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Chapter 4 of 6
belle4lifeThe Weasley twins invent something that brings two people together.
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"Why do you care?" he questioned again, trying to keep his tone level to show her that she had no effect on him whatsoever.
“I… just do. We survived Voldemort. I figure that bonds people. I worry about you. Is that not allowed? I’m sorry for being a decent human being. I just wanted to find out what else you might be hiding. But never mind. I’ll just leave you be,” She stood up and walked towards the door, “and don’t worry. Your secret is safe with me,” she stated as she walked out the door and slammed it shut. Only to open it two seconds later and walk back into the room. Severus had not even flinched through her turbulent exit.
“You know what? I won’t leave you alone.” With bravery that only a true Gryffindor could possess, she stormed around the large desk and pulled him up by his collar. Pulling him towards her body, she kissed him with every fiber of her being, trying to relay just how she felt in that one kiss. When she released him, his expression was stunned. He was frozen with a look of almost joy on his face. Then his head shimmered, and the Severus Snape standing before her was one she had only ever seen once, through an invention by the Weasley twins. His greasy hair was greasy no more, and actually quite soft to the touch. His ugly teeth were straight and white, allowing for the question of what his smile would look like to enter her mind. His nose, while remaining the same size, actually fit his face perfectly. His face didn't hold that harsh look that her and every other Hogwarts student had come to associate with him. He actually had laugh lines on his face, making her wonder what he was laughing at. The all around effect revealed a much kinder looking man.
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There's the next part, the big reveal. Hopefully it was worth the wait. I didn't want to change him too much because well, then he just wouldn't be Severus, and we all love him for who he is.
There's two more chapters after this. Let me know what you think.
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110 Reviews | 4.94/10 Average
Great treat! I know I've read this before but I was cruel not to review then. I apologize. I have the giggles seeing everyone's reaction in my mind when he walked through the floo. Such a fun read. Love it.
I KNEW IT! I guessed from the very beginning that he was beautiful. Great reveal!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahahaha, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahahaha, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
i REALLY like her dragging him up by his collar to kiss him - that's hot! and i like that he was frozen with a look of "almost joy." and i especially liked that he looked mostly like himself with minor improvements. laugh lines. :D
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.I htought Hermioen needed to take charge of the situation, so she did. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.I htought Hermioen needed to take charge of the situation, so she did. lol
I just read through this story and love the characterizations---and that he isn't horridly different. I'm impressed she was able to dispell Fred's curiosity to check why she gasped. I look forward to more.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.
I can't help but feel that really, Severus would be angry and insecure that she only chose directly after seeing him as, even if only slightly, more handsome and approachable to kiss him. I think he would recognize that immediately and be extremely defensive about it, whether or not he needed to be.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
keep reading. it gets explained, have no fears.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
keep reading. it gets explained, have no fears.
EEEEE! that's what i think. I love it. i can't wait to read more.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
awwwww (blushes) thanks, im glad you like it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
awwwww (blushes) thanks, im glad you like it.
Well we knew he was going to be hot :-) Wonder what his reaction is going to be?? Can't wait to find out.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol. its next, sitting in the queue, ready to go.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol. its next, sitting in the queue, ready to go.
Yay! A healthier Severus!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yup, and soon, hoepfully a happier one too. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yup, and soon, hoepfully a happier one too. lol
I'm really glad you didn't change him too much. That definitely would have made him a completely different person. I'm looking forward to more!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yeah, I decided it was just better to change only a few little things. im glad you liked it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yeah, I decided it was just better to change only a few little things. im glad you liked it.
You really do have to intimidate students to get anythign out of them!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yup, too true. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yup, too true. lol
Hmmm. Did her kiss make him break the glamour?
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
thats what I would liek to think. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
thats what I would liek to think. lol
You kept the nose! wooo!! and we all know really his hair isn't greasy!! Now Severus kiss her back!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yeah, originallyi changed his nose, but then I got some reviews about not changing it and so i changed it back and I like it better this way. he's changed, but its still him. i'm glad you approved.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
yeah, originallyi changed his nose, but then I got some reviews about not changing it and so i changed it back and I like it better this way. he's changed, but its still him. i'm glad you approved.
