Revenge Is Sweet
Chapter 3 of 4
AmitaChapter 3: Revenge Is Sweet
Dressed in a tasteful combination of flannel and lace and with their hair brushed to glossiness, the two witches were ready to hunt down the intruder. They went barefoot for silence.
Hermione, the constant student, remembered the lesson from the late night horror and science fiction flicks and said, "We need to stay together so the monster doesn't pick us off one by one."
"Right," said the rational part of Minerva while a less rational part imagined herself running her fingers through the now luxurious hair of the monster that had just picked her off. Or maybe, once out of sight of an impressionable youngster, she could turn the tables and 'pick him off' good and proper.
Did I over think this? Hermione asked herself as she pictured herself ambushed by a handsome villain wearing black and white and having unspeakable designs. Even when swept up, a hapless heroine wouldn't notice the residual bug stains unless she knew they were there.
"Where do you think he might be?" whispered Hermione.
"There're lots of bedrooms on this floor," said Minerva.
"You don't think he'd choose the one next to ours, do you?" asked Hermione. "Unless he thinks that we think he's too clever for that in which case he would think it clever to think that we think he's too clever and he would think it would be clever for him to be too clever which means he's clever enough to think that we're too clever to fall for that which implies he's too clever to think that we think he's too clever for us and he thinks he is clever to hide in that room."
"I think you've out thunk him," whispered Minerva as the two witches cautiously opened the door to the adjoining bedroom.
They saw nothing when they illuminated the room and were about to leave when they heard a rustle in the corner. As they approached the corner, a long shadow dropped from the chandelier. It landed across the shoulders of the two witches, temporarily stunning them. Hermione screamed as she saw a snake wrap itself around Minerva, grab Minerva's wand between its teeth, and yank it out of her hand. Before Hermione could think of a spell, the tail of the snake had wrapped itself around her wand, pulled it away from her, and tossed it out the door.
Hermione started to retrieve her wand, but the snake caught her eyes and held her in its power. The snake's eyes backed her to a chair where she sat, unable to move, only able to watch Minerva struggle against the snake's coils. The snake's eyes danced in front of Hermione until she sat limply in the chair with her will gone. The snake turned to the witch in its coils, and before Minerva could close her eyes or turn away, it performed its mesmerizing dance. With her arms pinned to her side, Minerva slowly backed to the bed and fell onto it with the snake still coiled around her.
The snake turned its attention and hypnotic eyes back to Hermione. When its eyes broke contact with hers, Minerva heaved and thrashed in a mighty effort to free herself. At first, Hermione felt pity for the lady, but as Minerva became flushed and disheveled and her nightgown rode up her legs and her bosom pressed against the cotton, Hermione, to her horror, began feeling aroused. The mix of fear and lust grew as Minerva's efforts began to resemble writhing, and when Minerva, sweating and panting, finally surrendered and was still, the tangle of emotions settled in the void in Hermione's lace knickers. Hermione's face was hot with delectable shame.
Hermione stared unbelievingly as the snake, still pinning Minerva's arms to her side, shifted until Minerva was comfortable, and then Hermione stared even more unbelievingly as the snake acted as if the flannel covered form of Minerva was alluring. The young girl had never experienced such a mix of attraction and repulsion and could scarcely believe that the snake was cuddling what it found to be an admirable woman. Hermione had thought that only she could appreciate that severe face and find it lovely and that only she could admire that athletic body and find it comely. A flash of fear went through Hermione when the snake lowered it head, but it did so to brush Minerva's hair out of her face. Another flash of fear occurred when the snake moved its lower coils under Minerva's neck, but to Hermione's amazement, it appeared to do so in order to massage the lady's neck. It tended the neck until the tension left the lady's face. The coils moved to the shoulders and massaged them until the remaining tension was gone. Hermione wanted to yell a warning to Minerva to not let the snake lull her into a false sense of security, but the snake's spell had left Hermione voiceless. She could only watch in apprehension as the snake acted like a considerate lover whose lady had had a hard and frustrating day. Hermione found Minerva even lovelier as the tension of the years melted away.
