New Chapter for Freaky Friday
Freaky Friday
debjunk31 Reviews | 4.03/10 (31 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )
A potions accident makes Severus and Hermione switch bodies. How will they react as each other? Will they finally admit their feelings for one another? A short story in two chapters.
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I am a classically trained singer with three children. I love Star Trek and have watched probably every episode of every series. Favorite HP charaters are Snape and McGonagall. (not as a couple.)
Reviews for Freaky Friday
This was lots of fun to read before starting my shift at work -- thank you for sharing! I love how they one-upped each other teaching/teasing each other. ;)
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
I'm a big teaser myself, so I had fun making them tease each other.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
I'm a big teaser myself, so I had fun making them tease each other.
Hermione's no pushover - she definitely gives as good as she gets. This was ADORABLE! I especially love their inked in messages. :)Great story, Deb!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
! It seems these two needed it spelled out for them!
Response from christev (Reviewer)
LOL - if only things could be that plainly spelled out in real-life relationships! :-)
I feel bad that Hermione was crying, especially since I was laughing out loud at the idea of Snape acting so crazy! This is hilarious! :D
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
LOL, yes, it was comical from our pov, wasn't it? She'll get over it.
Again with the tattoos! Are they permanent? lol The ending is sweet and the witty banter entertaining throughout.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
I believe they're temporary. A small side effect of the potion. I'm glad you enjoyed this. It was really fun to write.
oh my goodness, the possible tattoo ideas had me ROTFL!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
I'm glad you liked the tattoos. They're fun.
i really enjoyed this. it was fun to watch them having conflicts with each other ... as each other. very amusing concept and well executed. :D
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! It was fun to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was just hoping to make people chuckle. Well, and then go ahh at the end, of course.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! It was fun to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was just hoping to make people chuckle. Well, and then go ahh at the end, of course.
ROFL Severus' face in the morning after must have been so funny. I can't get that image off of my head. And what's more important I don't want to. ;)
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
It would have been fun to have a little hidden camera following Severus that morning. Sometimes it's nice to have something funny twirling around in your head.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
It would have been fun to have a little hidden camera following Severus that morning. Sometimes it's nice to have something funny twirling around in your head.
It was cute, brief and a bit on the simplistic side. Keep writing and I know you will improve.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol, I wanted it cute, brief, and on the simplistic side! It was supposed to be a oneshot that just grew too big. ;) I really don't think that this plot left much room for flowery imagery or angsty sadness. I do know I could be more descriptive in my writing, though, and hope to improve with more writing. This was actually my first attempt at a humorous story. I like trying new genres. This is quite the antithesis of my other story, Time's Treaseure. But I do so enjoy the quick reads, that I had to do one for myself. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol, I wanted it cute, brief, and on the simplistic side! It was supposed to be a oneshot that just grew too big. ;) I really don't think that this plot left much room for flowery imagery or angsty sadness. I do know I could be more descriptive in my writing, though, and hope to improve with more writing. This was actually my first attempt at a humorous story. I like trying new genres. This is quite the antithesis of my other story, Time's Treaseure. But I do so enjoy the quick reads, that I had to do one for myself. Thanks for reviewing.
The mental picture of Severus with his hair plaited in multicolored cornrows was too funny! I loved it.This entire short story was totally fun and very sweet.Beth
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thank you so much. I think everyone loved his hair except Severus himself. We were all like the students laughing at him in the hall.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thank you so much. I think everyone loved his hair except Severus himself. We were all like the students laughing at him in the hall.
I have so enjoyed this first chapter! When I read this from Severus, I laughed out loud!“Unless you want a tattoo on your rear end that says ‘Severus Forever’, I think you should drop your tone and your ideas,” Severus spat at her.Brilliant!Beth
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! Little did he know at the time how much she would have liked that! Lol. Of course, it's not too late for her to get one.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! Little did he know at the time how much she would have liked that! Lol. Of course, it's not too late for her to get one.
Awwwwwww....just...awwwwwww! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol. Thanks. All's well that ends well.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol. Thanks. All's well that ends well.
Aww so sweet. I liked it! I would have thought that any man couldn't resist temptation when stuck in a woman's body, but Severus is an impervious man!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol. He's very respectful. I'm sure his dreams weren't quite as chaste.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Lol. He's very respectful. I'm sure his dreams weren't quite as chaste.
So clever! I nearly couldn't breathe when Severus' hair went stripped!! Brilliant!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! It seems that his hair was a big hit. You go, Hermione! Put that dork in his place.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! It seems that his hair was a big hit. You go, Hermione! Put that dork in his place.
Aaaugh, waaaay too short! Write more!~Lotm
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Sorry! They told me they wanted to be left alone and that we'd had enough voyeuristic fun. Thanks, though. I'm glad it left you wanting more.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Sorry! They told me they wanted to be left alone and that we'd had enough voyeuristic fun. Thanks, though. I'm glad it left you wanting more.
LOVE Sev's hair! :)
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Yeah, I'd actually like to see a real picture of that!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Yeah, I'd actually like to see a real picture of that!
loved it! don't make us wait too long for the rest!!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! That makes me happy. I'm putting the end up into the queue tonight.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! That makes me happy. I'm putting the end up into the queue tonight.
This is very good so far, I do hope more is coming soon:)
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! The end sould be posted soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! The end sould be posted soon. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
At first it was hilarious. Then Severus went too far. I now hope for the happy end.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Severus has a way of doing that sometimes, doesn't he. Let's hope he has the guts to make it right.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Severus has a way of doing that sometimes, doesn't he. Let's hope he has the guts to make it right.
Cute! A nice neat wrap-up!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
I liked the 'you are my favorite person' comment. It says so much, but is not a "normal" way of saying I love you.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Severus' isn't quite normal in his display of emotions, is he? Thanks!
Very cute!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Aw, thanks.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Aw, thanks.
Oh I can't wait to see the other shoe drop!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Dropped shoes, unrequited love, you name it, we'll see it.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Dropped shoes, unrequited love, you name it, we'll see it.
Oh dear, that was a series of very low blows... I hope they will manage to get this straight.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Severus is being a jerk, but he has his reasons. Even if they're rediculous, they're his reasons.
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
Severus is being a jerk, but he has his reasons. Even if they're rediculous, they're his reasons.
Well, so cute. At first... until they started the war.hahahahah...Very interested to see where this is going. And they might possibly learn a lot from being in each others bodies!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
They might. Hopefully the war will have a cease fire long enough for them to straighten out everything!
Response from debjunk (Author of Freaky Friday)
They might. Hopefully the war will have a cease fire long enough for them to straighten out everything!
Anonymous
great story. i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was quite fun to write.