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Bundle of Joy
LadyTuesday817 Reviews | 6.98/10 (817 Ratings, 0 Likes, 634 Favorites )
Winner for the Anything Goes Challenge Chaptered Category! Seeking: An intelligent, capable wizard amenable to assisting a bright, independent, magically-formidable single witch in the conception of a child. Insemination only: no sexual congress; non-negotiable. Dignity and discretion of utmost importance. Neither monetary nor emotional support needed for or during the birth and life of child. Further contact will be established following receipt of preliminary letter of interest. Address all inquiries by owl to Joy Bundle, Box # 1086, Hogsmeade Village .
A response to #56 of the Anything Goes challenge: “She wants to have a baby. She's interviewing potential fathers. Who is she? Why is she resorting to this method? What questions is she asking in order to choose a father for her unborn child? Who shows up? Who does she choose? What happens next? She can be anybody.”
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A 30-something aspiring romance novelist shamelessly (and obsessively) devoted to Harry Potter and many other geeky fandoms. I ship mostly Hermione/Snape and Harry/Hermione, but have been known to dabble in others.
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thanks for promising the next chapter soon - while I am all about dramatic timing, I am also dying for this to resolve!!! Take care and thanks for all your hard work!
The only way we'll refrain from killing you is if you promptly post the next chapter. :p
Another great one. Excellent build up.
A WEEK OR SO????
ARE YOU NUTS???
I believe you have been taking pointers from other authors who give horrible horrible evil cliff hangers (Subversa, Sunshine, Keladry, Cocoachristy, Ginnyweasley to name a few)....
You know I was so tickled with all the chapters I got to read this evening and then this..
I was getting all warm and fuzzy (since its freezing in the northeast USA) and now I'm back to freezing. Thank you very much.
I hope you are hiding under that desk with a keyboard and flashlight or the very least a pencil and pad of paper.
Excellent chapters.
I wonder if the Potters will be discussing the funniest things that been happening lately and then put 2 and 2 together.k
Maybe not since they are trying to be such great friends to the future couple.
Is the beta done yet??
I'm waiting.
I'm waiting.
By any chance do you have any munchies?
Since you need to get that chapter up so I won't eat and gain more weight... lol
Is the guilt trip working?
I KNEW it! I just knew this whole chapter was going to be dating foreplay and then you would end the chapter at the good part! TEASE!!!!!!!! I really really really hope they can talk this through like adults instead of yelling and running away from eachother. They are both so alone they make my heart hurt. Be kind Lady Tuesday be kind.
Seems like they've made a connection without realizing it.
Did the healer do something to stimulate the process???
On to the next chapter..
I really really really wanted to scream last night. I knew you weren't going to get to all their first date, but I was kinda hoping you'd leave it at her going to meet him....not them seeing who they really are. I'm so scrared now, seriously. I'm afraid that they're going to start the whole "Miss Granger" - "Professor" bull shit. And say a bunch of nasty stuff they don't mean and storm away. I seriously hope they think before they start shouting obsenities at eachother. Argh, I'm so upset! I hope all of my inner termoil is for nothing. Please submit that next chapter soon. Please. ~Brena
Uh, you DID expect a bit of flaying then? Okay, you got it, Toyota!
YOU LEFT IT THERE! REALLY?
Okay, flaying done. I actually figured that's where you would leave it. So, now it's wondering whether his nasty side will show and leave Hermione hurt again, or whether Hermione can handle being with someone who belittled her for so long. On the plus side, she always defended him and demanded respect from the boys, on the minus... he saw no difference.
interesting cliffie!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter. i really like this story and it appears that i am not the only one, with 83 reviews before me, you are a very popular writter. i was wondering when you would have them meet. my only thought is a saying i read in a book once, it is an old native american saying, "everybody looks the same in the dark." and i think that hermione and severus need to think on that when they get to the looks department of each other. it is amazing how many people go purely on first looks. they already know each other on the inside, so why does the outer package matter so much.
thanks for writing,
Huanita
The cloak looped over Hermione’s arm dropped heavily to the floor as she stared uncomprehendingly at the all-too-familiar face. Severus Snape’s features dropped in open shock.
