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His Dark Lord

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His Dark Lord

sevra28

17 Reviews   |   17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 181 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus Snape has only one true master.

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Chapter 1: His Dark Lord


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sevra28

Member Since 2008  |  8 Stories  |  Favorited by 4  |  20 Reviews Written  |  63 Review Responses

I'm a 34 year old single Mom of one. I started writing Fanfiction at the end of 2008 so I'm fairly new! My favorite ship is of course HG/SS, but I would take on any Challenge given.

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Reviews for His Dark Lord

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10/10

snitchette

I find this very beautiful. The only thing Severus has ever wanted is love and acceptance. That's why is joined first Voldemort, then Albus. But Hermione here is giving him the most beautiful gift a man can recieve, proof of her love for him. Now he doesn't need anyone else but she. That's what I find magic.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review.

10/10

Lyndie578

Nice turn.  He might see it that way, mightn't he.  Wonderfully imaginative and vivid.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

0/10

Isode

Nice, I like this alot.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

This is my first real story. Thank You for the review.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

This is my first real story. Thank You for the review.

0/10

kimjo2

wow!  loved it!  thanks

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thanx!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thanx!

0/10

mummy

I really liked this.Thank you

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

0/10

sunny33

A better choice, by far.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

8/10

JUNIPER

very good

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

0/10

teshara

LOL!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

10/10

RedOrchid

Wow. Very powerful. Liked it very much. This is such a teaser for a longer story, though it might be that fact there isn't a longer story that makes it so compelling. Good job!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh, this was errie. But I don't thinkhe minded too much.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

You are one of my favorit fanfiction writers, Thank You for your review!

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thank you, wow. I did really like this story. I look forward to reading more of yours.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thank you, wow. I did really like this story. I look forward to reading more of yours.

0/10

debjunk

Hmm, Very descriptive and visual writing.  It left me puzzled as whether to feel happy or mortified.  Well, mortified is probably too strong a word.  But the disparity between a pregnant Hermione being compared to a Dark Lord was quite provocative.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

0/10

Angel Prince

Awesome!Extremely well written!I just love a woman who can bring her man to his knees :)

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

so do I! Thank You!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

so do I! Thank You!

0/10

ladyofthemasque

Verrrry nice...~Lotm

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You!

8/10

morgaine_dulac

Huh, that was almost creepy. Mind you I like creepy. /M

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

8/10

tialangela

Aw, very nice! For a moment, you got me thinking of Bellatrix (aurgh), but I'm glad to see our dear Potions Master worshiping Hermione.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thank You, I am glad you liked it!

10/10

Severina52

aw =) u made snape so sweat

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thanks.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

Thanks.

10/10

ickle duddykins

Very sweet and romantic, yet without a hint of fluffiness. I would love to read a longer version of this. I wonder if Hermione's power over Severus, which resembles the kind of power a master has over a slave, is an illusion or a metaphor that he has created to describe his devotion to her, or if this story is truly AU, and that is the literal situation they find themselves in.

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

I almost came close to not posting this I’m glad I did. Thanks for all of your reviews this is just the encouragement I need to keep posting!

Response from sevra28 (Author of His Dark Lord)

I almost came close to not posting this I’m glad I did. Thanks for all of your reviews this is just the encouragement I need to keep posting!

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