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Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings. Chapter 3: Extracts from the life of Hermione Granger. Years 1999 - 2000
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Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.

1: Prelude

2: Guilt

3: Extracts from the life of Hermione Granger. Years 1999 - 2000

4: Odmum

5: Extracts from the life of Hermione Granger years 2004 - 2005

6: Gathering

7: Eros & Thanatos

8: La Force & L'Etoile

Extracts from the life of Hermione Granger. Years 1999 - 2000

Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.

Chapter 3 of 8

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A collection of original, diaries, letters, pensieve reminiscences and other documents drawn from various sources within the Special Collections Division, help us understand the attitudes, perspectives and feelings of this popular couple.

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Extracts from the life of Hermione Granger

I introduce a great friend of knowledge and a great supporter of liberty; a heroine of our cause, Hermione Jean Granger, to be presented the Order of Merlin First Class and Medal for Magical Merit.

Minerva McGonagall, head of the Order of the Phoenix to the Wizengamot.

18 September 1999

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Howler, from Hermione Granger to Ron Weasley

(Sometime during November 1999):

    CALL ME COW AGAIN, YOU TWIT, AND I'LL HEX YOUR BALLS OFF!

    PICK UP YOUR THINGS AT THE BURROW. DON'T YOU DARE GET NEAR ME.

***

Chat between dean_forest (dean_forest@hotmail.com) and Herm19 (herm19@aol.com)


    21:59

    dean_forest: Hi sweetie, everything ok?

    Herm19: You talk to Ron?

    dean_forest: Got me!

    Herm19: Don't ever try to pair us again up. That's over.

    dean_forest: I know, I'm not THAT brave.

    Herm19: ha, ha funny

    22:00

    dean_forest: He's making a habit of checking his crotch.

    Herm19: That was the idea

    dean_forest: You're evil, Hermione, you know that?

    Herm19: Muahaha: Voldemort incarnate

***

Mysterious Disappearance linked to UFO Abduction

Melbourne, December 23rd

A British couple, Wendell (45) and Monica (43) Wilkins, mysteriously disappeared from their downtown flat. Police investigators are working under the hypothesis of kidnapping, while the neighbors point out the mysterious circumstances surrounding their departure. José Fuentes, the caretaker, commented: "It's like they've vanished without a trace; the table was set for two. Everything is normal in there, as if the owners would come back at any minute." Meanwhile, local authorities ....

***

Letter from Hermione Granger to Harry Potter:

    ... I had been dead tired for weeks, months if I come to think of it. At first I thought of it as a coming flu, which never arrived, but there it was: the sore muscles, the fatigue, the need to sleep, and the permanent migraine. I have dealt well with it. I have to work harder these days to cast charms to my usual standards, but it was nothing I couldn't handle. Well, not until I arrived from Melbourne.

***

Chat between dean_forest (dean_forest@hotmail.com) and Herm19 (herm19@aol.com)


    12:01

    dean_forest: How are your parents adapting?

    12:02

    Herm19: You don't want to know.

    dean_forest: That bad?

    Herm19: We've had a serious and honest chat

    dean_forest: Eeeewww

    Herm19: aha, eeew indeed.

    12:03

    Herm19: They want me to live with them for a while

    dean_forest: Playing good muggle daughter?

    Herm19: More in the line of getting to know their only daughter

***

Excerpts from the Veterans Compensations Commission:

File: Granger, Hermione Jean

The Applicant's Medical Evidence

21. The medical evidence is not repeated here in full. However, some of the relevant medical evidence of the Applicant is as follows:

22. Mediwizard Oliver Faux, in a report dated 26 December 1999, noted that the applicant sustained pain and fatigue in muscles and tendons; charms stiffness; magical impairment; dysmenorrhea. On examination Med. Faux formed the impression of "well healing of the fractured tibial plateau and left radius and ulna injury consequence of multiple battlefield hexes". Med. Faux noted associated problems of post traumatic stress disorder, sleep disorder with associated panic and vocational issues. He concluded that he expected that the Applicant would be able to return to work in nonmagical duties in six weeks' time.

***

Chat between dean_forest (dean_forest@hotmail.com) and Herm19 (herm19@aol.com)


    23:33

    dean_forest: Are you coming to our New Year/Century party?

    23:34

    Herm19: Count me in! :)

    dean_forest: Ron will be there

    Herm19: We're friends again

    dean_forest: ??? Couple?

    23:35

    Herm19: nope; friends

    Herm19: That clown came to my parents' house in a mariachi's costume.

    Herm19: He woke half the neighborhood with this awful song about friendship and forgiveness. Ayaayay!

    23:35

    dean_forest: What a man must do in order to maintain his balls!

