Passion's Promise
luvsev22 Reviews | 8.64/10 (22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 48 Favorites )
An evening encounter with Severus and Hermione. Unbeknownst to them, someone is watching.
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I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.
I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.
Reviews for Passion's Promise
yummy!!
I know this story is old, so I don't know wheteher you'll read my comment, but I just needed to thank you so much.I adored your descriptions, your pace of story-telling, pretty much everything. Pure gold!
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
*totally flattered* Thank you for the lovely compliments -- it means a lot to me.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
*totally flattered* Thank you for the lovely compliments -- it means a lot to me.
Ummm, wow.
Raises eyebrow. This just gets more intriguing. *Snerk* Very nice scene with Bill there. ;o)
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
You flatter me, dear.
Oooh, me likey. It is so very sweet with a bit of a dark edge at the end. Looking forward to the next chapter.=o)
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
I'm glad you like the dark twist, dear. You never know about Bill. He has plans for them.
Okay, now this is hot. Not like a roaring bonfire, but hot like the embers that have been banked for the night and just need a stir to set them blazing once again. It is a heat more intense than flame. Dangerous for it's seemingly harmless appearance.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thank you, dear. This chapter is leading up to what I hope will be a blazing conclusion to this little tale.
Sneaky Bill. His comment makes me think he might be a little crazy...or maybe I have been reading too much horror fan fic?
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
I meant for him to sound a little crazy. I did it simply because of what I know: when you want something so much, it can alter behaviour.
Gosh, Where is this going?!?!?!
Great Lemons!!
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Stay tuned to find out. Glad you liked the lemons, dear.
Ooh, Bill. I didn't know you felt that way! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
He has plans for them. ;)
OMGosh, What is Bill up to? This doesn't bode well for them..Egads!!!
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Teehe, you will find out soon. :p Thanks for the shiny stars!
hmmm now that was steamy hot!!!! nice job
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thanks! There's nothing like a little Severus/Hermione/Bill to heat the blood. :)
Response from Rheenie (Reviewer)
yes lol that was the first time I have read that pairing and I tell u what, I am looking for more!!
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Oh, glad this turned you on to the pairing. A bit of a warning - Bill/Hermione/Severus is not really all that popular, so you may have a bit of time finding it, stories do exist though.
Response from Rheenie (Reviewer)
Yes I have already thought of that and it is very unfortunate that this is the case! So in that regard I think you did a great job lol u should write more
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
In the new year, once I get some of my other works in progress, I will be writing another of this pairing... maybe a continuation of this story. Thank you for the wonderful compliment!
Just seen your gift on the SS/HG exchange... and couldn't help but pop on over to read and review! Love it! It's got just enough spice to make it very very hot =)
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thank you! The mystery artist did such a great job; it's lovely.
Like I said I LOVE this chapter. I hope Bill will come back very often.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thanks! I am pleased that you loved it! And you can bet Bill will be back in the future. :)
I think I'm gonna love chapter three.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
I hope you do. :)
I cant' wait to see Bill entering the story more deeply.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
You will see more of him in chapter 2 and a lot more of him in three. :)
A Sev/Bill sandwich. Tasty! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Tee hee... thanks!
Hehehe... very hot.I'm not a fan of Menage-a-Trois,but this was pretty good :)A~
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thank you so much. I am quite glad to hear you like my story despite the fact it is a threesome. I am flattered.
Oullalalallal loved it~
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
I am glad you did. :)
What a lucky Hermione. That was very hot. I liked the experimental kiss between Severus and Bill. Sounds like the passion between the three promises more passionate encounters for them. Lucky Hermione. Oh, did I already say that? Thanks for the story!
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
You can bet there will be more interludes between the three of them. They make an irresistable combination. You are most welcome, dear. :)
I loved what you said about Hermione and Severus avoiding each other during the day, but the night being a cloah, under which, they could be free. The way you write is beautiful.
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
*Blushes* You are very kind.
The intimacy you described was very passionate indeed. Just how it should be when they have desired each other for so long. Very nice story so far. Off to read the rest...
Response from luvsev (Author of Passion's Promise)
Thank you, dear. Hope you like the rest. :)