Hermione had another moment of fear when the snake lowered it head to Minerva's throat, but the snake began nuzzling the lady below the left ear and moving down the neck and across the shoulder. It returned to one particular spot, and there was an audible sigh from the lady. It did the same on the right side, and Hermione could see the closed-eye and open-mouth expression of bliss. She could see Minerva's breasts pressing against the nightgown. Familiar feelings stirred inside the young girl as she watched the snake lower its head to those inviting mounds. Even through the night gown, she noticed that they became firmer and the nipples rose as the snake flicked its tongue and fondled them lovingly. The young girl felt a pang of jealousy as Minerva rolled her head in time with the fondling and raised her chest to push her bosom against her admirer. Hermione's nipples pressed against her nightgown. The snake performed a weave across the modest but well-shaped breasts that gradually became a weave across the entire lady who was soon weaving and moaning with her legs slowly spreading. Hermione was shifting in her chair and slowly spreading hers.
Hermione watched the tail of the snake slide under the nightgown and slither upwards. When it reached the junction of Minerva's thighs, the lady gave a start and clamped her legs together. The snake kept weaving and weaving and weaving with the witch weaving with it. Hermione heard the weaving witch moan, "Oh, no. Oh, no," and saw Minerva look demurely at the snake as she raised and parted her knees in invitation. The nightgown fell to her waist, and Hermione admired the well-defined thighs and the full, lace-covered hips.
The snake wrapped its coils between the legs of the witch and began a slow and sensuous pulse. Over and over it pulsed. The snake showed no impatience: it looked at the witch's now soft face and undulating form as if it enjoyed giving the witch pleasure, as if it were willing to continue for as long as the witch liked. Hermione watched the hips of the other woman roll with the pulsing of the snake and watched as, almost imperceptibly, the rolling became more pronounced and the breathing became short pants until the lady in the coils was saying, "Yes. Yes."
Yes. Yes, thought Hermione as she pulled up her own nightgown.
Hermione ached as the tail of the snake moved up Minerva's open thighs and slid under the enticing lace. She would always remember the look on Minerva's face as the tail rippled under the lace and began disappearing. Hermione was breathing heavily as Minerva made low, throaty noises. Hermione's hands were between her legs. Each ripple of the snake sent more of its tail under the lace and into the woman. Hermione watched Minerva spread her legs wider. The snake settled into a slow and steady weave with the woman moving with it. It weaved and weaved while the woman's moves became more and more intense. Hermione's hands moved with its rhythm. The attitude of the snake changed to one of possession with the witches responding to each commanding thrust with soft grunts and a swivel of their hips. Just as Hermione was becoming aware that the snake's tail was producing a wet, slurping noise, Minerva looked at her and smiled. Minerva became very active. Hermione stared as the snake held the straining, thrashing older woman. The tension in Hermione built to the breaking point. Minerva became open-mouthed rigid and then still. The lady in the coils was flushed and her breathing ragged. The snake cuddled the woman whose whole body was an ethereal smile.
The snake hissed approval at Hermione's last, delicious efforts and held warm brown eyes with glittering red ones as the young girl squeezed her thighs together and fell apart for the snake of all snakes.
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Author's Note: The original intent was three chapters, but the girls are having so much fun Severus is being such a total stud rat-snake Slytherin that the porn narrative got so hot the author was caught in her own fantasies deserves an extended development.
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Latest 25 Reviews for A Conspiracy of Witches
36 Reviews | 6.22/10 Average
Fasten your seatbelts, it's going to be a bumpy night.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. By now, you know the next two chapters explore darker territory. I occasionally think I should have continued the style of the first two chapters.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. By now, you know the next two chapters explore darker territory. I occasionally think I should have continued the style of the first two chapters.
MM/HG, I have never seen this pairing, but it work in this story. I'm enjoying the way you are, writing Severus, he is going to have to watch is back, with Minerva and Hermione in cahoots. Great fun.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. The unusual pairing offered the possibilities of new approaches.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. The unusual pairing offered the possibilities of new approaches.
hmm
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
"How often it falls to us of the frail breasts to chronicle those revealing incidents in life that they who were born with the stouter hearts, though they may secretly and even eagerly devour the tale, neglect to record because of the shame they think might be visited upon the hapless author who merely seeks to display the height, breadth, and if she is honest, the depth of human existence, for it is only with such honesty that the fullness of human nature can be viewed and, thus viewed, lead us to the pinnacle of understanding, which is surely the goal of all literature worthy of the name, and it is by way of this modest apology that the author, lacking as may be in skilled repartee, does set out to put down a coherent account of incoherent events which began ...."
MMHG? Now I didn't see that one coming... oo err...Never mind, I'll stick with it because I love Severus's shiny hair!
