Heartbeat
Electryone60 Reviews | 6.02/10 (60 Ratings, 0 Likes, 52 Favorites )
Severus Snape is dead and not happy about it. Unfortunately, his only link to the living world is a bushy-haired Gryffindor know-it-all.
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Electryone
Member Since 2008 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 6 | 89 Reviews Written | 76 Review Responses
High school math teacher in Southern CA, who also loves to read and write!
Reviews for Heartbeat
Hermione you little star. I'm sure the potion will work, but I do hope that Hermione's blood doesn't complicate things.Can't wait for the next chapter.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
It's 15th in the queue, so not too much longer! 
I enjoy reading this story. I hope it will have an happy end.Thanks
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
Thanks! You will see very soon. 
Oh,this is really wonderfully done. I love the relationship between these two. I hope it all works out because otherwise I can see Hermione truly losing it.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I like your writing, too! And I can totally see Hermione getting completely obsessed with coming up with a way to free Severus and still working on it in 50 years.
I was so excited to see you had updated. This plot is so unique and I love the way you unfold the story for the reader. Thank you for a wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see if the potion / charmed resurrection stone will work!
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
You'll see very soon!
What? So glad I came upon this tonite.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
I'm happy to hear that. =)
That was amazing. I love the way their interactions change.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
I tried as much as I could to show them warming up to each other in just a few chapters (I'd have loved to make it longer but ran out of time for the Exchange!) I'm glad that you like it.
Oh, I love this! I hope you are working on it hard so we can read more fast! We reviewers are such slave drivers, eh? This is a great fic, very original. I like the way you've been building their relationship, as well. Please keep up the good work.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
I'm not working on it very hard at all because it's finished and in the queue now! The final chapter will be up soon.Thanks for the reviews!
I wonder if they will confess their feelings before or after the potion works? I really can't wait for another update. Hurry! Thanks for the great story.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
Thanks for your review--the next update will be very soon!
The potion just has to work! What will her blood in the potion do to the both of them? Hmm? Cant' wait to read the next chapter.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
The next chapter (which is the last one, actually) is in the queue!
Response from Clairvoyant (Reviewer)
One more chapter? That's sad. I hope you have more stories in mind.
"Although, with his luck, one of them would probably murder the other two in a fit of passion and then commit suicide." That line made me laugh. Looking forward to seeing how Severus beats death.
Response from Electryone (Author of Heartbeat)
Thanks for the review. I love Snape's thoughts--there's so much potential for humor.