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The Truth Specs

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belle4life

The Weasley twins invent something that brings two people together.

Romance Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 1,443 Words 6 Chapters Complete
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"I just realized that I can't very well test them unless someone is wearing a glamour, now, can I?" She gave them a cocky grin and placed the glasses back on as Fred turned his hair brown and shrunk his nose. She looked at him and saw the real Fred, and with the specs still on she stole a glance to the man sitting in the corner. A man who was normally sallow, and greasy, and completely vile. A man who had a nasty temper and an even nastier personality. A man who had a wicked sense of humor and could take on anyone physically or intellectually. A man whom she had been in love with for several years.

Severus Snape felt her eyes fall on him, and the gasp that fell from her lips almost made his heart stop. She had seen him. But for some reason she didn't reveal the truth. He looked at the girl and wondered when she had grown up and become a woman. A woman who used to be a bothersome know-it-all. A woman who had annoying taste in friends. A woman who fought bravely in the sight of absolute fear. A woman who had captured his heart and kept it captive.

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There's part two. Let me know what you think!

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Truth Specs

110 Reviews  |  4.94/10 Average

0/10

Bentwaters

Great treat! I know I've read this before but I was cruel not to review then. I apologize. I have the giggles seeing everyone's reaction in my mind when he walked through the floo.  Such a fun read. Love it.

0/10

rachow

I KNEW IT!  I guessed from the very beginning that he was beautiful.  Great reveal!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahahaha, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahahaha, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

kittylefish

i REALLY like her dragging him up by his collar to kiss him - that's hot! and i like that he was frozen with a look of "almost joy." and i especially liked that he looked mostly like himself with minor improvements. laugh lines. :D

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.I htought Hermioen needed to take charge of the situation, so she did. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.I htought Hermioen needed to take charge of the situation, so she did. lol

0/10

Myst

I just read through this story and love the characterizations---and that he isn't horridly different.  I'm impressed she was able to dispell Fred's curiosity to check why she gasped. I look forward to more.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

aww, thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to change him too much because then he wouldn't be Severus.

7/10

michiruwater

I can't help but feel that really, Severus would be angry and insecure that she only chose directly after seeing him as, even if only slightly, more handsome and approachable to kiss him. I think he would recognize that immediately and be extremely defensive about it, whether or not he needed to be.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

keep reading. it gets explained, have no fears.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

keep reading. it gets explained, have no fears.

0/10

snapefan2007

EEEEE!  that's what i think.  I love it.  i can't wait to read more.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

awwwww (blushes) thanks, im glad you like it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

awwwww (blushes) thanks, im glad you like it.

0/10

Terab

Well we knew he was going to be hot :-)  Wonder what his reaction is going to be??  Can't wait to find out.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol. its next, sitting in the queue, ready to go.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol. its next, sitting in the queue, ready to go.

0/10

CharmedForce

Yay! A healthier Severus!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yup, and soon, hoepfully a happier one too. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yup, and soon, hoepfully a happier one too. lol

0/10

Antigone

I'm really glad you didn't change him too much.  That definitely would have made him a completely different person. I'm looking forward to more!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yeah, I decided it was just better to change only a few little things. im glad you liked it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yeah, I decided it was just better to change only a few little things. im glad you liked it.

0/10

Antigone

You really do have to intimidate students to get anythign out of them!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yup, too true. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yup, too true. lol

9/10

Maggie

Hmmm.  Did her kiss make him break the glamour?

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

thats what I would liek to think. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

thats what I would liek to think. lol

0/10

Nessa

You kept the nose! wooo!! and we all know really his hair isn't greasy!! Now Severus kiss her back!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yeah, originallyi changed his nose, but then I got some reviews about not changing it and so i changed it back and I like it better this way. he's changed, but its still him. i'm glad you approved.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

yeah, originallyi changed his nose, but then I got some reviews about not changing it and so i changed it back and I like it better this way. he's changed, but its still him. i'm glad you approved.

