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Recuperation
il_grifone11 Reviews | 4.55/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )
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hahahahhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! well Severus is also a wonton. lol. he likes women's armp-pitt hair?...erotic.okay whatever floats his boat. lol. anyway great chapter!
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Many thanks for reading and reviewing my story.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Many thanks for reading and reviewing my story.
I think Hermione should give her parents lots of... ahem... "quiet time."
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading my story. I agree.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading my story. I agree.
Aww, just a wet dream? Poor guy. Perhaps a couple more chapters are in order. You know, to give him a chance to become really relaxed.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. I have no plans, currently, to extend the story. However, I would be happy for someone else to do so, if anyone has the inclination.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. I have no plans, currently, to extend the story. However, I would be happy for someone else to do so, if anyone has the inclination.
That was enjoyable.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading my story. Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for reading my story. Glad you enjoyed it.
This was a beautiful read, and I thoroughly enjoyed your visuals.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Gosh, I like getting good reviews. Thank you very much.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Gosh, I like getting good reviews. Thank you very much.
wouldn' we all want to wake up from a dream, and find the person of our dreams opposit us. unable and unwilling to flee for the next 7 days. yes, there is a lot of "reading" to do...
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
"reading" is good!thanks for the review.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
"reading" is good!thanks for the review.
that was fun!
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Glad you enjoyed it.thanks for the review.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Glad you enjoyed it.thanks for the review.
I wholeheartedyl agree with rachow's comment. But why did her parents take her along if they want to spend some "quality time" alone? She's of age, isn't she?
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for the review. In answer to your question, "artistic lisense". But being a parent, I often have to compromise between what I want and what would be good for my children. I imagine the same is true in the Granger household.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for the review. In answer to your question, "artistic lisense". But being a parent, I often have to compromise between what I want and what would be good for my children. I imagine the same is true in the Granger household.
Oh, this was lovely. I'm particularly impressed at the delicate balance of your inclusion of the train's sounds. They were included often enough to be very effective, but not so often as to be annoying. Here's hoping that Severus is able to answer his burning question.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
I hope so too.Thanks for the review.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
I hope so too.Thanks for the review.
Wow. You are a very descriptive writer. The smells, the sounds, the sights, I felt like I was there. I hope you write more. Not necessarily of this, but more in general.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for my first review for my first fiction writing in a very long time.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Thanks for my first review for my first fiction writing in a very long time.
"Don't disturb his reading", puh, if anything, Severus really want Hermione to disturb his reading in the most enjoyable way:-)) So do I of course, I hope he will have little or no time for reading at all:-))
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Me too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Response from il_grifone (Author of Recuperation)
Me too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.