, Severus Tobias Snape, wish to take Hermione Jane Granger as your wife, to love and to hold, in sickness and in health, to honor and cherish until death do you part?'
'I do so wish.'
'And will you, Severus, promise fidelity to Hermione only, for as long as you both shall live?' he asked.
'I will.'
'Do you have an exchange of rings you would like to perform?' Dumbledore asked, looking at them both.
Hermione nodded, and looked at Severus. 'Do you have that box I gave to you at Christmas?' she asked. He nodded and retrieved it. She took it and whispered to it, and it opened. She plucked a plain platinum band out of it and tucked the box back into his pocket, and quickly slipped the ring onto his finger, blushing slightly. 'Take this ring as a sign of my love and loyalty to you.'
Severus repeated the exchange, and soon, both of them were pronounced as married, and the papers were signed by all there. They both thanked Luna and Harry repeatedly, and Flooed straight to Severus' chambers from Albus's office. They collapsed on the bed together, and two hours later, were lying naked and sated amongst his black silk sheets, holding each other and murmuring sweet nothings to each other.
'I love you, Severus,' Hermione said sleepily.
'And I love you, Madame Snape,' he replied, kissing her on the end of the nose and closing his eyes to get ready for the best sleep in his life.
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A/N Again, please keep in mind that this story is old and has not aged terribly well. It's OOC to the max, and we have done our best to try and fix it up before posting it here at TPP.
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49 Reviews | 6.86/10 Average
Im enjoying this story very much, and look forward to the next chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks very much :) For my latest work, see 'The Beauty of Science' another SSHG.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks very much :) For my latest work, see 'The Beauty of Science' another SSHG.
Well, Severus and Hermione, it's about time you two got on with the rest of your lives together. I couldn't be happier with where our heroine and hero are in their life's story. They are together. They have promised their love and loyalty to each other so long as they both shall live.May they live long and prosper, and gift the world with wonderful little sons and daughters who can bring together the best of each of them, distilled to it purest form and brimming with good things for the future.Thank you, brandy, for this amazing chapter. You have made me as happy as Sevrus and Hermione have made each other.Well done!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Hey Beth, thanks for the review as always. I know this is very self-promotional but the first chapter of my newest fic is already up here, and the second is nearing the front of the queue. I'd be grateful if you gave it a look when you have the time - it's called 'The Beauty of Science'. I will probably continue to post this story once the other one is completed. Cheers! :D
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Hey Beth, thanks for the review as always. I know this is very self-promotional but the first chapter of my newest fic is already up here, and the second is nearing the front of the queue. I'd be grateful if you gave it a look when you have the time - it's called 'The Beauty of Science'. I will probably continue to post this story once the other one is completed. Cheers! :D
Hahah, talk about a whirlwind relationship. I am really getting swept up.
I think I recall Allegra Cole being a character in the movie 'Hitch'. Lol. Good chapter.
I love Harry in this story.
I love Hermione for the way she treats Snape. They are good together.
I have taken too long to find this story. On to the next chapter...
Oh why does he not just go and talk to someone?
Awesome start. I think I read this when you first posted it :p
I can't believe they are already married.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Lol yeah, back in the day I wasn't very good at pacing myself with stories :p
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Lol yeah, back in the day I wasn't very good at pacing myself with stories :p
Thanks for continuing the story and posting it here although it's old. I'm enjoying reading it.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks for reviewing. It might be a while until the next chapter :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks for reviewing. It might be a while until the next chapter :)
I could have strangled Allegra Cole for causing so much trouble between Severus and Hermione... but I can see how she would be attracted to him. LOL! Aren't we all?I wonder what is Hermione's "important meeting" with Dumbledore is about? And what bee is in Voldermort's bonnet that he would summon Severus at this time of day? Enquiring minds want to know!I am so happy that you've decided to complete this story. You may feel that "this is not my best work by a long shot," but I've always liked it! Thank you for picking it up.Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks so much, Beth! When I look back on the stuff I wrote when I was still a teenager, I often feel disgusted with myself is all :p I'll slowly be posting it, however, there is something new in the works that will be springing up very soon. I have been writing again :)
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Woo hoo! I'll be looking forward to the new one as well. *iz grinnin*
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks so much, Beth! When I look back on the stuff I wrote when I was still a teenager, I often feel disgusted with myself is all :p I'll slowly be posting it, however, there is something new in the works that will be springing up very soon. I have been writing again :)
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Woo hoo! I'll be looking forward to the new one as well. *iz grinnin*
I am so glad you've abandonned this story! I'm looking forward the next chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
I have not abandoned this story. However, the chapters will be posted slowly. Thanks!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
I have not abandoned this story. However, the chapters will be posted slowly. Thanks!
This story is worth completing. Thank you for not forgetting your readers.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thanks for reviewing! :)
Yes, I do realize I got the birthday mixed-up. My apologies, but just run with it anyway. This is fine by me, but when I read it I thought "Wow! This is really clever to have used the time that her using the Time-Turner had advanced her real age. And it puts her birthday so close to Severus. Woo hoo." If you hadn't said anything I would never have known it was a mistake. You're such a clever writer that I ran with it anyway.