0/10

rhiannon113

Gosh, you had me thinking he'd actually be a blonde, muscle-bound Adonis! LOL  No really: I like that the changes were subtle. I also love the way Hermione stormed back in, after having left. Truly one of Godric's own!! Well done!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

i could never do that to him. but yay, I'm glad you liked it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

i could never do that to him. but yay, I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

reets67

If I was Hermione I'd try and get EVERY pair of truth specs and Obliviate the twins. It would be for the 'common good'. Imagine how many witches poor Severus would have to fight off! Poor dear would be exhausted! Love your story. I like that you have kept him basically the same  - but with laugh lines.Looking forward to reading more.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahaha, i totally concur. thanks for the sweet review, I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahaha, i totally concur. thanks for the sweet review, I'm glad you are enjoying it.

10/10

debjunk

I thought I was going to have to yell at you again for another cliffie, but this was just perfect.  I can wait patiently for more this time.  But don't get too comfortable, I'm not that patient.  Was it a curse? 

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, i would never be that cruel. im glad you enjoyed it, and the next one is in the queue.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, i would never be that cruel. im glad you enjoyed it, and the next one is in the queue.

10/10

snitchette

This glimpse of the real Severus is making me want more, much much more. Just like Hermione I think...

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol completely understand, I think we all want muuch more Severus.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol completely understand, I think we all want muuch more Severus.

10/10

faeriebell

Go Hermione! I knew there was a hottie hiding under there. :)

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, yay im glad you liked it.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, yay im glad you liked it.

10/10

Lkmaide

heeehee  darn queue--  I'm sending the admins good vibes and echocolates to further the chapter through since I want more. 

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahahaha, yay, hoepfully that works. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

hahahaha, yay, hoepfully that works. lol

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, I hope the expression on her face is interest!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, could be....

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, could be....

10/10

HannahSmith

When, when are you going to tell us WTF he really looks like? Gilderoy Lockhart? It must be something rather sweet and/or innocent, since Hermione reckons he uses the glamour to intimidate the students (which his true appearance wouldn't do as effectively).

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, its in the next chapter I SWEAR!! lol, sorry to keep you in suspense for so long.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, its in the next chapter I SWEAR!! lol, sorry to keep you in suspense for so long.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

You have a real knack for not telling us what people see. So mean of you ;-)Cheers. /M

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, why thank you, i think.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, why thank you, i think.

10/10

debjunk

Tease!  Tease, tease, tease, tease, tease!  I was about to shut off my computer, then I opened this and went "oooh, she updated!"  So here I am, torturing myself with these snippets of story!Somehow, I don't think she's about to blackmail him.  At least, I hope not.  Couldn't be, though, right?I'm glad it's all finished.  This story is really fun. 

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

tee hee. im glad you are enjoying it, even if it is teasing you. lol

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

tee hee. im glad you are enjoying it, even if it is teasing you. lol

8/10

Maggie

Well, well, well.  What does he have to say to that?

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, yes his repsonse should be msot interesting.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

lol, yes his repsonse should be msot interesting.

0/10

snapefan2007

woot!  i can't wait to read more!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

YAY!!!!!!!! (claps excitedly, see emoticon to the immediate right of this sentence lol) I'm glad youa re enjoying it, thanks for the review.

Response from snapefan2007 (Reviewer)

lol, i love the emoticon there.  tis cute and you're most welcome for the review!

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

YAY!!!!!!!! (claps excitedly, see emoticon to the immediate right of this sentence lol) I'm glad youa re enjoying it, thanks for the review.

Response from snapefan2007 (Reviewer)

lol, i love the emoticon there.  tis cute and you're most welcome for the review!

0/10

gifarlme

she saw that Snape really looks like Alan Rickman perhaps when he was Col. Brandon????  ;)

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

ahhhhhhh, yuminess, perfection. now i want to watch S&S. lol. oooh that voice. yum. lol you'll have to read and find out.

Response from belle4life (Author of The Truth Specs)

ahhhhhhh, yuminess, perfection. now i want to watch S&S. lol. oooh that voice. yum. lol you'll have to read and find out.

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