New Chapter for Hermione &amp; Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.

Nocturnus, I think this chapter brings the whole effect of the story together ... with the different fonts, sizes, and colors, I feel as though I am leafing through a sheaf which holds various notes, documents, mementos, etc. Splendid!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, I wanted to present "facts" and leave the reader to get to conclussions. Hope it works

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, I wanted to present "facts" and leave the reader to get to conclussions. Hope it works

10/10

Just a glimpse at the beginning of life, one that the girl will never know as she grows into adulthood, but one which will undoubtedly affect her life.

10/10

This is a wonderfully unique idea. To have a collection of writings, letters, transcriptions at our disposal, all bringing into question "Are Hermione and Severus real or fanfiction". I love it, and I look forward to reading through the collection.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

It would never been possible without your help and hard work.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

It would never been possible without your help and hard work.

9/10

reets67

Great characterisations as ever - but please a larger size for the script otherwise I will need to borrow Trelawny's glasses! Cheers

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Hahaha. Sorry, I'm not good at html codes. I'll try to fix it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Hahaha. Sorry, I'm not good at html codes. I'll try to fix it.

0/10

She should have hexed Ron anyway.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh Poor Ron, I quite like it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh Poor Ron, I quite like it.

10/10

Even after just a first chapter I think I can tell I will love this greatly.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, you make me really happy with your comment. I hope you like the rest.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, you make me really happy with your comment. I hope you like the rest.

10/10

OMG I knew it. I already love it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Hope you like the next chapter too.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Hope you like the next chapter too.

0/10

Who would have thought Severus would carry around two tarot cards all his life! I like the poignant symbols they become to him.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I always thought Severus was in need of something or someone to hold. Hope and strenght could be a good leiv motif.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I always thought Severus was in need of something or someone to hold. Hope and strenght could be a good leiv motif.

10/10

I feel sad for the little boy he was. But very glad to finally hear more about what Severus had become after the war. I'm a bit confused about something though. I checked in my own Marseille tarot and there is no La Toile arcane. The closest I found considering the description you made of the card and what it represents is L'Etoile (star). I’ve also checked the site you suggested and I believe it's very probably some typographical mishap. Sorry but I can be a bit (being realistic I would say a lot) perfectionist when it comes to French (and being one doesn’t help)

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

For further information you might want to consult this site (good translation of of French site)

http://tr.voila.fr/traduction_voila2.php

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks a lot, I will fix it right away

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

For further information you might want to consult this site (good translation of of French site)

http://tr.voila.fr/traduction_voila2.php

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks a lot, I will fix it right away

10/10

sinbad

Nice chapter, I loved the Tarot card story.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm particularly fond of that chapter.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm particularly fond of that chapter.

0/10

kimjo2

what a facinating story. i look forward to more. thanks so much

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm so happy you enjoy it. I'm struggling with the next chapter, Severus is not behaving well.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm so happy you enjoy it. I'm struggling with the next chapter, Severus is not behaving well.

0/10

Very interesting. His life ruled by two cards, that also saved him.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I like to think that the symbolism giving hope and strenght

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I like to think that the symbolism giving hope and strenght

10/10

sinbad

I can't help but wonder how Hermione and Severus would feel about all this...I am pleasantly surprised that I'm enjoying this style of writing. I'm starting to pick up how this story works. Very creative.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you enjoy it. It has been fun to write. Vol 1 will have this pattern, the rest will change, but is also a surprise.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you enjoy it. It has been fun to write. Vol 1 will have this pattern, the rest will change, but is also a surprise.

0/10

LOL nice collection!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Nod. Thanks.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Nod. Thanks.

0/10

Thanks for sharing Rickman's recitation. Is there nothing this man can't read well? Even his halting Spanish on the last phrase sounds seductive. I like Hermoine's interactions with Dean. They are quite funny.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like Rickman, even if I don't visualized Snape as him, I like to play with the idea.I want to portrait Hermione as a schollar but also as a young woman;her interaction with Dean shows her as that.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

10/10

This is getting even more mysterious. I wonder why she left the wizarding world.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

mmm, that would have to wait. muahaha

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

mmm, that would have to wait. muahaha

10/10

MystressXOXO

Really cool! I love any story that has writing within writing... or however you want to interpret it! Great job!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, Im trying to play a little with this texts. Im glad you like it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, Im trying to play a little with this texts. Im glad you like it.

10/10

Oooh ... and the plot thickens. Something is wrong with Hermione. And those segments she underlined in the final text make me shudder at what exactly it is, what caused it. I know it ties into why she's gone "Muggle". But I can't help but be a little suspicious as to why she was not reluctant to be Teddy's oddmother. Looking foward to more!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

You are right, death is an issue here. You´ll see.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

You are right, death is an issue here. You´ll see.

10/10

I understand completeky the reaction of the two women because I'm having the same. The image of Harry in batman pyjamas must be something. It's nice for a little boy but for a begging Harry... *shakes head and smile* I wonder if he will ever grow up.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I tend to think that part of him will allways try to compensated his non existant childhood.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I tend to think that part of him will allways try to compensated his non existant childhood.

0/10

Poor unwanted little girl

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks for commenting.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks for commenting.

0/10

Very realistic!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, I hope to mantain that sense of realism

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, I hope to mantain that sense of realism

0/10

Lol, wouldn't that be a hoot if people hundreds of years from now looked at fanfiction as fact. Too funny.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it.

0/10