I like the way that Severus paced up and down the hallway outside Hermione's room. He cares so much for her, and I'm delighted that he knocked on her door. And breakfast in bed? Together? Awesome.
His gift to her was was such a lovely thing. Although he didn't say anything about it, I wondered if perhaps it had been his mother's pendant and chain. Then when he gave her the bracelet for her birthday present that was so very much like the pendant, I decided there is definitely more here than just presents bought especially for for Christmas and birthday. I'm probably all wrong, but I like to imagine where the author might be going.
Hermione's gift to his is such a mystery. I wondered if Christmas present to him had anything to do with a ring –that was my first thought– but then I thought it might have something to do with saving is life if the Dark Lord or any of the other Death Eaters had any thoughts about ending his life. Or both... how 'bout that?
It was really sweet of Snape to allow her to spend her birthday at the Burrow so she could be with her friends, and I was very proud of Harry for the way he understood her feelings for the professor. Being in love with Luna has helped him see how being loved for who you are no matter what anyone else thinks is priceless.
I'll be happy when she gets back to Yorkshire and her professor. Thanks for such a wonderful chapter!
Beth
Well done Harry! I'm excited for Hermione's return to Snape.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
It was good of Harry :) Thanks.
Hobson's choice really for the poor girl.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Mmmhmm :) Thanks sunny!
With each chapter that I read, I was more and more engrossed in the story. I believe this will be on my favorite stories list. The way you portrayed both Severus and Hermione are very well thought out and stay true to the character's overall personality.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thank you, I'm very flattered :) Glad you're enjoying it so far.
In Chapter One, when Severus asked her why she was determined to pursue an apprenticeship with him she told him, "I respect your work, and I am grateful for everything you do 'or us. That is why I have chosen you as my mentor,’ she answered. It was as much a truth as she was telling him for now. Well, now I know what she wouldn't tell Severus when he posed that question. I am so glad that she has this ability to heal, because I think Severus is going to need it more before everything is said and done. Obviously, Dumbledore was concerned about Severus, and finding out that Hermione had this special gift must have seemed like an answer to his prayers. For now his plan is working, but will Hermione be exhausted by having to use her healing magic every time Severus is Summoned. Regardless, I'm so glad that they are together for the Holiday, I hope they can have an enjoyable time in Yorkshire, and that Voldemort will not call any Death Eater meetings. I think Severus needs a break.This is such an interesting story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I can see why it is special to you!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Oh Beth! You honestly do leave the loveliest reviews :) I am grateful for every single one. I am so glad you are enjoying this so far, and hopefully there will be another chapter ready to post soon. Actually, if you have time tonight, stop by on Chatzy the TPP chatroom for a spell and chat to us :) <3
I think the main problem with Percy was his self-righteousness. If he would have said to his family "I love you but I have other viewpoints" and left it as that and not break from everyone, no one would have been wiser and would have probably been a lot more affected. Anyhoo...I think there's a real love and acceptance that Hermione alone gives Severus. She treats him as an equal and a friend - something he hasn't had in a long time. I'm sure that alone will help to heal him (along with other things!)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Yes, but for the purpose of the chapter, he needs to be totally sepearated from his family for no one can know of his death. And Hermione will be the one to provide him with the human warmth and comfort he has desired but had witheld from him his entire life. Thanks for reviwing!
Percy the Death Eater. I kind of had thought JKR might be heading that way, actually. Instead she kills off Fred. Sigh.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
It was a horrible day indeed when she killed off one of the twins. Thanks for reviewing!
Such a deep chapter. I hope they both are able to relax a little over the holidays and maybe get a little closer? I look forward to the next update.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Thank you :) I meant for it to be deep. And you'll just have to wait and see what the next chapter brings...
I like that she's able to heal him just by touching him. I'm curious to know if they'll get even closer during the holydays...
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
I guess she is sort of like his rock in this instead of the other way around as people so often portray. I think you'll find that the holidays will be good for them, but it's not all chocolates and roses... Thanks for reviewing!
What a tough chapter. Percy is dead and no one even misses him. How pitiful.And Hermione's embrace keeps Snape from cutting himself. No wonder he holds on to her like his life depends on it. Maybe it does.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Yeah, it was a tough chapter to write I think. It is sad that Percy's death will go unmarked. Thanks for reviewing :)
I'm not sure if I understand what "Emo" means. LOL. My son who is 13 likes "emo" hairstyles. He has his hair in his face. Moody, depressing teenagers? Not that this describes my 13yo. He's not the least bit moody or depressing. But he likes the hairstyle. I'm fine with the way you've written snape so far. Keep going! I want to read more.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Amor Vincit Omnia)
Rather than the teenage fashion trend Emo, it is more the emotionally and mentally unstable sort. There is more on the way soon. Thanks!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
Thanks for helping me out with that. I would imagine anyone would be emotionally and mentally unstable in Snape's situation. He's surprisingly stable IMHO. LOL. Poor thing, what a horrific mess.