***

Printed paper at Hermione Granger's Desk

Sociology BSc http://www.city.ac.uk/

(underlines are made by Granger)

Sociology questions assumptions about the social world, showing that such things as the family, sex and gender relationships, and race are socially constructed rather than naturally given. Sociologists are also concerned with how power operates in society and the way social institutions advantage and disadvantage different groups of people (....) Throughout your three years, you will also benefit from the high level of research skills teaching available in the Department, culminating in an independent piece of work in the third year...

***

Notepad at the Granger's fridge; from Hermione Granger to Mark Granger:

    Daddy,

    Don't forget: Meet me at the mall at the eastern entry, on the green bench

    PS: there is meatloaf in the oven.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.

50 Reviews  |  5.36/10 Average

10/10

snitchette

How could she have lost her magic. She was the brightest witch of her age. And a Muggle born. All that is very mysterious. And what about those people who should be but are not dead...Also I'm glad to finally know about Snape. (I expect more in the next chapter because that was a bit short for my sanity ;)

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh, that's a mistery, death had stop

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh, that's a mistery, death had stop

0/10

cmwinters

The description of this bookstore is simply lovely.  Really poetic and gorgeous.Does the red of the door have any significance?

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like the bookstore description. It's a mix of my favorites ones.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like the bookstore description. It's a mix of my favorites ones.

0/10

debjunk

OH, don't stop there!!  I'll be expecting an update quite soon.  Anyhoo, I really love the way you make every entry different.  You do an especially great job in the reference quotes.  They truly seem as if they could be true references.  Hopefully, her chat with Severus will help us to know more of what ails her????  I'm not a patient woman. 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Next chapter should disclose a lot, the problem is that Severus is not coperating

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

And when, exactly, does Severus ever cooperate? 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Next chapter should disclose a lot, the problem is that Severus is not coperating

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

And when, exactly, does Severus ever cooperate? 

10/10

sinbad

No magic?  What caused that?  How nice to see Severus.  I'm hoping that by the time this story ends we will see everyone's magic return and a bit of romance.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Romance will come. Be patient. Severus POV is in the next chapter.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Romance will come. Be patient. Severus POV is in the next chapter.

0/10

pookah

very interesting.  the time jumps and POV changes are interesting, if a bit unsettling at times.  Over all this story is one I will come back to for more updates.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it. This story will unfold slowly very much like a mosaic. 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it. This story will unfold slowly very much like a mosaic. 

10/10

pookah

What a change from the delightful first chapter!  whoa!  i actuallyhad to look up at the top of the page and make sure i was reading the right story.  Very tragic and effective writing!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I apretiate you take the time to give me feedback. I'm a non native writter. My poor betas struggles with my grammar horrors. There will be more changes of POV's and styles. I hope this won't turn to be too confusing. 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I apretiate you take the time to give me feedback. I'm a non native writter. My poor betas struggles with my grammar horrors. There will be more changes of POV's and styles. I hope this won't turn to be too confusing. 

10/10

pookah

This is awfully funny and clever!  Thank you for sharing this tongue-in-cheek scholarship with us.  I look forward to your next chpter.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh, but this is serious. I have all the documantation at home, I find it in my grandama trunk. hehehe

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Oh, but this is serious. I have all the documantation at home, I find it in my grandama trunk. hehehe

10/10

notsosaintly

No deaths ... Hermione's vanished magic ... could it be connected?

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

mmmm. You'll see

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

mmmm. You'll see

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh wow!(So, not totally speechless, but pretty close.)

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Speechless good or speechless bad?.  Next chapter is on que, soon will be up.Thanks for comenting

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Speechless good or speechless bad?.  Next chapter is on que, soon will be up.Thanks for comenting

0/10

sunny33

No magic? Does anyone know why?

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Mmmm; it will unfold in two more chapters. 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Mmmm; it will unfold in two more chapters. 

10/10

snitchette

Your story is disturbing me. Last chapter she was making research about death and we know her twin brother died when coming to the world. And now she seems obsessed with death. I don't like the way she's feeling. I hope she won't do something stupid.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Don´t worry, she is obsessed with death but still safe. 

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Good to know. So it must be something related to Severus because we haven't heard from him yet despite the tittle...

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Don´t worry, she is obsessed with death but still safe. 

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Good to know. So it must be something related to Severus because we haven't heard from him yet despite the tittle...

10/10

sinbad

Nice change of pace.  I like the idea of writing a book.  I think it will help them all to heal.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback

0/10

sunny33

Is she obsessed with death, or are the rest of them avoiding it?

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

A little of both things I think

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

A little of both things I think

10/10

mizie

Wow. Sometimes wandering around different fan sites, one is lucky enough to find a gem.This is most definitely one of them. Great job, and please update soon!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, you make me blush.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, you make me blush.

0/10

debjunk

Hmm, it seems like Hermione's thoughts of death are running rampant. 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Yes, she tend to get carried away.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Yes, she tend to get carried away.