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
The indications are that I am losing a number of readers because of the inclusion of Minerva, but she makes the story work. I’m being repetitious, but if witches live to one hundred forty and age proportionately, then Minerva is equivalent to a thirty-year-old non-witch – quite a dish.
All of Severus gets to shine in this story.
Now you wake the cat in me. I'm going to find a mate now. Rrr.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
There is no greater compliment than an erotic chapter sending a fan girl in search of her mate.
I don't know what's best: the story itself or the last Author's note. *grin*
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. Yes, the author is having almost as much fun as the girls.
yeow...purrrrrrrrrrr. sigh
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Should I wish that your professor grace your inner kitten so purrfectly?
Those girls are pure evil. And it promises to be a wonderful memorable night.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
It is quite a pair of witches, and I hope it is a night that readers remember.
That's a good thought if you ask me. After all, one Professor or another where's the difference? *smirk*
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
There are some differences. *smirk* But we hope they are complementary.
yeow! *pant pant*
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
A classy review - what I hoped for.
That was a very sneaky Severus snake! :)
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
He is a credit to his House.Not to mention a proponent of inter-House harmony.
ha, great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. Next chapter is being polished.
interesting mental pictures you paint! great update. thanks so much
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks for the feedback. I tend to see pictures in my head and sometimes think I underwrite for those who do not.
“Yes,” said Hermione. “We’ll pretend that the forces of evil, that’s you, have managed to invade this place and the forces of goodness-and-light, that’s us, will seek you out and destroy you.” “Nothing like a little role-reversal to liven things up,” said Severus.rofl! This is great.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
He's a bit out-of-character. He has an attitude, but he's not mean-spirited. I can't abide canon-Snape.
He's much too trusting, ha...any minute now, he should twinkle his eyes at the girls, too funny.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
You have anticipated the next chapter where he twinkles his eyes, and a lot more.
You slay me! :)
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. For a while, I thought my attempt at humor had missed the mark.
Good start, I'm intested in where you're going with the story. Will look for your next chapter. Thanks :)
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
I like the characters as fallible humans and that Minerva has sneaked under his defenses. I now wish I had developed them more instead of rushing to the ending.
I'm envisaging a threesome in the not so distant future. :)
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
I’m assuming mm-hg-ss is natural enough that it is very popular, which means the story needs an unusual ending to set it apart.
hmmmm...intriguing start. having a little trouble with the concept of mmhg but i'll go along for the ride. thanks so much
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Canon presents the instructors from the point of view of schoolchildren, and to young schoolchildren, all teachers are old. If witches live to one hundred forty and age proportionately, then Minerva is the equivalent of a thirty year old non-witch. She may be severe in looks and manner, but she has the aura of intelligence, and she is trim and healthy from all the stairs. The film portrayal may be psychologically and artistically correct, but it is logically incorrect. Think of Maggie Smith in her thirties. Unfortunately, the narrative doesn’t make this point until the second chapter.
Does this help?
So. Hermione is shacking up with McGonagall. Snape knows, but doens't want to interfere b/c he thinks it's hot, or whatever. I'm slightly confused, but have confidence you'll make it clear at some point.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Make it clear? As you may have noticed from the little speech by Severus, this story borders on crack-fiction. I don’t know if the reader can become less confused than the author and her characters or not. Hope you enjoy the ride.
Response from peppermint (Reviewer)
Oh, I get that it's crackfic. Looking forward to the rest of the ride, for sure.
Very promising start. How soon to the next chapter?
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks for the encouragement. The chapters should appear about a week apart although I am wrangling with the third and final one.
was snape the lion and the snake? or is he stuck in a hiding place?
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Good question.
HAH! This gets better and better.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
The plot tries to thicken despite our characters.
Hee hee! This is a rather odd tale. I can't wait to see where it's going.
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Thanks. Yes, the story moves by misdirection.
OMG! Ewwwww. OMG! Ewwwww. OMG! Ewwwww. OMG! Ewwwww. That was hawt, and I don't even like snakes. Ewwwww.I loved Hermione's spoken treatise on where Severus would hide and why. Clever witch that she is, I think she "out thunk him."Glad you've decided it deserves extended development. A more worthy endeavor I cannot imagine!Beth
Response from Amita (Author of A Conspiracy of Witches)
Your first line is the response I was after. I wanted to take something squicky and write it as elegant and enchanting.I hope the next chapter lives up to your expectations. You're giving me performance anxiety.