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Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
rhiannon113121 Reviews | 6.42/10 (121 Ratings, 0 Likes, 61 Favorites )
Can Severus and Hermione stay out of their own way long enough to fall in love?
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rhiannon113
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I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
Reviews for Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen
Where was the sex? That chapter was just to sad....please make them happy again!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
There are lemons on the way, my dear. It is sad, but without sadness, the happiness in life would mean nothing! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Yes, stinky Severus was funny, but the end was so sad.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
The next one will end on a much happier note! Thanks for reading and reviewing.*hugs*Rhiannon
I love that Severus was her anchor in the darkness. It must have taken a lot of courage to tell her the story of his early memories. I'm so glad that she is coming back to him. What a devastating childhood to experience! Excellent cliff hanger! :D
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm simply thrilled that you enjoyed it! I've always heard that it's good to talk to coma pateints. I wantted to show that. Next chapter is in queue! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.*hugs*Rhiannon
I love this story. Just wanted to say it. Love. It.:-)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much, my dear. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it! Thanks again for reading and reveiwing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Whew. Actual roller coasters I love; the emotional sort and I think you are a cruel author...
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I am sorry for that, honestly. I don't mean to leave a cliffie at each chapter, but I swear this piece is writing it's self!! I'll try to be better! Thanks for the review. *hugs*Rhiannon
Very nice chapter! I'm so glad you're promising a new chapter soon, so no threats from me...Great work!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It's really becoming easier for me to write this one, so should be very few delays! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Twice in a row? Cruel, cruel, cruel...
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
So sorry! It could not be helped. This is just where the chapter needed to end. Update will be very soon! Promise!!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
this is amazing! i read this last chapter with my heart in my mouth, barely remembering to breathe! can't wait for more!Brava!!!!!Fizzabella
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I hope it didn't taste bad!! Thanks so much for the praise, I can't tell you how it makes me smile. Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
He blacking isn't such a bad thing right? Just in shock from Hermione being awake? I hope. Great update.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Severus is in danger of nothing be injuring his pride!! So glad that you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Sad about his childhood, yet uplifting with the knowledge that they are meant to be together. That line about God hating him was very powerful. I'm glad Hermione woke up then. Hopefully, his blacking out isn't related to anything bad!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. He'll be alright. I just wanted him to be the one with an intense reaction for once! Thanks for reading and for the lovely review. *hugs*Rhiannon
Okay, so here is another threat. Hurry up and update. Another awsome chapter. I can see Severus and Hermione as soul-mates. They are perfect for each other.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
*cowering in fear* Update will be out soon, it's been with my beta and has been for a few days. I'm also nearly finished with chapter 8... Does that get me out of trouble??Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Wow. Did he faint or is there something more sinister at work?
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
He'll be fine. Possibly have a bruised ego, but nothing more! I hope you liked it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
Very niceely done. this story continues to delight.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you like it. I hope you'll continue to read and review!*hugs*Rhiannon
awesome update. thanks muchly!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Glad you liked. Next chappie is in queue, should be up soon! =]Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Well, please get the new chapter out soon and don't leave us here for too long. Great work!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
New chapter is with my beta! Sorry for delays! I've got the next couple working... Hopefully we'll be updating regularly. Thanks so much for the support and revewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
You can't be serious! Please say she recovers and the if there is any lasting effects I up it doesn't effect their married and love for one another. I do like happy endings you see lol.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Keep hope. I'm fond of happy endings as well. There are difficulties ahead, but don't worry. Please just stick with me!! thanks so much for reading and for your review!*hugs*Rhiannon
lovely and just a touch delightfully kinky! thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad you liked it! I do enjoy kink, but this story just doesn't support an all out kink fest. Think of it as kink-light with a side of sweet! LOL I hope you'll keep reading, and thanks for the review!*hugs*
You were right! The honeymoon was awesome! I like the added twist of children. Just when Severus thought his life was on the right, track...Another great chapter.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so pleased that you've enjoyed it! We can't have it too sunny and sweet, can we? A bit of angst makes us appreciate the good times! LOL Thanks so much for your praise and for r & r! *hugs*Rhiannon
There's so much to love in this story, I feel odd picking out one thing to comment upon, but the blindfold scene was hot. And kids definitely put a kink in your lifeplans....
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Lemons are very hard for me to write, though I love to read them. I wanted something a little different... which is quite hard to accomplish. The question of children was something I wanted to throw in to have a fresh look at the issue. I had a piece in the story originally where Hermione goes to see Harry and Ginny before she and Severus get together. James was having a tantrum and Albus was just an infant but was screaming his head off. Hermione watched Harry and Ginny try everything to calm both the boys, but to no avail. They then had a massive row.After, she decided that children were the death of romance and the breakdown of intimacy. She'd never really been maternal, but this clenched it. This is meant to show how much being in love with someone can make you want to have a child with them. Just to see the combination of the both of you in the flesh. To have a living, breathing product of your love. Anyway, sorry for all the waffle. But this is an issue I really struggled with in the story. I didn't want another 'happy couple has a baby' story (Though I love to read those!!!). Thanks so much for the comments, and for r & r!!*hugs*Rhiannon
a very much wwelcomed update. loved, loved, loved the honeymoon scene. perfect and hot!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I'm so pleased that you liked it. More one the way... thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
That was awesome. You had us thinking it would only be about the hootchie-kootchie but "surprise" many tender moments. We just need Bryan Adams song "When you really love a woman" in the background. Keep 'em coming
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
OMG!! I LOVE that song! I wanted some schmultzie sappiness w/ the kink. I'm only a fan of kink when it comes from the trust brought about by true, deep emotional bonds. I wanted to try and show that. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Excellent and fascinating - much more intelligent than a standard happy ever after. Though I am entirely in favour of happiness ever after, of course!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Thank you very much. I want them to be together, but true love doesn't always equal terminal sunshine and roses. Thanks for reading and reviewing!*hugs*Rhiannon
Aw he's a puddle of goo! Love it.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
I know, Sappy Sevvy is rather sweet, isn't he?? LOL Thanks for reading and reviewing!! *hugs*Rhiannon
this was an insightful chapter. Severus willing to cut off his willy for a woman who would have thought.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
Yes, I liked the idea that he'd give anything for her... ANYTHING!! Wouldn't we all like to think our men would do for us? thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
A child changes everything.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of Bei Mir Bist Du Schoen)
That it does. To procreate or not to procreate? That is the question. I hope you enjoyed it!Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon