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Potions Under Duress In an Alternate Universe
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In an Alternate Universe

1: The Tables are Turned

2: The Oath

3: A Little Prep

4: Talented and Smart

5: The Prince and the Villain

6: A Reckoning

In an Alternate Universe

Ms_Figg

49 Reviews   |   49 Ratings, 0 Likes, 46 Favorites )

Drama Angst Action/Adventure Horror Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 48,678 Words 6 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Lucius Malfoy

Young Severus moons over his snarky Potions mistress and admits to Harry and Ron he has a crush on Professor Granger. He decides to approach her. Too bad he doesn't know what he's doing.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: The Tables are Turned

Chapter 2: The Oath

Chapter 3: A Little Prep

Chapter 4: Talented and Smart

Chapter 5: The Prince and the Villain

Chapter 6: A Reckoning


About Ms_Figg

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Ms_Figg

Member Since 2006  |  9 Stories  |  Favorited by 152  |  15 Reviews Written  |  85 Review Responses

Young grandma of 6.5 with too much time on her hands, absolutely gah-gah over Severus Snape. Writes AU SS/HG SS/OFC usually all NC-17. Some really do like it hot after all ;)

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Reviews for In an Alternate Universe

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10/10

Duchess_Of_Arcadia

I'm hopping around waiting for a new chapter!! I can't wait, if betaing is the problem I'd be glad to beta for you :) I'm fairly quick & I only have one other person that I'm currently betaing for at the moment so I'd be very happy to help :)
xx

10/10

LoveFenrir

More!

10/10

hgelman

I know you have written someting sort of like this before.  But, never this involved or expaned upon.  This is great!  I really look forward to an update!

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

An update will be forthcoming as soon as my beta gets situated. :)  Glad you're enjoying the story. ***

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

An update will be forthcoming as soon as my beta gets situated. :)  Glad you're enjoying the story. ***

10/10

Duchess_Of_Arcadia

Yo, I love this story, its an excellent concept, but lets have an update shall we? :P I've been checking like every week since the last update:P This is my christmas wish:D
Happy new year!
xx

10/10

raksha890

This story is absolutely amazing! The plot is incredibly orginal, and you have done such a believable representation of the characters switching places.
 
I do really hope that you continue, it would be too much of a shame to leave it where it is!

0/10

kimjo2

what an absolutely superb story!  i love the way you've twisted the story arround and i can't wait for more!  thanks so much                                   keep writing!

10/10

severuslover

Great chapter! I hope this will help Hermione and Severus come closer. Wonderful writing. Can't wait for the next update!~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Nice chapter, horrible content, but that's how it's supposed to be. Anyway, wonderful job on the writing! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Very nice. I loved how Severus was so caring and passionate...great job! You're a wonderful writer.~Jen

10/10

severuslover

I absolutely loved this chapter, especially the confrontation between Hermione and Severus. You write their interactions very well and believeably. Great job!~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Wonderful chapter, especially the end...that was quite funny. Can't wait to read about their night!~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Very nice and long intro chapter. I love the role reversal idea...great job! It feels so weird to read Harry and Ron dissing on Hermione, but oddly funny too. Can't wait to read on!~Jen

0/10

Maggie

I'm glad you didn't write out the Lucius scene.

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

WARNING! SPOILER!

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

: This is a bit of a spoiler, but there is going to be a recounting of what happened, in a very clinical, observational sense in the next chapter.  No explicit sexual details, or glorification but the violence Hermione suffered at Lucius' hands.  It is ugly, but necessary to the storyline.

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

WARNING! SPOILER!

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

: This is a bit of a spoiler, but there is going to be a recounting of what happened, in a very clinical, observational sense in the next chapter.  No explicit sexual details, or glorification but the violence Hermione suffered at Lucius' hands.  It is ugly, but necessary to the storyline.

10/10

mia madwyn

I've been raving about your AU plots for months and am thrilled that you're getting this one in front of a new audience! Once it's complete here, maybe you can bring TURN and LOOKING GLASS over, too?