“You!” Hermione gasped out.
“It can’t be,” he managed.
Hermione’s fingernails dug into the heavy wool beneath them.
And everything changed.
Good Lord! woman, how could you do this? What an evil cliffie! What I want to know... no, what I need to know is HOW DID EVERYTHING CHANGE?
I am so happy for Hermione and Severus that they have such good friends in Harry, Ginny, and Minerva to help them with their cases of nerves preceding this dinner date. Hermione is a vision of loveliness in the soft green robes Ginny lent her, and Severus looks good in his ebony robes with his hair tied at the nape of his neck with a green ribbon.
The care that Severus took in finding dining accommodations that would allow them to have some privacy was an indication of how very much he wanted this evening to turn out right.
I can only hope that because they are who they are will not cause a problem. After all, everyone knows the difficult road Severus had to traverse during the war and how hard he worked to bring about the fall of Voldemort. And Healer Levy has already told Hermione what she thought about the man she chose to be the donor: “You chose the right man. He’s a good man.”
I am very much looking forward to the next chapter! This chapter was brilliant even if it is a cliffie of the worst sort! Well done!
Beth
OMG! That really was one evil cliffhanger! And then you tell us the next chapter is done, and you're making us wait "a week or so"? So mean! This has been one delightful read, LT. Thanks so much.
Awwwwwwwe!! I am bouncing out of my seat. This story has been so great. They were both adorable as they were getting ready. What a great way to make us feel the mounting tension. I was tempted to skip to the end because it was almost unbearable reading through their preparation, all the while crossing my fingers that this chapter would contain their meeting. I will be on the lookout for the next chappie!!! Good to hear you have it written--I would give up on fandom if this were abandoned.
I really feel for Severus...freezing like that before he turned to meet Joy. Although I find it a bit OOC, I dearly love your charcterization of Hermione and Severus and do hope they end up happy!
Too true! Definately an evil cliffy there! I admit that I've been anitcipating this from the first, and I really enjoyed all the built up tension you gave us there. I was practically on the edge of my seat - so exciting!
"not slutty enough" lol. really liked that line.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
That was mean, but I'm pretty sure the next update will make up for it! :-D It's super great!
I don't think this end as a bad evil cliffie. It would have been he we didn't already know who they are. Like if Hermione said YOU and nothing else and we would have still be dying to know who it is.
But there, they met and discovered their true identity. And so the fun begins. Of course I'm slightly frustrated 'cause I want to know how they will handle the situation but I really think it could have been much worse. So I will wait patiently a week or so to read what will happen next.
You conveyed, with just a few words, exactly how a moment like that cliffhanger feels: The uncertainty, the feeling of being unprepared no matter how long you have thought and fidgeted and worried about it, the sheer magnitute of knowing your life is about to change.
It was a wonderful chapter, and I'm glad to read that the next chapter is already written. Well done!
Hah! I knew you were going to do the cliffie thing. How could you resist?
Cheers, GryffKat
Looking forward to seeing the whole of the encounter in the next chapter. :)
Well, remain ducked then untill I see the next chapter! A week is too long!
I like how you depicted both Hermione and Severus' nervousness. However, the cliffie is definitely evil. Though I know that they both recognized each other, I still don't know how that is going to affect the date. Will they still be willing to get to know each other, or will they just set their backs up? Please post the next chapter soon!
EVIL, EVIL, EVIL, EVIL! A really evil cliffie but a wonderful story.
More please and very soon?
Blessings
Amethystique xxx
I hope you mean the next chapter will be up by the end of the day, not a whole week. That was pure evil! The build-up was bad enough (in a good, well-written way...), but to leave it there?!?!?! Oh, my. Great story, and I really, REALLY can't wait for the next chapter!
Absolutely wonderful! I love how you really built up to the meeting at the end... but now I am dying for the next chapter!
That was one of the most ebil cliffies I have ever experienced. My jaw is still on the ground! C'mon, give us more! We want more.
*grumbles* I should give you 1/2 star for that ebil ending, But no... it was so well-done that I cna't help but you give you mad props!
A clifff!! ooh you´re evilll!
*ahem*
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
*grin* I do the same thing to my readers.