The Perfect Bait
aturia6 Reviews | 6 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
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Member Since 2005 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 39 Reviews Written | 27 Review Responses
Reviews for The Perfect Bait
Nice
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
DevinAidenTeague, thanks for the review!
at first it made me smile, but really, Hermione is cleverer than that!
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Thanks for the review! Yes you are correct and I always planned to do another poem to accompany this one, but from her perspective...
enjoyed and well worth the time to read......please attempt something a little longer...you have good flow
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Thanks for your review....I have attempted something a little longer called "His Nighttime Obsession" and I am working on another lengthy rhyming poem about Snape from events in the book.
Yes, I agree with Southern_Witch. This was a cute little story within a poem. It put a smile on my face and a lilt in my step. 
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Thank you Notsosaintly for putting my poems up on your site! I am so happy to see them published online. Glad you liked them! :o)
Oh, I like this! I like the flowing rhythm. Sneaky!Snape
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Yes, Sneaky!Snape is trying to get Hermione...Lol he will need to use the lure of more than books if he wants to keep her distracted long enough to implement his plans! Thanks for the review!
Said the spider to the fly. lol This is what it reminds me of. I love it.
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Yes, a bit manipulative on his part, haha! Thanks for the review :)
Response from aturia (Author of The Perfect Bait)
Yes, a bit manipulative on his part, haha! Thanks for the review :)