New Chapter for The Little Flat
The Little Flat
Valady71 Reviews | 6.25/10 (71 Ratings, 0 Likes, 62 Favorites )
Hermione is in a miserable marriage with Ron, but having an affair with Severus. Will she finally leave Ron for Severus or vice versa?
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What an intriguing first chapter. I love that Severus and Hermione are in love, but you've left me with a question... just like a good author should! Hummmmm..... I can't wait to find out why Hermione hasn't "decided to change things."Good start!Beth
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Interesting start. The flat sounds like a lovely, safe, hideaway. I am wondering why she doesn't leave Ron. Perhaps that is yet to come. :)
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
All with be revealed before the story ends. Thanks for the lovely review!
This is a really good start. You write well and I can easily envisage the scene. Hmmm Severus for a whole week end eh! Sounds good to me, *winks*!! I shall keep a look out for updates on this & look forward to seeing where this is going :-)
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you. Yes, I'd love a w/e with him myself... who needs sleep! Updates will depend on when my beta sends me the next chapter. The story is finished, so now it's up to when she can get to the next chapter. :)
i don't condone adultry but sev and 'mione are my otp so...ok! lovely start. thanks so much
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
LOL Mine too. Thanks!
Great story, Hermione and Severus really make a great couple
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you!
*squee* Thank you so much for the baby. I"m a real sucker for sappy ending with babies (lots of them).
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
HEHEHE Yes, I love them too!
So no babies after all. *disappointed* Well, they are beginning a new life and she managed to get tid of the old one relatively smpoothly. I was surprised to not see an enraged Molly demanding answers. (Honestly I don't know who can be the most frightening; Sev or Molly?)
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
I figured we all had enough of Molly at this point... especially Hermione! LOL Thanks for the lovely reviews!
Is she under a spell or potion? Because neither thought about contraceptives? How I'd love to see a little Snape soon. *big grin*
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Assume she's on a potion since she hasn't gotten pregnant in two years. :)
hee hee hee! Awwww! That was soooo cute!!!!
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
It wasn't as bloody as I had imagined. I'm glad Ron has grown up enough to accept things without a majoe scandal.
I hope Molly will get particularly nosey and unbearable so that Hermione can't stand it anymore and quit(especially her dear husband) before banging the door really loud while leaving.
She couldn't expect him to live forever hiding his feelings. I hope she'll chose the right path.
Well, it seems I was wrong because things are going along definitely well.
Why am I under the impression that the evening won't go as planned?
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Sorry it has taken so long to respond but Real Life=ARGHHH! By now you have the answer to your question.
yay, again! the happiest of happy endings. thanks muchly
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you for all the lovely reviews!
I just wanted to say that i think that this is a cute little fic and i really enjoyed reading it...
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
I'm so happy that they're so much in love and expecting a little one. A family to call their own!!! Excellent update. Lovely! :D
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you! :D
It figures that Harry would be upset about Severus being the man in Hermione's life; he's lucky he didn't get his broom hexed up his butt.I'm so happy that she is now free to make a life with Severus. They deserve so much happiness. :D
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
I'm sure if he kept on Hermione would have done that. LOL
I'm so glad everything worked out so well for them both and I'm sure a baby will simply seal their happiness. Thanks for sharing this sweet little fic! :-)(BTW: You might just like to know that you still have this listed as 'not yet complete' on the titles page but I'm guessing that, as this is the Epilogue, it clearly is!)
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Fixed - shows completed now. Thanks for the heads up.
Perfect ending. Thanks for sharing, and don't hesitate to write another lol.
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thanks for reading! I have another story posting now. :)
LOL! i had to laugh at Severus when he told Hermione that they had seen Minerva "only six months ago.” That man! He is not ready to share his wife with anyone else.But a baby! Now Severus' baby is a horse of a different color. Yes, he is ready to be a daddy! This has been a delightful story to read, and I want to thank you for sharing it with us.Beth
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you for all the lovely reviews! :)
lovely, happy ever after ending! thanks muchly
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you for reading and reviewing. I wish more readers would do so.
yay! finally. great stuff. thanks muchly
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thanks for the wonderful reviews. :)
Lovely ending! I look forward to hearing about the wedding bells :) and who know's what else hehe.
Response from Valady (Author of The Little Flat)
Thank you. :)