just started reading your story.  update please!! it's awesome! 

Is there anything about a tall, dark Ptions Master is in the personnals? That should provide more than very interesting reading material in the future. I'm already impatient to read next chapter.

And the fun begins... I was wondering when  we would meet our two wonderfully sexy wizards *grin* Here is the first one.

Trust Lucius to find a way he could gain from helping Hermione! :)

Malfoy behaved as if he was dropping hints. Was he messing with her mind or truly giving her clues?

Interesting! Can't wait to see where you go with it! Update soon!

It seems that Lucius has some information on Severus that others don't...

Oh dear, Lucius let it slip about Severus.  I wonder how long it will be before Hermione figures it out.

You have my interest.

wow - interesting premise - really looking forward to seeing where you take this - keep up the good work

Ooh, you go Hermione. Delancey worries me, that arrogant git. And Lupa? *Snickers* Thats the name of my fox terrier!

Is Lupa the culprit, or is she just a red herring? :)

Stephen is nice. How did he end up in that department? :)

I really like your original characters, they're so colorful! ^_^ I can't wait to see what Lucius will say when she asks him for help.

I think Severus needs to make an appearance and teach her about spying... and anything else she needs to know.

Now what if this Delancey person is the big killer (like firemen who set everything on fire to justify their usefulness)?

This seems really interesting! I can't wait to find out more about the murders and read more of the story! Please post more soon!~Katie

Recently I've lacked to read as much as I liked so I saved this for later. What a shame on me. This is promising great adventures and probably even more if the warning are to be believed. Hope for more soon.

OK,you already made Delancy a untrustworthy character.  What's his problem with Hermione?  Why was Hermione so rude to her boss?  Lots of questions and a good beginning to the story.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Fab Start!  I love the idea of Delancey in his camouflage robes; what a knob! There is always one in every office! I hope he gets knocked down a peg or two.  

I love your characterization of Delancey.  I'm reading a book right now that seems to intensify this character, so I'm getting an extra kick out of him.  I am really looking forward to future chapters.

So far this is really interesting.  I like the addition of the Omega office and the tension between Delancey and... well everyone else. 

Planning on submitting more?  I hope so.

UPDATE!!!  Please!!

*Poke*
you alive?
the story is beginning really interesting. That massmurdercase sounds really promising for a plot.
But when do malfoy and snape come into the picture?
When do you plan to continue? Please do so soon!