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Knickers
nastygrl33 Reviews | 7.88/10 (33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 21 Favorites )
Pureblood wizards,as a rule, do not wear underwear.
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nastygrl
Member Since 2008 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 77 | 56 Reviews Written | 372 Review Responses
I've been a fan of JK Rowling for a long time, but only turned to fanfiction after DH - read it in one day, cried for three, turned to the internet the day after for more. I favor Severus/ Hermione pairings, especially those with lots of chapters and lovely smut scenes - sex by association, pathetic, isn't it?? I've posted a beta profile, if you'd like to check it out.
In real life I am a single mom living in a small town. Rewarding and boring and the same time. Lucky me ;)
Reviews for Knickers
Oh this was so unexpected but so much fun! I just love the way you write.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Thank you!!
Oh Neville, who would have though you would become such a stud muffin. What insight you had with him, totally believable too after he killed that damn snake. I love how you portrayed him and gave him what he so rightly deserved.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I love Neville! He's long been portrayed as a country bumpkin or bumbling fool; I never thought of him as either of those. And that you said my insight was totally believable just made my day!Sincere thanks :)
Oh my, I didn't see that coming. Love your wit and sense of humor.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Thank you!!
Heh he..Dream indeed. That was a quite enjoyable little romp.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I'm mortified at how long it's taken me to read and respond to your very kind comments! Please accept both my apologies and sincere thanks for reading and reviewing my stories!! I appreciate every single word. :)
Just absolutely loved it. How I wish I could describe the smile on my face as I read the last lines. Simply brilliant my dear, simply brilliant.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Thank you for your kind words! Just now I went back and re-read the story. I am still amazed I love it, and I actually wrote it, lol.
A DREAM!!!!!!!!!!! bwhahahahahahahah. poor girl. But I loved that you mentioned the part that wizards don't wear underware... it ties everything so nicely together. And the name of the shope was so funny! And the premises was great!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
A dream! *snirk*So glad you liked it! You know you inspire me *wink*.Dari
Wow. Wonderful.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Welcome back. For once I've read the chapter, lying in my couch and not at work as I usually do. *grin*
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, And is that because you have learned your lesson or just a happy coincidence? Either way, I'm very happy you are back, as well :)Thank you for reading and reviewing!Dari
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
LOL, And is that because you have learned your lesson or just a happy coincidence? As a wise woman I should say the first but really it's the latter. I could not have resisted such a tempting offer if I had been at work when I saw the updated new chapter.
Draco really does care for Harry going so far as to wear undies! Now that is really something!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I think he wanted to see what all the fuss was about. He certainly found out, didn't he?!So glad you liked, and thanks so much for reading!Dari
My favorite part was Molly's crack about always being in the kitchen! Amen to that! Molly shop lifting was also funny.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Oh hell yeah, poor Molly! Sometimes, a girl has to do what a girl has to do! I can relate, I once was passing a Calvin Klein display... ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing :DDari
clapclapclapI have never read a story where the POV was Snape's undies! 10 points to your house for creativity. I am very glad Mrs. Snape will be saving them.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I got the idea for the story driving home on night, and I started crying. I'm such a sap *sniff*Poor Severus. Someone had to tell his story :)Thanks for reading and reviewing!Dari
Anonymous
*mwahaha* The last line really drove me over the edge.... great chapter, but with this finishing, bloody brilliant! *wipes tears from laughing off her face*
Author's Response: Awesome! I am so, so glad you enjoyed it, it was a lot of fun to write.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review!
so cute. thanks
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
You're welcome :)Thanks for reading and letting me know what you thought.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
You're welcome :)Thanks for reading and letting me know what you thought.
WOW that's a story. I would never have imagine Molly that way, nor Arthur for that matter. I was going to bed but I think I will read a bit more because thinking of that is just like thinking of my parents having s.. EWWWW i don't want to think of that either.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, you poor thing! I can as easily imagine Severus a young man as I can Molly a young woman. The fact that you have to read some more so as to NOT think about it makes me giggle, because I accomplished my goal, make it realistic!Thanks so, so much for reading and reviewing!And I promise, the next one (or two) you CANNOT read at work!!!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Thanks for the warning
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, you poor thing! I can as easily imagine Severus a young man as I can Molly a young woman. The fact that you have to read some more so as to NOT think about it makes me giggle, because I accomplished my goal, make it realistic!Thanks so, so much for reading and reviewing!And I promise, the next one (or two) you CANNOT read at work!!!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Thanks for the warning
Cute! This is an interesting concept, and the idea of Molly having a secret fettish like this is a little hot! Kinda makes it seem OK to have fettishes of one's own... ;-)
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, There is nothing wrong with a little fetish now and then Thank you so very, very much for reading and reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, There is nothing wrong with a little fetish now and then Thank you so very, very much for reading and reviewing!
