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Canapes on Thursdays Chapter 6: Atonement
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Canapes on Thursdays

1: Gratuitous Advice

2: A Pinch of Salt

3: Yarkovsky Effect

4: The Perfect Pitch

5: Waterloo

6: Atonement

7: New Appreciation

8: Nothing

9: Somewhere Only We Know

10: The Presumptive Proboscis

11: Level Best

12: You Win

Atonement

Canapes on Thursdays

Chapter 6 of 12

pokeystar

A series of small bites featuring Pansy Parkinson and Harry Potter.

General Snapshot Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? Hogwarts Castle 5,631 Words 12 Chapters Complete
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Canape Six: Atonement

Harry follows behind the white-robed figure gliding through the halls past sleeping portraits, under his Invisibility Cloak.

Where is she going this late at night?

In this, his “eighth” year at Hogwarts, he is having difficulty adjusting to a peaceful existence. He keeps seeing subterfuge in other students’ faces; evil lurking in the shadows.

Hermione says he’s suffering from post-traumatic stress—that they all are, to one degree or another, disgust for wizarding society’s propensity to shove unpleasantness under a metaphorical rug coloring her voice with contempt.

But he knows what he saw this time, and so he’s following her to… the Room of Requirement?

He’s so startled, he stops by the tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy and almost misses his chance to slip inside the room behind her.

Even if he’s still living in the past, he has certainly learned from it, so he watches silently as she puts down a satchel and opens it, taking out candles, a small broom, hammered silver bowls and glass apothecary jars. At last, he sees her pull out the small carved jade figurine of a crouching tiger, and he can’t keep quiet any longer.

“What are you doing with that?!” he exclaims as he throws off his Cloak.

“Atonement, Potter,” Pansy replies without batting an eye.

“Cho gave me that tiger to protect me from evil—” Harry grits out before Pansy cuts him off with a dismissive wave of her hand.

“She imbued it with a very strong love spell.” Pansy fusses with the bowls and candles, placing them deliberately on the floor while muttering under her breath. “Don’t just stand there like a gaping cod, Potter. Help me cleanse the circle. The shielding ritual is more powerful if the mark participates willingly.”

“I’m not fond of sweeping,” he mutters and picks up the broom.

“It’s not a career choice, Potter,” she retorts, filling the bowls with the directional elementals. “Now shut your gob and concentrate on feeling safe.”

He snorts, but falls silent. Safe? He wonders what that’s like. He thinks he’s felt something near it, a time or two at the Burrow, or up in the dormitory, snug in his bed, that first year of school.

“I shouldn’t have tried to turn you over to that monster.” Pansy’s voice is slightly shaky.

So much for feeling safe.

“Well—”

“I’d never been scared like that before. And I didn’t know what he was truly capable of… Draco told me a lot of things… After.” Her eyes slip to the glimmering Cloak lying in a puddle on the floor. “That slag has no right to manipulate you like this. No one does. You’ve done enough.”

He’s strangely elated and close to crying all at once.

“Don’t blubber now, Potter. We need to close the circle and invoke the ritual before that crappy green knickknack emits love goo all over us. I don’t fancy having to fumigate Mumsy’s ceremonial robes of eau de tart.”

They clasp hands and the ritual begins.

~*~*~*~*~

Originally written for the pphp_ldws lj community

Prompt: Ancient ritual - made up or factual.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Canapes on Thursdays

55 Reviews  |  6.73/10 Average

10/10

MollysSister

Is that the same wagon wheel coffee table from When Harry Met Sally? mahwwhaahahah!

10/10

MollysSister

Harry has quite a package in that winning banner of yours. Congrats all around Id say!

10/10

MollysSister

The sentient bed? Clearly you can write well about anything!

10/10

snitchette

At least he isn't too bitter about losing. He may even find some consolation prize...

0/10

sunny33

Boys are better? Er... no! :P

10/10

snitchette

This so beautifull. I envy your talent with words.

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sunny33

Sad, pokey! :)

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sunny33

Nothing... Yeah, right! :)

10/10

Anonymous

Sweet little miniature! :o)

10/10

MollysSister

Oh I think its something! I think Harry is lusting after Ron's girl! Wouldnt it be fun if Ron's name was Jesse? I know you'll get the 80 song reference.

10/10

snitchette

I'm having a hard time imagining Ron with Pansy, as I'm sure Harry thinks too. He should do something about it. *grin*

0/10

sunny33

Oh dear, poor Harry, or is that Harriet? :)

0/10

Ugly Kitten

Harry Potter - heels - groping boobies - oh. my. gods. I'm laughing too hard to type properly! ROFLMAO

Needless to say, I enjoyed it immensely.

10/10

snitchette

Men are too week to suffer being a woman. Wait before he gets pregnant or give birth. *grin*

10/10

MollysSister

Oh how you enjoying torturing Harry! I thought Pansy was hilarious in her not-really-sypathetic comments.

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mock_turtle

hearing the penny drop was fun.  good stuff.

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

Thank you - but I think that should be Knut,  no?

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

oops.  sorry, I'm muggleborn.

10/10

MollysSister

"attending the Snape-Trelawny nuptials" Not funny Pokey! Severus is not amused. However I would like to read more about the reaction of Pansy and Harry's engagement on the Malfoy's. Was it an unintended match? or not? Write on with your bad sef.

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

Severus can kiss my lily-white...oooo. you ebil woman.  Call off the plot bunnahs or I'll load their carrots with LSD.Writin'  writin' writin'.

10/10

snitchette

Snape-Trelawney nuptials !! Erk. I don't want to think about the wedding night. *shivers*

Hermione should make a business of it.

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

She should!Except that her husband probably already has more money than Merlin.

10/10

snitchette

LOL Harry's a master at seduction it seems.

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sunny33

LOL. He shouldn't give up his day job! :)

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mock_turtle

I love this one!

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mock_turtle

this is creepy.  Have you read the YA novel "The Hollow Kingdom"?

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

No, but I love YA - the title sounds awesome.Repercussions might be a while - I can make no promises, other than, if she asks me, that's the one I ask for.:-) 

Response from mock_turtle (Reviewer)

It's quite a good novel, and it's currently the first book in a three part series.  I am fairly certain that is as long as the series is going to get, but you never know.  anyway, what made me think of it is, there is this bit with knives, and faces, and the importance of beauty vs mutilation, and...yeah.  it's actually in the second book.  but it won't make sense unless you read the Hollow Kingdom first.  The series is by Clare Dunkle, I think.

10/10

snitchette

I'm afraid to understand what happened here. I hope I'm wrong.

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

Um, I won't tell you, so that you may maintain the illusion.(((hugs)))

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sunny33

That's one way of getting what you want...

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

A thoroughly psychotic way...

10/10

MollysSister

awwwwww how sweet is that?

Response from pokeystar (Author of Canapes on Thursdays)

~grins~thank you, my dear!

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