Great job (and congrats on the new angel in your family, Trinity Rose)!

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

Thanks Mia.  Trinity is an angel. :) Well, most of the time. I'm glad I'm able to post here at TPP, thanks to my beta and I like to think, friend, NotSoSaintly.  I'd love to bring over other stories, but they're soooo long and need a lot of work to meet the standards here.  I don't want NSS to overdo it.  I appreciate her help but don't want to put too much demand on her. She's a busy lady.  Thank you for always being so supportive, girl.  It means a lot. ***

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

Thanks Mia.  Trinity is an angel. :) Well, most of the time. I'm glad I'm able to post here at TPP, thanks to my beta and I like to think, friend, NotSoSaintly.  I'd love to bring over other stories, but they're soooo long and need a lot of work to meet the standards here.  I don't want NSS to overdo it.  I appreciate her help but don't want to put too much demand on her. She's a busy lady.  Thank you for always being so supportive, girl.  It means a lot. ***

10/10

decmeadow

Wow!  This has certainly gotten so much better with this one chapter!  I think you captured the horror of the situation extremely well.  And I absolutely love how Severus is so careful and protective.

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

Thank you.  You know, as much as I love light-hearted naughtiness and lemons, there has to be some drama, some excitement and some conflict to make a story interesting and entertaining.  I tried to include that.  By story's end, maybe I'll have succeeded. :)

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

Thank you.  You know, as much as I love light-hearted naughtiness and lemons, there has to be some drama, some excitement and some conflict to make a story interesting and entertaining.  I tried to include that.  By story's end, maybe I'll have succeeded. :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Really shocked at the turn of events, but in a good way. Excellent evil w/ Malfoy Sr. As always, I love the love-sick, teen Snape!

0/10

dressagegrrrl

This is excellent!  I was a little unsure at first, thinking the set up of switching Severus and Hermione might come off as a little gimmicky.  But you've started a truly excellent fic, here.  I'm adding it to my faves.  ;)

10/10

braye27

This is fun!  I'd never thought of this plot, but you have nailed it in spades!Beth

10/10

notsosaintly

I have to pop in here, since I was the beta.  I have to tell you that at first, when I started to read, I was wondering how you were going to pull this off.  At the beginning, my mind didn't want to change gears and see Hermione as the older professor (and Slytherin) and Severus as the student (and a Gryffindor—he's going to torture you for tha, you know).  But I settled pretty quick, and I have to say that you make this alternate reality believable, as if it was there all along.  And then I was hooked.  I do love AU when it is done right.  Bravo!

10/10

notsosaintly

What a first time.  I only wish boys were that attentive and knowledgeable their first time ... heck, I wish that a certain man still sleeping next to me was that knowledgeable. *hmph*

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

lol. Sev's a special case, being a knowledge hound.  It makes sense to me that as a know-it-all he'd want to read up about sex all he could so he could "do it" correctly when the time came. lolol.  He wasn't perfect, but he was soooo willing.  Enthusiam counts quite a bit. ;)

Response from Ms_Figg (Author of In an Alternate Universe)

lol. Sev's a special case, being a knowledge hound.  It makes sense to me that as a know-it-all he'd want to read up about sex all he could so he could "do it" correctly when the time came. lolol.  He wasn't perfect, but he was soooo willing.  Enthusiam counts quite a bit. ;)

10/10

blue artemis

That was cool.  

10/10

decmeadow

You're not kidding with Snape playing with fire!  Woo, I thought I he was in the fire with the book, but... He might as well be trying to walk on the sun! lol

10/10

braye27

This is so unique.  At first I thought "what can she be going to do with this?"  The more I read, the more I liked!!!  Well done!Beth

10/10

blue artemis

I can honestly say I've never read a version like this.  I know you have this complete elsewhere, and I may head off there, but I will probably read it here.

10/10

decmeadow

Haha, I love it!  More please!

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