To Be a Hero
my little secret52 Reviews | 6.38/10 (52 Ratings, 0 Likes, 70 Favorites )
The war is over, and it is time to move on. But for some, there seems to be nowhere to go...
An SS/HG tale of friendship and love.
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Oh my God! This is just gorgeous! Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much!! I appreciate the review. Peace! 
This is really good. I suppose that we will find out more about Sev and Lily in upcomming chapters, as wellas get to see how the romance between Sev and Hermione blooms. I am looking forward to it all! Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Yes, there will be more on the Snape/Lily story soon. It will explain some! I apologize for the horribly long time it took to answer...I really appreciate you taking the time to review. Peace!
This is really good. I suppose that we will find out more about Sev and Lily in upcomming chapters, as wellas get to see how the romance between Sev and Hermione blooms. I am looking forward to it all! Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Oh my God! This is just gorgeous! Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Wow. Beautifully written. I love the way you write their inner dialogue. Live long and prosper, Titania
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you! I've always been intrigued with the way that people think...I suppose that's what drives me to include their thoughts in the story. I appreciate you taking the time to review. Peace!
It sounds strikingly like Barnes and Nobles, not to mention several other book/coffee spot that have come about in recent times. I love those types of book stores. It is funny that Severus keeps telling himself that he does not want more than a friendship with Hermione and then turns around and has thoughts about what she would be like in a more intimate relationship. It is said that those who have had love are capable of finding it again, the question is will he recognize it when he sees it. B
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Does Barnes & Noble serve wine? Hmmm...I have to go there again! Yes, Severus is trying very hard to convince himself that he's all dead inside. What does he know?Thanks for taking the time to review. Peace!
Good chapter. I'm glad she forgave him so easily and enabled them to start anew. :) I'm interested in what you have next.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
He's a hard man to hold a grudge against. (And we'd all like to hold SOMETHING against him, wouldn't we? 
) Thanks for the review...I'm hoping to finish up the next chapter soon! Peace!
Yay, an update! Boo, I want more! Yay, you're going to give it to me soon....right? ~Lotm
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Wow, you must REALLY be mad at me, huh? 
I'm sorry for the delay in responding to your post as well as the delay in getting the next chapter up. The good news is, I hope to finish it tonight, so you should be seeing it soon. Forgive me?
Response from ladyofthemasque (Reviewer)
...The very instant I see the next installment, I'll forgive you! 
(lmao) Seriously, can't wait, and I'm very glad to hear you're updating soon!~Lotm
Looking forward to the next part of this great story.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much! I'm hoping to finish the next chapter tonight or tomorrow...hopefully it won't be too terribly full of errors and will be posted soon. I'm sorry for such a horrible delay in answering your review...I really do appreciate you taking the time, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Peace!
Yay, they had a date! Well, he might not call it a date, but they had "quality time" together, even without trembling monkeys. I'm also glad she and Harry realize that something "ended" - the school stage of their friendship, as they both move on to adulthood. Thanks for updating!!
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
I'm not quite sure I could see Snape doing the trembling monkeys!! Cynical aardvarks, maybe... I have never been a fan of anything ending in my life, but I've come to realize the necessity of it. I knew that was that point that Harry and Hermione were at, sad as it is. I'm working on the next chapter now... we'll see our couple at dinner. Yay! Thanks for the review...peace!
Thanks for updating. I'm happy they are getting along well.And that last thought Severus had is quite the cliffy. I get the feeling he might soon want more than friendship.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thanks, Ancient! I'm sorry for the delay in responding...I'm trying to work out an arrangement with Real Life that will allow me more hours in the day!!Sev doesn't know WHAT he wants. That's what's going to make this story so much fun to write! I hope you'll be patient and keep checking for updates on this one. I appreciate your review!Peace!
It seems at the beginning of the chapter he doesn't want anything more than friendship. At the end he's thinking another way... Hopefully he's not going to be one of those friends with benefits...
That would make an interesting topic for them to discuss on some occasion.. Hermione saying that the "boys" are sometimes friends with benefits.. I could see a little jealousy flair up with a nervous tick.. An have her continue with something like they haven't done that in a year or so... Just didn't see to be working out.. 
Good writing as always... Yep think she'll change his mind.
Will he inquire what her book was about?
Waiting for more.
Patty
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thanks, Patty! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm sorry this response has been so long in coming...it seems there aren't enough hours in the day for work, the family, and getting ready for the holidays!!I don't think he's going to ask about the book...but the way I see this story unfolding in my mind, they are going to have many, MANY opportunities to discuss a myriad of topics!! I'm looking forward into delving into some of them.I hope you'll be patient and continue to keep up with this story. With any luck, after the holidays I'll have more free time to indulge myself!Peace!