This is utterly perfet. OMG. What an amazing improvement! And--oh, so heartwrenching! I love the ending, how she wants to keep them, and you say "What stories, indeed." Oh, brilliant!!!!
I can't praise you enough on this part--VERY well done.
*high five*
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
*blushing and high-fiving back*Thank you! I love, love, love Severus, and I knew there were reasons why he was miserable! I loved writing this story for him. Our conversations helped, too, I think ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
*blushing and high-fiving back*Thank you! I love, love, love Severus, and I knew there were reasons why he was miserable! I loved writing this story for him. Our conversations helped, too, I think ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing!
oh, crap...you made me cry. very touching. thanks
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
What a lovely compliment, thanks!I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
This is so different from the first chapter and yet in the same line. It's soft and comfortable like a pair of old favourite knickers. I enjoy it very much.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Hello again!I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was wonderful to write.Thanks you very much for reading and reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
Hello again!I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter, it was wonderful to write.Thanks you very much for reading and reviewing!
This actually brought tears to my eyes. I doubt that was your intention, but it was just beautiful. How did you get beautiful out of undies?
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I can't even begin to tell you how happy I am that this story moved you. When I knew I was going to write Severus and was thinking about his underwear (as I often dream about Severus IN his underwear :D), this story came to me, and I started to tear up. And you found me out, I only used the knickers to trick you into reading!Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I can't even begin to tell you how happy I am that this story moved you. When I knew I was going to write Severus and was thinking about his underwear (as I often dream about Severus IN his underwear :D), this story came to me, and I started to tear up. And you found me out, I only used the knickers to trick you into reading!Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing.
Oh yes, I loved this and I totally agree with Hermione; The black cotton shorts deserves better than the rubbish bin:-))
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I think so, too! I'll admit it, I keep momentos; the water bottle from Paris, the napkin from the blues club in Memphis and birthday cards. Tangible things to remind me where I've been and how far I've come. These cotton shorts have been through hell and back with Severus, they should enjoy a bit of heaven, too :)Thanks for taking the time to read and review!Dari
I am so greatful for the warning you provided me with. I can't thank you enough for avoinding me such embarassment in work. Please keep up (and forever) the so good work.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LMAO!!! You are very welcome for the warning :)These stories have been so much fun to write!And I am so greatful that you took the time to read and review every chapter. It really means a lot to me!Thank you thank you thank you!!!Dari
RAWR back, babe! You've painted Neville in quite the delicious light! *fans self*. I really cannot compliment you enough on your writing style. It's a refreshing change! I love it!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
There are no words sincere enough to convey how much your encouragement and support has meant to me. It is through your suggestions and comments that these stories really come to life.RAWR RAWR RAWR!PS: Neville is the hottie, isn't he? LOL Couldn't you just see the hot gardener in the low slung jeans and no shirt? He HAD to have a tatoo. The ultimate babe lure!
Lucky me it's sunday and I'm at home, alone. Else I would have been very embarrassed whimpering like I did. Of course you warned me last time but it's hard to refrein from reading such a good and original story. I never imagine Neville could be this HOT.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
LOL, I am so very happy you enjoyed it! I did warn you, didn't I? My Neville does grow up a bit :)Thank you for taking the time to read and review!PS: Make sure you're at home for Chapter 5
Delightfully nasty and sensual. You have a knack for using and bending language to create the most wonderful tingle in the right places. I love what Harry did with Draco's "knickers" at the end. You dirty minx you : ))) Oh yeah, this is Soft : )
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I'd know you anywhere, Soft!I so appreciate all the wonderful encouragement you've given me. Without it, I never would have written anything beyond that first story.Gotta say, you create some wonderful tingles, yourself! I am so, glad you liked it, and thank you, thank you for reading and reviewing!xo
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
I'd know you anywhere, Soft!I so appreciate all the wonderful encouragement you've given me. Without it, I never would have written anything beyond that first story.Gotta say, you create some wonderful tingles, yourself! I am so, glad you liked it, and thank you, thank you for reading and reviewing!xo
I love the 'little boy' part! hahahahahhaah. Does he have batman or spiderman on them too???? bwhahahahahThis is such an intersting perspective! I love things that different than the normal--very creative dear!
And a little fetish indeed! Holy crap!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
So, so glad you likey! I see maybe Superman underwear on Harry, don't you?We all have our little fetishes, after all. :DHoly crap, indeed!Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!Love ya!xo
Response from shellsnapeluver (Reviewer)
Superman on Harry!!!! OMFG THAT IS JUST PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The hero clompex.
Response from nastygrl (Author of Knickers)
So, so glad you likey! I see maybe Superman underwear on Harry, don't you?We all have our little fetishes, after all. :DHoly crap, indeed!Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing!Love ya!xo
Response from shellsnapeluver (Reviewer)
Superman on Harry!!!! OMFG THAT IS JUST PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The hero clompex.