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Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
rhiannon113121 Reviews | 6.42/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Can Severus and Hermione stay out of their own way long enough to fall in love?
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rhiannon113
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I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
Reviews for Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
Well, it's not that smutty. really readable. And sweet!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm never sure what the average 'acceptable smut quotient' is! So I always err on the side of caution! I'm pleased that you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
oh yay! i just love weddings. and double yay for her handling of the weasel. faboo update. thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So glad you enjoyed! Their wedding has been done a billion times, I was really nervous about it! Now for the honeymoon! *gulp*Thanks for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Ahhh!! You absolutely HAVE to continue this! It's absolutely remarkable! By far one of the best HG/SS stories I've read in a long time.I suppose that I am a bit like Hermione, getting turned on by swear words. Bahahah. Oh well, I love it fairly much and I do very much hope you will continue.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks so much! I really enjoy writing it! =] Right now, RL is getting in the way, but hopefully soon I'll be able to update! Please be patient w/ me, and thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Funny as hell--I'm glad no one else is home because I've been snorting to myself for the past few minutes! I look forward to reading the rest of this story :)PS--Alan Rickman is *never* out of anyone's age bracket. Yummy ;)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Amen to that!!! If you look up 'yummy' in the Dictionary, there's a photo of him w/ his sexy little smirk!!! I'm so pleased that you found it funny. I'm always really nervous to write humour, it's worse than lemons.Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing!! I hope you'll continue to enjoy it! *hugs*Rhiannon
There were great little one-liners throughout this. Quite entertaining. The stag party was a laugh, and Hermione's being upset was definitely valid. It was so nice to see Severus actually trying after he realized just what a giant jerk he'd been. That's the kind of guy we all want, right?
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I think Severus is fairly ideal, yes. But don't we all? I'm glad you caught my little jokes. Trying to write humour frightens me more than anything else, I'm always afriad that what I find funny won't translate to anyone else. Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing! The wedding is up next, and then the Honeymoon!!!*hugs*rhiannon
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
I have the same insecurities. But I've found they're mostly unfounded. Yours came across fine. Don't worry.
bless his heart! i hope he thot it was worth the effort! thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
It is rather strange. I dream up all sorts of ways to torture that poor darling, yet I always wind up feeling guilty about it. LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you'll continue to enjoy...*hugs*Rhiannon
That was insightful and amusing.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!! I hope you'll continue to enjoy. *hugs*Rhiannon
LOL, too funny, she really does love him for him. ~Wish I got that reaction when I'm cursing over a stubbed toe.~ I've really enjoyed the first two chapters and looking forward to the next.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad that you've enjoyed it so far. What can I say? The man is sex on legs no matter what!! LOL Next chapter is with my beta, so shouldn't be long!! =] Thanks for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
My favorite couple, accompanied by one of my favorite songs! Very fun chapter - loved the interaction between Severus and Harry, too.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. I love to torture poor Severus. =] The song is a classic. I really think it describes their relationship rather well. =] Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Sensitive, supportive Severus is sexy! Great chapter.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
In my humble opinion, Severus just hit by a bus is sexy!!! I'm glad you liked it. =] Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Response from Clairvoyant (Reviewer)
BTW, what were the lines from the AR movies?
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
The string of swear words is from 'Love Actually'. It's said by Bill Nighy at the very first when their trying to record the Christmas song. AR plays the husband of Emma Thompson, who wants to have a fling w/ his assistant. The other is "Something vexes thee?" from 'Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves' It's said by the old witch woman when AR comes into her rooms throwing things and making making a mess. He plays the Sheriff of Knottingham. =] Thanks for asking!