10/10

notsosaintly

The transformation from bossy Hermione to Hermione-of-the-song was most telling.  I am a bit worried about her, to tell you the truth.  What a sad and telling song ... and we didn't even need to hear the words to feel it.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. The song is a classic folk here in Chile. When  a baby died, country people organized a "little angel funeral", they dress the baby in white, the godmother saw wings for the baby. They set him in an altar with flowers and candles. The mother is forbiden to cry until the baby is buried, her tears could make it dificult to the baby to fly to heaven. During the ceremony woman recite and sang special songs which express the sorrow of the parents, the departing words of the baby and the hope that the angel will care for the family.I never been in one, since the are rare nowadays. But my mother in law was called to sing in those funeral when she  was a child.

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

My goodness.  I don't think I'd ever be able to sing for a funeral like that.  It just tears at my heart.  I'd be crying, even if I did not know the family.  How could a mother not cry?  I know the strength of the belief is so strong that she'd be able to do it.  But ... wow.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. The song is a classic folk here in Chile. When  a baby died, country people organized a "little angel funeral", they dress the baby in white, the godmother saw wings for the baby. They set him in an altar with flowers and candles. The mother is forbiden to cry until the baby is buried, her tears could make it dificult to the baby to fly to heaven. During the ceremony woman recite and sang special songs which express the sorrow of the parents, the departing words of the baby and the hope that the angel will care for the family.I never been in one, since the are rare nowadays. But my mother in law was called to sing in those funeral when she  was a child.

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

My goodness.  I don't think I'd ever be able to sing for a funeral like that.  It just tears at my heart.  I'd be crying, even if I did not know the family.  How could a mother not cry?  I know the strength of the belief is so strong that she'd be able to do it.  But ... wow.

9/10

sinbad

I read all four chapters and found this to be quite interesting.  I have so many questions which I hope further chapters will answer.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I´am thrilled to know you enjoy it. I visualized this fic as a mosaic, or a jigzaw puzzle, I will give the pieces but the reader will have to connect the dots. I hope it will work.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I´am thrilled to know you enjoy it. I visualized this fic as a mosaic, or a jigzaw puzzle, I will give the pieces but the reader will have to connect the dots. I hope it will work.

0/10

kimjo2

what a twisty and interesting start (except for chap 1)  thanks

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. It's good to have some feedback.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im glad you like it. It's good to have some feedback.

5/10

akasha2411

Ill keep an eye on this oneSounds promising, The intro was cool l(ike a  future sientific discussion of fanfic', funny idea)The guild chapter was a bit depri and I can't place it in the story jet . The bit's an' pieces afterwards are nicely done. I had to read it twice to get it, but I liked the different way of communication (howler, html, letter's etc)and this chapter... well it leave's a lot of questions. What happend with Hermiony? What's the time frame? When will Snape arrive in the story?It looks like your heading for a long story (20+ chapters) You sure have a lot of staring point's 4 chapters 4 pov's.One thing's for sure you got me curious so.. start updating! 

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm playing and having fun with this pieces of parchment, pensieves, and other documents. I hope at the end people could put the pieces of this jigsaw puzzle toghether. I apretiate you take your time to give me feedback, it helps me with my writing.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm playing and having fun with this pieces of parchment, pensieves, and other documents. I hope at the end people could put the pieces of this jigsaw puzzle toghether. I apretiate you take your time to give me feedback, it helps me with my writing.

0/10

sunny33

Love Harry's PJ's!

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it! I visualised Harry as the man without childhood, so I think he could use those sort of childish things. ;)

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you like it! I visualised Harry as the man without childhood, so I think he could use those sort of childish things. ;)

0/10

sunny33

Great presentation! Interesting snippets.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

This first volume will be snippets only, I think of this as a mosaic or jigsaw puzzle fic.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

This first volume will be snippets only, I think of this as a mosaic or jigsaw puzzle fic.

0/10

debjunk

Leave it to Harry to draw Hermione back to a world that she seems to have abandoned.  Good for him.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you see it that way, it was the idea I was trying to develop

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

I'm glad you see it that way, it was the idea I was trying to develop

10/10

notsosaintly

I can't wait to find out more about Hermione and why she isn't using magic anymore.  Hopefully something will be revealed in the collection telling us more.Thank you for this peek into Hermione's world.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

You'll have to wait for it.;)

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

You'll have to wait for it.;)

6/10

KC Clark

hummmmmm, very interesting. very interesting indeed. please update soon.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, the next chapter is on the run

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Thanks, the next chapter is on the run

10/10

snitchette

You must have had a hard time getting everything in the right colour, place, etc. Very great job. I particularly like the mail exchange between Hermione and Dean Forest.

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im not that good in htlm, but I try. Thanks for comenting

Response from nocturnus (Author of Hermione & Severus: The Letters and Other Writings.)

Im not that good in htlm, but I try. Thanks for comenting

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