Gosh, you had me thinking he'd actually be a blonde, muscle-bound Adonis! LOL No really: I like that the changes were subtle. I also love the way Hermione stormed back in, after having left. Truly one of Godric's own!! Well done!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
i could never do that to him. but yay, I'm glad you liked it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
i could never do that to him. but yay, I'm glad you liked it.
If I was Hermione I'd try and get EVERY pair of truth specs and Obliviate the twins. It would be for the 'common good'. Imagine how many witches poor Severus would have to fight off! Poor dear would be exhausted! Love your story. I like that you have kept him basically the same - but with laugh lines.Looking forward to reading more.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahaha, i totally concur. thanks for the sweet review, I'm glad you are enjoying it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahaha, i totally concur. thanks for the sweet review, I'm glad you are enjoying it.
I thought I was going to have to yell at you again for another cliffie, but this was just perfect. I can wait patiently for more this time. But don't get too comfortable, I'm not that patient. Was it a curse?
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, i would never be that cruel. im glad you enjoyed it, and the next one is in the queue.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, i would never be that cruel. im glad you enjoyed it, and the next one is in the queue.
This glimpse of the real Severus is making me want more, much much more. Just like Hermione I think...
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol completely understand, I think we all want muuch more Severus.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol completely understand, I think we all want muuch more Severus.
Go Hermione! I knew there was a hottie hiding under there. :)
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, yay im glad you liked it.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, yay im glad you liked it.
heeehee darn queue-- I'm sending the admins good vibes and echocolates to further the chapter through since I want more.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahahaha, yay, hoepfully that works. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
hahahaha, yay, hoepfully that works. lol
Oh, I hope the expression on her face is interest!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, could be....
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, could be....
When, when are you going to tell us WTF he really looks like? Gilderoy Lockhart? It must be something rather sweet and/or innocent, since Hermione reckons he uses the glamour to intimidate the students (which his true appearance wouldn't do as effectively).
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, its in the next chapter I SWEAR!! lol, sorry to keep you in suspense for so long.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, its in the next chapter I SWEAR!! lol, sorry to keep you in suspense for so long.
You have a real knack for not telling us what people see. So mean of you ;-)Cheers. /M
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, why thank you, i think.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, why thank you, i think.
Tease! Tease, tease, tease, tease, tease! I was about to shut off my computer, then I opened this and went "oooh, she updated!" So here I am, torturing myself with these snippets of story!Somehow, I don't think she's about to blackmail him. At least, I hope not. Couldn't be, though, right?I'm glad it's all finished. This story is really fun.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
tee hee. im glad you are enjoying it, even if it is teasing you. lol
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
tee hee. im glad you are enjoying it, even if it is teasing you. lol
Well, well, well. What does he have to say to that?
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, yes his repsonse should be msot interesting.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
lol, yes his repsonse should be msot interesting.
woot! i can't wait to read more!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
YAY!!!!!!!! (claps excitedly, see emoticon to the immediate right of this sentence lol) I'm glad youa re enjoying it, thanks for the review.
Response from snapefan2007 (Reviewer)
lol, i love the emoticon there. tis cute and you're most welcome for the review!
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
YAY!!!!!!!! (claps excitedly, see emoticon to the immediate right of this sentence lol) I'm glad youa re enjoying it, thanks for the review.
Response from snapefan2007 (Reviewer)
lol, i love the emoticon there. tis cute and you're most welcome for the review!
she saw that Snape really looks like Alan Rickman perhaps when he was Col. Brandon???? ;)
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
ahhhhhhh, yuminess, perfection. now i want to watch S&S. lol. oooh that voice. yum. lol you'll have to read and find out.
Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)
ahhhhhhh, yuminess, perfection. now i want to watch S&S. lol. oooh that voice. yum. lol you'll have to read and find out.