This is a wonderful story. I have just read the full story so far and love it! Really moving and written superbly. Perlease update soon cause I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much!! Sometimes I prefer to find a story that's completed already before I start it so that I don't have to wait for updates! LOL
We've had a bit of a family emergency recently, so I haven't been able to work on the next chapter yet, but I'll get to it soon. I hope you hang in there!
I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. It means so much! Peace
Great story. The writing just flows you can feel the emotions.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! I hope to have another chapter up in the near future! Peace
Side note: I am glad that you and your family are feeling better.
I truly enjoy this story and it is very well written. It made me laugh, the trembling monkeys like was too funny, and it made me cry. But then again my husband always said that if there was ever a movie line that suited me perfectly it was the line by Dolly Parton in Steel Magnolias "No one cries alone in my presence." Happens to be true, but it takes talent to have me crying at a story. Great job.
B
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Wow...I'm very flattered! I, too, am an emotional weakling...LOL. I cry pretty easily, and I try to write from that part of me when necessary. I'm glad it was effective!
Thanks so much for the side note. Unfortunately, my little one ended up in the hospital for a few days, but he's much better now. We're all getting back into the swing of things, and I hope to be able to get the next chapter done soon. I hope you'll hang in there for more!
I appreciate you taking the time to read and review. Peace!
Sometimes all it takes is someone you respect to tell you what to do... It worked quite nicely with Severus. I also particularly loved the scene with Harry and Hermione... that was lovely.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much. I base H & H's friendship on mine and my hubby's...we were best friends for about 12 years before we became involved, and that laughing scene was based on ones we've had. I loved writing it!
I'll be working on another chapter soon...I hope you'll hang around for more! Peace
a wonderful little chapter. I enjoyed it, even the "trembling monkeys" scene. The laughing until you cry followed by the cry to end all cries was very well done. Congrats on a job well done and update again soon!!!!! I want more...and next time you are nurse, just don't breathe...*grin*
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
LOL...thanks for the review!! I enjoyed doing the laughing scene a lot...I wrote it based on some hysterical laughing sessions that my husband and I have had, and when he read it he said that's exactly what he thought of. 
I'll be working on another chapter shortly, but unfortunately my little guy ended up in the hospital for a few days, so I'm a bit behind on ...well, life! We're all getting back on track now...I hope you can hang in there for more!!
Thanks for taking the time to read and review...I really appreciate it! Peace
I'm glad that Minerva had that talk with him. Yay! Can't wait to see what's next.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thanks, SW!!! I'm sorry for taking so long to respond...my son ended up in the hospital for about 5 days...oy! He's much better now, but we're still trying to catch up with real life. I've been LOVING your new story! I'll leave reviews soon!
Peace!
Well, your fic just gets better and better! I am enjoying it a great deal! (Didn't like the cliffie, though! ;-) ) Can't wait for more!
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
And your reviews get sweeter and sweeter! LOL...sorry for the cliffie, but it just seemed right there! I'm going to try and get that next chapter out ASAP...I know it's going to start and how it's going to end...I just have to see what happens in between! Thanks again for the review. Peace!
Beautifully written fic. Can't wait for more.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
I'm so glad you're enjoying it...thank you tons for taking the time to review!! Peace!
Interesting start. Looking forward to see where you go with this.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate the reviews!! Peace!
Muahahha.... I love it! Can't wait to see the answer. Great going, doll.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
You are my Sunshine, my only Sunshine...LOL!! Thank you so much...your words mean a lot!! Now it's nose back to the grindstone to get out Chapter 3!! Peace!
Excellent chapter. But I wonder, was there something going on between Snape and Hermione? random quotes 'a woman loving' 'a boy crying' and then Snape who thought about his lost child. Had Hermione lost a child as well? Or was it something she has witnessed?
Maybe she had been Oblivated. No, it can't be. Arg, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
LOL...sorry for all the unanswered questions...this story may take a while to unfold, but mysteries will be solved!! I can't answer the questions just yet, but please stay tuned! And chapter 2 is up...but I'm afraid it won't answer too much more...hopefully you'll still like it! Peace!!
What a wonderful beginning to what looks to be a very interesting story! Good Job! Can't wait for more!
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
Thank you so much! Chapter 2 is up...hopefully you'll like it and continue reading! Peace!!
Even if it is your first story, you are doing well. We can feel their pain. You gave us just enough background story to get us current, and you gave us just enough of what's going on currently to pique our interest. Good job.
Response from my little secret (Author of To Be a Hero)
southern_witch_69's response: haha? lol... i got sent a blank response. ~snicker~