Well, she gets turned on by the oddest of things! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I thought that would harken back to the days when her 'school girl crush' first started based upon his intimidating manner. =] It takes all kinds!!!!!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Yay, that was the funniest proposal in history!!!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so pleased that you liked it! Not everything is perfect, even in true love!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
So, this was a lovely story overall, charming, fluffy not overly so, and Severus was a dear. But I do have to object to your treatment of the transgendered prostitutes. People really hate being called she-males, and it's rather disrespectful to their identity to use 'his/her' as a pronoun. Generally, when someone presents as a gender by choice, even if it's not the one they were given at birth, one uses the corresponding pronoun. Hence, these feminine-identified dancers would usually be called transwomen, and would use feminine pronouns (for example: she/her).Just saying.Future reference, if it comes up again.I didn't mean to lecture-really, I swear. I did love the story, aside from this one little thing. Especially the proposal-it was rather priceless.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so sorry to have offended you. The story of the hiring of entertainment for a stag night comes from a friend of mine. Some of them were just actual 'drag queens', some had gone thru surgery or were in process. The terms that I used came from the frustration that those attending the party felt at 'what you see' not actually being what you get. I spoke with a friend of my who is a female impersonation artist. He said that yes, it's negative to say she-males, but that a straight man would make a comment like that, in that situation. It's only meant to be Severus' internal monlogue expressing his frustration at the what had happened. This is not a statement of my politics, nor am I trying to say that such things are inappropriate only that in this instance, Severus was not pleased with the misunderstanding with his party's entertainment. Thank you for the comments. I really appreicate you takin the time to explain your point of view. I will go back and see if I can be more sensitive. Again, I was trying to convey how the typical 'straight bloke' might feel in that instance. Thanks also for your lovely compliments. I'm glad you've enjoyed it, for the most part. I do hope you'll keep reading. Thanks again for reading and reivewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
“Fuckwankbuggershittingassheadhole!” OWWW... that hurt me! And I think I guessed the film quotes 'cause I can just see Mr. Rickman saying them...sigh
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
He is a bit out of my age bracket, but ever so yummy!! Glad you enjoyed. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
lovely! loved the rotating views amd i love the way you write their internal dialogues. thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad you're enjoying this. First person/ alternating POV is new for me, i was a little nervous. Loads more in store for them, I hope you'll continue to enjoy! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Love the title! Bei Mir Bist Du Shoen, Again I'll explain. Bei Mir Bist Du Shoen means that you're grand! I love that song.Looking forward to the next installment!Livvy
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, exactly!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn't know if anyone would get it. It just struck me as a good sentiment for the two of them. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
This is sweet, I'm enjoying it.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you. Sadly, it won't stay completely happy and fluffy. Bit of trouble ahead for them. I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it so far. Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Wonderful start, looking forward to more. I love stories where any angst is resolved in the same chapter it presents (li.e. the rocky beginnings of their relationship).Thanks!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
This one did tie itself up rather nicely, though in future there is more coming that will be complicated and take several chapters to resolve. I'm pleased that you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Nice! Lots of nice little lines I could quote.And I see it's only the beginning of more.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
*blush* I'm glad you enjoyed my little snarky bits of humour. =] I hope you'll continue to enjoy!Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
How sweet!!! Really, a lovely start to a story!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!*hugs*Rhiannon
Oh, lovely. I enjoyed the tale from both points of view. I especially liked Severus' inner monologue. Too funny.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you. It won't always be funny, I've actually got a bit of drama and angst in mind for them a bit later. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, though. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Delightful! I love the first person narrative, and the thought of Snape having to ask Harry for permission to propose to Hermione was a hoot. Glad that there's more to come!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Severus having to be subordinate to Harry was too big a temptatioin for me!! LOL I thought first person would be a new challenge for me, glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
What a sweet, old-fashioned boy! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yeah, I liked the idea that he'd be quite traditional. I also liked the idea of him having to go to Harry in supplication. LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
Ovaries doing a victory dance? That's too good!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Come on, that hasn't happened to you? Then you need to snog more sexy Slytherins, dearest!! LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to be amused.*hugs*Rhiannon
Fantastic beginning. I love the his/her POV format very much. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Well done!!! :D
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I hope you'll continue to enjoy it! Loads of surprises coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!